Defender of Space: Code: DEOXYS

Tedd

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    Hi people this is my first Pokemon Sprite comic so I hope you guy will like it.

    I'm still not sure if I should make it into seasons. I will decide that later.

    Chapter 1: Bothersome people
    https://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS1.png

    Chapter 2: The Purple Jewel
    https://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS2.png

    Chapter 3: Hosting
    https://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS3.png

    Chapter 4: A Place to Stay
    https://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS4.png
     
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    Cool Comic. I can;t see any mistakes. I'm afraid i don't have any Critisizm.
     
    This looks good, and I have some criticism: Make some more!
     
    Try to connect the speech bubbles to the characters, so you don´t have to put the names. Also, I like very much the main character´s attitude, it remembers me mine
     
    I will try to make some more tomorrow. Brother is using the computer I used to make this comic.

    EDIT:
    Blaze Dragon said:
    Try to connect the speech bubbles to the characters, so you don´t have to put the names. Also, I like very much the main character´s attitude, it remembers me mine
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    If I connect them it show less of the background. I want to show the background as much as possible.

    EDIT: New update!
     
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    Wow, tedd, I like how the plot is going. Oh and when you do a comic panel, please put some boarder's if you can.
     
    Wow it's good so far yea maybe it is better if you attach the speech bubbles it makes it more easier for everyone ^^

    altarialover :t334:
     
    Phoenix Flygon said:
    Wow, tedd, I like how the plot is going. Oh and when you do a comic panel, please put some boarder's if you can.
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    Yeah I'll put some boarders around.


    altarialover said:
    Wow it's good so far yea maybe it is better if you attach the speech bubbles it makes it more easier for everyone ^^

    altarialover :t334:
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    Hm...I'm not sure still. I used those speech bubbles because they went with the game. I could still put it in.
     
    Tedd, just do what you think is good for the comic, so just follow your instincs oh and a tip, put some borders on the sides of the panel's so they can look more sensible.
     
    Pretty good so far....

    I want to see what happens when Deoxys controls her body..... or has he already.

    Well does she turn evil or what?
     
    Hi guys! Sorry for the long update. The Number one Problem right now is that I lost all the sprites that was going into this comic. So you'll have to wait a little longer until I can make those sprites again. Sorry..
     
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