Daydream
[b]Boo.[/b]
- 699
- Posts
- 15
- Years
- Age 31
- That thar Kingdom. The United one.
- Seen Jul 2, 2020
Please note, that's a working title.
I finally made myself post this story! I was reluctant because, well, I usually leave things I've written unfinished for eons. But I have a good feeling about this one. Although, if I do seem to have left it a while before a new chapter (and you like the story, of course) feel free to give me a prod, I'll find it encouraging.
The idea behind it is, it's sort of alternate universe, one more close to our own with a more realistic approach to the events that take place. So at points it is possible I could stray from canon, but hopefully I'll have a good reason for that (or I might not and you can scream and shout at me).
Anyways, enjoy! (Prologue is also posted due to the shortness of it).
Blood, sweat, grime. It covered his hands. The small yellow form ahead of him was now collapsed, prostrate on the ground.
Tears streaked down the man's face as he raised a hand to the reptilian head and slapped it hard once. Nothing. Quivering, he did it again. Nothing.
"Got. To. Run."
He heaved the body over his shoulder, shakes racking his already weakened body. He began once again to wearily pound through the dark tunnel. We're near the exit now. We have to be.
CRACK! The buttress supporting the sloping tunnel's roof was broken. High-pitched feminine laughter echoed around them.
Rubble blocked the way ahead.
Slobbering rasps of distorted canine mouths grew in volume behind them.
Enemies blocked the way behind.
The man fell. The small reptilian creature's eyes flickered back into recognition. The man cried, pulling the creature, his friend , into his chest.
"I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I've failed you. Failed everyone," he faltered, voice cracking, "But I won't let them get to you. I can't."
Removing the device on his neck, he tied it to the being ahead of him and pressed a sequence of buttons.
"Sorry."
"EMERGENCY TRANS-WORLD TELEPORT ACTIVATED."
It's yellow eyes went wide and met the man's own.
"I love you, Cawl."
It's body shone bright blue and dissipated gradually into the air.
"Touching." A mock applause, "But who will fight us now? You were their hero, fighting bravely to vanquish the evil. A true knight in fact. The martyr bearing the hearts of many on his shoulders. Hearts that will now be scattered at our feet. Hearts that will remain forever trapped in our thrall. Know this noble hero, as you die."
"Maaaaaaaaaam," came the voice, "Where's my camera? And my iPod! I have to have my iPod!"
"Check your hand-luggage, Aston," the boy's mother replied.
Aston Hart's slim form appeared at the top of the stairs. His mother couldn't help but think that, dress that way twenty-odd years ago and you'd never be taken seriously. But times had changed, and kids today were more free and individual in the way they designed themselves. Aston himself went for a casual, yet stylish, look. His hair was a chestnut brown, straightened, his fringe swooping over his hazel-brown right eye. He wore a flamboyant pink t-shirt with dark jeans and accessorised with a pink and black "gangsta" style scarf and grey shoulder bag slung over his left shoulder and lying on his right hip.
"Uncle Jack's put your suitcase in the car and he's ready to take you to the airport," Aston hopped down the stairs and gave his mother a hug, she stifled a sob, "Enjoy Italy, son. Be careful." She kissed him softly on the forehead before sending him out to the car with his Uncle.
Aston's school had organised a two-week trip to Italy as a kind-of well done on completing your exams treat. It would also be the last time he and his friends were together as a whole group, Aston and his friends were sixteen and this meant everyone was going off to do different things now that they'd finished compulsory education. Aston himself was going to a sixth form college (separate from his school) to study for his A levels. He was saddened at the thought that only one of his friends had also taken this option, they were a close group and Aston was fiercely loyal to them all.
"AASSTTOOONNN!" Screamed his chorus of female friends. The three girls surrounded him, fussing over his hair and clothes in a good-natured fashion.
Aston laughed and tried to placate the girls with hugs and kisses but they had none of it, "Laura, Maria, Carly, pull your claws in, Ash can't get past you." Aston's boyfriend wavered hesitantly at the small, high-pitched throng that surrounded his partner, "Girls." The three turned around whilst giggling and dissipated back into the crowd. Ash stepped forward; his strong arms immediately circling Aston's waist.
The two had been together almost a year now, after jointly coming out to their peers at the beginning of the school year, they'd formed a strong bond being both a couple and close friends. Despite the general negative attitude to homosexuality in the area which they lived, Aston and Ashley hadn't found it hard adapting to people knowing; hardly anyone seemed too bothered by it and they'd been free to be as they wanted.
The two boys kissed once, tenderly, before Ash spoke, "C'mon then. We've still got boarding passes to get before we get on the plane," he paused as Aston kissed him softly once more "And Mrs. Teller wants to do a headcount at least once before then," he added with a grin.
Aston laughed knowingly and the two headed off to join the rest of the group; who were now crowding around an overly perky middle-aged woman and a bored-looking young man who appeared to be in his twenties.
"Is everyone partnered up?" Mrs. Teller called shrilly, "Don't lose sight of your partner! And Try to stick with the group! That includes you Sam Herford! Now lets walk in double file and collect our boarding passes! Keep your partner close!"
"I will," Ash commented quietly, pulling the smaller Aston closely to his side and giving him a quick wink.
"Mrs Teller, I'm sure a group of sixteen year olds can manoeuvre safely through an airport," the younger man remarked, "Everyone go and get your boarding passes at be at the gate no later than half eleven."
The older woman became flustered and began ranting at how dangerous the airport could possibly be. The students laughed and commented how awesome it was to have a teacher like Mr. Hatton.
Sunset gently flowed through the windows of an aging coach that rattled through the Italian countryside. Twenty-four tired English teenagers were quietly taking in the beautiful surroundings. To them it could have been worlds away. The tranquil sleepy atmosphere that had taken hold of the bus was mirrored in the surrounding area. The lazy vineyards barely even rustling in the breeze. Occasional streams trickling past without a care.
Maria Vittorio sighed. Her grandfather, and now her father, had owned a vineyard when she had lived in Italy. Seven years ago Maria's mother and father had split up. Her mother was British and had moved back home, with Maria. This hadn't been a problem at first; Maria spoke fluent Italian and English and was generally quite sociable and friendly. But she began missing Italy and the life she'd had there, with her whole family. Her brother had stayed in Italy with her father and they only saw each other every other Christmas. Maria had managed to adapt, and her friends kept her cheerful but there was that always that pang of longing simmering underneath the surface.
The Scottish blonde beside her snorted in a loud, pig-like fashion and Maria was shaken out of her thoughts with a hearty giggle. This was echoed by a few of the seats surrounding her.
The raven haired girl the seat ahead of Maria peered dozedly over, "Carly, you always do that just as someone else is about to get to sleep."
Carly grumbled and turned to face the aisle.
The girl glared evilly over her seat, "I swear, I'm going to buy corks to shove up her nostrils. There is no way I'm putting up with that for two weeks."
"We tried that on the France trip two years ago, remember Laura?" Maria laughed, " She just snorted them back out again."
Laura yawned, "I could glue them there this time."
Maria chuckled, Laura's dry humour and well-timed witty remarks were what made her so funny. Hardly a day could go by without her giving a sarcastic one-liner; sending the group reeling into fits of laughter.
She settled down into her seat, brushing a long strand of dark brown hair, out of one eye and watched the comfortably familiar landscape trundle past. Rather than dwelling on the life she missed, she concentrated on the holiday she was going to have with her friends, focusing on the good times ahead. Pushing the distressful thoughts to the back of her mind, Maria was able to feel more contented in herself and rested her eyes to join the almost magical stupor the rest of her classmates had fallen into.
***
Carly grunted as she received a forceful shove on the side.
"C'mon sleeping beauty we're here, and I'd quite like to get off the bus."
Carly stretched and yawned, "Give a lassie time to wake up, would you? Not all of us have as much energy as you do. "
The assorted teens bustled off the coach together and into the warm, Italian night air. Carly yawned profusely as she walked along, not taking in much of her surroundings. She was only vaguely aware of the buildings that passed by as they pulled and dragged suitcases towards the hotel; a flash of a pool here and there, vines lazily crawling up a trellised archway but nothing more coherent than that. And she was sure that no one else was either. It had been a long journey.
She took little notice upon entering the hotel too; ambling along at a sluggish pace, guided by her friends, to their allotted room. It was fair sized: en suite facilities; one single bed and two bunks; a built in wardrobe; a small bedside table with a cabinet for storage and a beige coloured lamp resting atop it.
Carly was quick to claim the single bed and ,after changing, lay down on it, "Comfy, I could get used to this," she muttered.
Maria and Laura were far more animated after the long period of rest and engaged excited conversation, "How much freedom do you think we'll get? Think they'll let us out in the town by ourselves? It's not that big really."
With a snort Laura retorted, "Oh yeah, and Mrs Teller will do the Macarena while ripping up room allocation lists!"
The three chuckled, before Maria replied, "Mr. Hatton might make a compromise with her."
"Maybe. I can't wait for the beach, whatever happens. We can play volleyball. And Aston can sunbathe because-"
" 'You know girls, I don't do sport,' " they chorused like a line from a play, rolling into fits of laughter.
"GIRLS!" Came a shrill shout echoing up the corridor, "LIGHTS OUT! NOW!"
"Just going Mrs. Teller," Laura called back in sarcastic, honeyed tones.
Attempting to suppress giggles the two girls changed and got into bed. Muted whispers passed between the girls , excitedly planning what they could do while they were here. Restaurants, maybe the local disco, maybe they could get something exotic done with their hair? The conversation continued until broken by a loud, pig-like snort.
"I think that's goodnight then, Maria."
There you have it, so tell me what you think, constructive criticism is not only welcomed, but encouraged. And thanks for reading!
I finally made myself post this story! I was reluctant because, well, I usually leave things I've written unfinished for eons. But I have a good feeling about this one. Although, if I do seem to have left it a while before a new chapter (and you like the story, of course) feel free to give me a prod, I'll find it encouraging.
The idea behind it is, it's sort of alternate universe, one more close to our own with a more realistic approach to the events that take place. So at points it is possible I could stray from canon, but hopefully I'll have a good reason for that (or I might not and you can scream and shout at me).
Anyways, enjoy! (Prologue is also posted due to the shortness of it).
---
Prologue
Prologue
Blood, sweat, grime. It covered his hands. The small yellow form ahead of him was now collapsed, prostrate on the ground.
Tears streaked down the man's face as he raised a hand to the reptilian head and slapped it hard once. Nothing. Quivering, he did it again. Nothing.
"Got. To. Run."
He heaved the body over his shoulder, shakes racking his already weakened body. He began once again to wearily pound through the dark tunnel. We're near the exit now. We have to be.
CRACK! The buttress supporting the sloping tunnel's roof was broken. High-pitched feminine laughter echoed around them.
Rubble blocked the way ahead.
Slobbering rasps of distorted canine mouths grew in volume behind them.
Enemies blocked the way behind.
The man fell. The small reptilian creature's eyes flickered back into recognition. The man cried, pulling the creature, his friend , into his chest.
"I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I've failed you. Failed everyone," he faltered, voice cracking, "But I won't let them get to you. I can't."
Removing the device on his neck, he tied it to the being ahead of him and pressed a sequence of buttons.
"Sorry."
"EMERGENCY TRANS-WORLD TELEPORT ACTIVATED."
It's yellow eyes went wide and met the man's own.
"I love you, Cawl."
It's body shone bright blue and dissipated gradually into the air.
"Touching." A mock applause, "But who will fight us now? You were their hero, fighting bravely to vanquish the evil. A true knight in fact. The martyr bearing the hearts of many on his shoulders. Hearts that will now be scattered at our feet. Hearts that will remain forever trapped in our thrall. Know this noble hero, as you die."
Chapter 1
"Maaaaaaaaaam," came the voice, "Where's my camera? And my iPod! I have to have my iPod!"
"Check your hand-luggage, Aston," the boy's mother replied.
Aston Hart's slim form appeared at the top of the stairs. His mother couldn't help but think that, dress that way twenty-odd years ago and you'd never be taken seriously. But times had changed, and kids today were more free and individual in the way they designed themselves. Aston himself went for a casual, yet stylish, look. His hair was a chestnut brown, straightened, his fringe swooping over his hazel-brown right eye. He wore a flamboyant pink t-shirt with dark jeans and accessorised with a pink and black "gangsta" style scarf and grey shoulder bag slung over his left shoulder and lying on his right hip.
"Uncle Jack's put your suitcase in the car and he's ready to take you to the airport," Aston hopped down the stairs and gave his mother a hug, she stifled a sob, "Enjoy Italy, son. Be careful." She kissed him softly on the forehead before sending him out to the car with his Uncle.
Aston's school had organised a two-week trip to Italy as a kind-of well done on completing your exams treat. It would also be the last time he and his friends were together as a whole group, Aston and his friends were sixteen and this meant everyone was going off to do different things now that they'd finished compulsory education. Aston himself was going to a sixth form college (separate from his school) to study for his A levels. He was saddened at the thought that only one of his friends had also taken this option, they were a close group and Aston was fiercely loyal to them all.
***
"AASSTTOOONNN!" Screamed his chorus of female friends. The three girls surrounded him, fussing over his hair and clothes in a good-natured fashion.
Aston laughed and tried to placate the girls with hugs and kisses but they had none of it, "Laura, Maria, Carly, pull your claws in, Ash can't get past you." Aston's boyfriend wavered hesitantly at the small, high-pitched throng that surrounded his partner, "Girls." The three turned around whilst giggling and dissipated back into the crowd. Ash stepped forward; his strong arms immediately circling Aston's waist.
The two had been together almost a year now, after jointly coming out to their peers at the beginning of the school year, they'd formed a strong bond being both a couple and close friends. Despite the general negative attitude to homosexuality in the area which they lived, Aston and Ashley hadn't found it hard adapting to people knowing; hardly anyone seemed too bothered by it and they'd been free to be as they wanted.
The two boys kissed once, tenderly, before Ash spoke, "C'mon then. We've still got boarding passes to get before we get on the plane," he paused as Aston kissed him softly once more "And Mrs. Teller wants to do a headcount at least once before then," he added with a grin.
Aston laughed knowingly and the two headed off to join the rest of the group; who were now crowding around an overly perky middle-aged woman and a bored-looking young man who appeared to be in his twenties.
"Is everyone partnered up?" Mrs. Teller called shrilly, "Don't lose sight of your partner! And Try to stick with the group! That includes you Sam Herford! Now lets walk in double file and collect our boarding passes! Keep your partner close!"
"I will," Ash commented quietly, pulling the smaller Aston closely to his side and giving him a quick wink.
"Mrs Teller, I'm sure a group of sixteen year olds can manoeuvre safely through an airport," the younger man remarked, "Everyone go and get your boarding passes at be at the gate no later than half eleven."
The older woman became flustered and began ranting at how dangerous the airport could possibly be. The students laughed and commented how awesome it was to have a teacher like Mr. Hatton.
***
Sunset gently flowed through the windows of an aging coach that rattled through the Italian countryside. Twenty-four tired English teenagers were quietly taking in the beautiful surroundings. To them it could have been worlds away. The tranquil sleepy atmosphere that had taken hold of the bus was mirrored in the surrounding area. The lazy vineyards barely even rustling in the breeze. Occasional streams trickling past without a care.
Maria Vittorio sighed. Her grandfather, and now her father, had owned a vineyard when she had lived in Italy. Seven years ago Maria's mother and father had split up. Her mother was British and had moved back home, with Maria. This hadn't been a problem at first; Maria spoke fluent Italian and English and was generally quite sociable and friendly. But she began missing Italy and the life she'd had there, with her whole family. Her brother had stayed in Italy with her father and they only saw each other every other Christmas. Maria had managed to adapt, and her friends kept her cheerful but there was that always that pang of longing simmering underneath the surface.
The Scottish blonde beside her snorted in a loud, pig-like fashion and Maria was shaken out of her thoughts with a hearty giggle. This was echoed by a few of the seats surrounding her.
The raven haired girl the seat ahead of Maria peered dozedly over, "Carly, you always do that just as someone else is about to get to sleep."
Carly grumbled and turned to face the aisle.
The girl glared evilly over her seat, "I swear, I'm going to buy corks to shove up her nostrils. There is no way I'm putting up with that for two weeks."
"We tried that on the France trip two years ago, remember Laura?" Maria laughed, " She just snorted them back out again."
Laura yawned, "I could glue them there this time."
Maria chuckled, Laura's dry humour and well-timed witty remarks were what made her so funny. Hardly a day could go by without her giving a sarcastic one-liner; sending the group reeling into fits of laughter.
She settled down into her seat, brushing a long strand of dark brown hair, out of one eye and watched the comfortably familiar landscape trundle past. Rather than dwelling on the life she missed, she concentrated on the holiday she was going to have with her friends, focusing on the good times ahead. Pushing the distressful thoughts to the back of her mind, Maria was able to feel more contented in herself and rested her eyes to join the almost magical stupor the rest of her classmates had fallen into.
***
Carly grunted as she received a forceful shove on the side.
"C'mon sleeping beauty we're here, and I'd quite like to get off the bus."
Carly stretched and yawned, "Give a lassie time to wake up, would you? Not all of us have as much energy as you do. "
The assorted teens bustled off the coach together and into the warm, Italian night air. Carly yawned profusely as she walked along, not taking in much of her surroundings. She was only vaguely aware of the buildings that passed by as they pulled and dragged suitcases towards the hotel; a flash of a pool here and there, vines lazily crawling up a trellised archway but nothing more coherent than that. And she was sure that no one else was either. It had been a long journey.
She took little notice upon entering the hotel too; ambling along at a sluggish pace, guided by her friends, to their allotted room. It was fair sized: en suite facilities; one single bed and two bunks; a built in wardrobe; a small bedside table with a cabinet for storage and a beige coloured lamp resting atop it.
Carly was quick to claim the single bed and ,after changing, lay down on it, "Comfy, I could get used to this," she muttered.
Maria and Laura were far more animated after the long period of rest and engaged excited conversation, "How much freedom do you think we'll get? Think they'll let us out in the town by ourselves? It's not that big really."
With a snort Laura retorted, "Oh yeah, and Mrs Teller will do the Macarena while ripping up room allocation lists!"
The three chuckled, before Maria replied, "Mr. Hatton might make a compromise with her."
"Maybe. I can't wait for the beach, whatever happens. We can play volleyball. And Aston can sunbathe because-"
" 'You know girls, I don't do sport,' " they chorused like a line from a play, rolling into fits of laughter.
"GIRLS!" Came a shrill shout echoing up the corridor, "LIGHTS OUT! NOW!"
"Just going Mrs. Teller," Laura called back in sarcastic, honeyed tones.
Attempting to suppress giggles the two girls changed and got into bed. Muted whispers passed between the girls , excitedly planning what they could do while they were here. Restaurants, maybe the local disco, maybe they could get something exotic done with their hair? The conversation continued until broken by a loud, pig-like snort.
"I think that's goodnight then, Maria."
---
There you have it, so tell me what you think, constructive criticism is not only welcomed, but encouraged. And thanks for reading!