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Dumped...

Midori Chi

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    Here's a little song that one of my many friends and me made up...

    Dumped

    There was a day, where I saw you with a girl.
    She wasn't me,she was someone else.
    And then you walked,and you said to me we were lost.

    I'm dumped. There's nothing I can do.
    It's over me and you.
    We're lost in fields of love...
    I'm dumped.Yet I don't care.
    I've just now walked the stair.
    I don't believe it's true.

    You walked away.
    I made a little tear.
    But now I 'm through.
    And then I turn around
    I come to times.
    Where I just sit and think.
    I'd like to say,
    I'm now with someone new.

    I'm dumped. There's nothing I can do.
    It's over me and you.
    We're lost in fields of love...
    I'm dumped.Yet I don't care.
    I've just now walked the stair.
    I don't believe it's true.

    ....And we're through....
     
    I like it XD

    Ironically enough Kelis- "Milkshake" was playing on my Media Player during this, wow i feel horrible now ^_____^
     
    ooh! I like it! When i was reading it, i had the sudden urge to rap it, even though i hate rap! Very good! *big hug*
     
    That really is good, I can see someone like Avril Lavrene (sp?) singing a song like that, but at the same time it could pass as a decent poem great job ^^.
     
    Thanx so much for the compliments! ....That friend and me who wrote it also wrote other songs....but this is....pretty much my favorite.....
     
    I really like it ^.^ I don't think I could see Avril singing this cause..well..I'm a little biased because I don't like avril (please don't flame me! X.x)..but it's a VERY VERY good song/poem ^.^
     
    Yeah..to tell you the truth..I LOATH Avril too....Don't tackle me either,please!
     
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    OMG,I love it-no joke.I could see Kelly Clarkson singing it,lol.

    :D Best Friends with Trap-Door57 :D
     
    That was a good poem and I can compare with it because I am always rejected by society.
     
    MegaDitto said:
    That was a good poem and I can compare with it because I am always rejected by society.
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    What do you mean by "and I can compare it because I am always rejected by society" ??
     
    What I meant was that I experienced being dumped many times in my life.
     
    ..Oh! ....yikes...I'm only 12, so...I've never been dumped but...for some reason...I wrote this! (isn't that odd?!)
     
    I am 14 and I am been dumped almost every day by the world .Life is sad.That is why I compared the poem.
     
    MegaDitto said:
    I am 14 and I am been dumped almost every day by the world .Life is sad.That is why I compared the poem.
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    Awwww :( Thats said.

    *Best Friends with Trap-Door57*
     
    (Raven) said:
    Awwww :( Thats said.

    *Best Friends with Trap-Door57*
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    Sorry but what do you mean that is said.
     
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