Draciana's Sprite Gallery - Constructive criticism much appreciated!

[Draciana]

Revamps:
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Just a few revamps I did just now. I like the Charmeleon and the Blastoise the best.

Poképarts:
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Parls i've cut from other pokémon, edited, or made myself. It's just a sheet I used when making my fakémon, but not all the pokémon I used are on there.

Cut and scratch Fakémon:
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These fakémon are a bit like Eevee, yet still lack a name and a base evolution. Also, all stages are not yet complete. They were made from bits and pieces of other pokémon and a few scratch edits.

Random trainer card:
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I got bored.

Click to enlarge.
:)
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[= GPR =]

your revamps aren't really revamps...

you need to actually redo the shading to d/p standards, with the light source in the top right corner, and more than the the two tones of each color. your best bet would be to just rid of the old shading and redo it entirely.

they're just basic recolors otherwise, good ones, but basic.

as for the parts, anyone can cut blazien's legs off, or decapitate golem...they are irrelevent, and require no skill...

the "scratchs" (since they have copy pasted parts...) have one BIG booboo... you used paint's default color pallette. NEVER use those colors, they are horrible and burn the retina. It is scientifically proven...if i had a degree if retinology... but really, don't use those, they look horrible. as for the sprite's body form, it is very choppy and awkward looking, especially in the area of the neck. you need to work on making the body flow more smoothly.

Don't get discouraged though, this is all stuff you can make better if you practice and work on it.

Keep Spriting!

 

[Draciana]

Thanks, i'll definately take that into account next time when I update this thread.
The poképarts were just...there...so I put them up because I scratch edited a couple of them.
I re-shaded parts of the Charmeleon.
And that was my first fakémon, so...yeah.
I never ONCE used the default pallette, might I add.
Thanks for criticising!
:)
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[bubblewrap]

As GP said, you should just redo all the shading. Look at the DP sprite for reference.
Also, for the four revamps at the top, the outline looks a bit light. In contrast, the Charizard revamp's outline looks a bit dark. (I can't really tell if it's black or just really dark red/orange.)

But, keep spriting! These first attempts are pretty good compared to mine. xDD