Sorry.
Don't bump your thread asking for replies, please. The only circumstance in which you are permitted to do this is if you have new art to show and your thread has slipped off the front page. Not all threads get replies.
Anyway...onto your picture.
It's pretty cute, but I think you need to use a wider range of shading. :) You have the basics down but everything looks rather dark - try and get a bigger tonal variety there. ^^
--FG
I'm sorry about that. I didn't know.
About the shading, we only have one pencil in our house and its a very dark one. (yeah, I know it's strange, but I'm the only one who really does any art at all, and my mum uses a biro to write shopping lists and stuff, and my dad uses the dark pencil for writing music, as he is a pianist.)
I try to draw lightly and get more shades, but its difficult. I've asked myself to get some new pencils but never seem to be able to find time (Trumpet practice, Piano practice, Recorder practice, and all those piles of never ending homework!!!) And as for color, Cpudude11, I have done some color ones, but cannot shade easily, as these pencils aren't very good quality. Also, at our school, they always get us to draw using black and white only. So I'm not very used to drawing in color.
Below are some new drawings.
The second is two pokemon I made up last year. (The one on the left is Aqueris, the legendary in Aquamarine version, and on the right, its oposite, Charis. (They never actually fight in the game, but when I drew it I hadn't thought the game through yet.)
The first one is another May, which I also drew last year, they are both in color and you can see the shading difficulty,(Mind you, I think the second one dosn't look too bad...) and with so little pencils, I still had to do Mays face in grey.
Though I have not placed (C) 2008 Mr. Sanders in the second drawing, it is still copyright to me, and using it without my permission is against the law.
