phantom_zangetsu
PC's sandman!
- 517
- Posts
- 18
- Years
- Age 33
- together with fallen,ontop of shukaku's head
- Seen Dec 9, 2008
yay! this is my first rhyming poem its a bit messy but...it will have to do its just so hard thinking of poems these days... well okay here it is TADA!!!
Disappeared Under the Sun
i was so exited
as i walked out the door
everything was shining
even the floor
i checked my shirt if it was right
everything was perfect
my jeans were tight
and so my journey begins today
but when i went to your house
i saw an empty space
this was a task
so hard to face
i was about to tell you my feelings
but now your gone, its hard seeing
my exitement faded away...
and our paths became astray
the feelings that forever kept
that in your house i left
and untill the day i die
my feelings in your house will lie...
so? how do you like it? okay, critics you may post...now!!
Disappeared Under the Sun
i was so exited
as i walked out the door
everything was shining
even the floor
i checked my shirt if it was right
everything was perfect
my jeans were tight
and so my journey begins today
but when i went to your house
i saw an empty space
this was a task
so hard to face
i was about to tell you my feelings
but now your gone, its hard seeing
my exitement faded away...
and our paths became astray
the feelings that forever kept
that in your house i left
and untill the day i die
my feelings in your house will lie...
so? how do you like it? okay, critics you may post...now!!