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Dimension fusion (Rewritten)

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Laharl Threw his sword in the air, So it conducted the Thunder. He Jumped and grabbed the sword after the thunder had emded, And Charged into Vincent
 
OOC: Guys, this is getting a bit much. For one thing, nobody has a CLUE what you are talking about. It's becoming effectivly spam. Either improve your RPing in the following ways, or don't bother RPing, cause it's looking pathetic at this point:

Better dialouge
Descibing of actions
describing of items
Describing throughts, emotions, etc.
Describing powers as you use them (or better yet, WAY before.)
FireEmporer, you need better grammer
Vincent Valentine, it's starting to look like you are making your charecter uber, which is unfair to all and not allowed.
 
I ignored the strangers comment, and instead picked up my umbrella, though holding it pointed straight down at him. "I'm going to make an exception this once, and forgive you. Don't repeat yourself." I said, before swinging the umbrella like a golf club, sending the person spiraling towards the white-haired girl, where ranma was asking her "So, what brings you here?"
 
"What's all this noise? Can't a guy iron his collection witho- wha?" A raspy old voice asked, as a tiny, even miniscule old man in a maroon outfit stepped out, noticing the white haired girl. "Hello there pretty!" He said, already latched to her chest. I hadn't even seen him move...
 
ooc; trying to keep up

ic: KNowing now the sword wasn't aimed at me, my heart calmed down and I began taking a better look at my surroundings. " What do you mean you need to always be careful?" I asked. " Where do you come from that you need to carry a sword around like that?"
 
"you don't want to know." I said, suddenly whirling around. I could hear something... something that was 1. alive. 2. had deep breathings, and 3. was partially drolling, if what i could hear was correct. "..... stay totally quiet. With any luck, we won't be attacked." I said calmly, my sword at the ready.
 
"Yo, what's the freak doing out here?" Ranma asked curiously, while I walked up and placed a pebble on haposai's head. "Wha-?" He asked, looking up, but he was cut off as I touched my finger to the pebble, making it disintigrate, and he fell off of the girl's chest, stunned.
 
"Old geezer..." I muttered as I started stomping on him. "I never thought there could be anyone worse then you Miroku..."
"Well InuYasha, let us not worry about that, and get yourself back to being a guy again." Miroku laughed, then turned to Ranma, "So what else is there to the curse?"
 
"Well, hot water reverses the effect, but only until the next time you come in contact with cold water." He said, and as though fate wished to intervene, a loud crash of thunder was heard, and rain came pouring down. "Great..." Said a red-haired girl who was very well endowned, and a pig was nestled comfortably in the bousom of the dark-haired girl.
 
I came in, having gone to the bathroom and turned back, and splashed a kettle of hot water on the newcomer, not saving any for ranma. "There, you happy?" I asked, resisting the urge to squash him in his cursed form.
 
I didn't say anything at the newcomers words, but I had already crumpled the kettle into a ball like it was made out of tin foil. "So, just what does bring you here?" I managed to ask through clenched teeth.
 
"I wouldn't know..." I muttered as I stood up straight, and cracked my knuckles loudly. "We just kind of ended up here."
"What he says is true." Miroku added, now pacing back and forth, stomping his staff as he walked. "We came from a world with demons. Where we are now is what Kagome calls "the present" I think."

"Thats what I smelt!" I cried now realising. "Demons!"
 
"The only demon we know about is the old freak, and even that's not literally." Ranma said, pointing at haposai, who was chasing kasumi through the house, while I came up to the now white-haired stranger and asked "Well, just what are your demons?"
 
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