Evon Master : A Pok?mon like !

[Matt12345678]

If you can read french.....

Le grand travail sur ce jeu ! J'aime les dessins que vous avez fait, aussi. Qu'utilisez-vous pour faire ce jeu ?

 

[DarkDoom3000]

Wow that battle thing gonna require lots of coding !!

Anyway i like the screnies and the atwork is awesome!1

keep it up

 

[Doc]

Thanks!:)
To make the game, i code it in Dark Basic Professional.
(Cos i use it, i have a BIG problem actually : i can't load more than 100/150 different images. If i do, the framerate fall from 250 to 9...The developpement continue)

 

[Datriot]

Dark Basic? Whoa! Good job on what you've done so far and the revamped graphics look nice!

 

[Matt12345678]

Thanks!:)
To make the game, i code it in Dark Basic Professional.
(Cos i use it, i have a BIG problem actually : i can't load more than 100/150 different images. If i do, the framerate fall from 250 to 9...The developpement continue)

wow...:shocked:
nice job.

 

[Doc]

Come the final title font, i hope it's good !
Can you say me what do you think of it?

 

[Datriot]

Yeah, it looks good, nice and glowly. :P

 

[phunboy]

I put here some artworks, which are ever in my website. The strange machine can lead to you your food if you pay a fee, it's usual than go in a city to buy it. No more comment, you'll can see trainers style, and an evon, lost between other screens.

I like the artwork and the machine is cool, I'm an artist so if you like to throw me some things you like made up well I may be able to do that for you. Just PM me or reply in here if you like to do something; I particular could do Evon designs.

A question I have is exactly what is the story as you have gone more into what is in the game in term of features and less about the main story, origins of Evons and so on.

Also I like the name Evon alot for some reason.

And the whole food thing, it makes sense but what about natural food for Evons such as fruit and what not that you could pick from a tree or would Evons require special food and that's why you didn't think about that?

 

[Doc]

Oh, exact, i didn't think about natural food, but yes, some Evons need special food -> i keep the idea :) , it can make the player life easy...

About story, there are some lines, i continue to work on, all is founded about the evolution theory :

During the evolution of species, an animal from sea developps special talents, cos of a DNA mutation : it was evolved from an animal like an ancient eel (non-existent in this old era), with an electric power, but this one had a really big power. It was the first Evon. It was so powerful that others animals can't fight against him, if they were attacked, they were "sure" to be destroyed. They just had to flee.

After years, this Evon (a male) has reproduced, without problem, all other males can't fight against him, and his mutation become common.
This Evon was so powerful that watery animals were intended to disappear. But another animals developps a power : he don't suffer of electric shocks. Like the first Evon, this mutation was a favour, when his peers die, him survive -> This mutation become common after multiple generation.

Years after years, new Evons appears with an exponential factor, they start to use new power : water, fire, poison, some Evons become similar to vegetals... A new creature was powerfuller than an old one ,or can resist to him, etc...
Earth and air animals finished to be submit to the same evolution effect.

But an event happened : a meteor coming from space crashed on Earth destroy a large population of Evons, and all giant dinosaurs(era's animals). After this, survivors Evons needn't more power, there were less species..

After a while, the evolution restart.

"Basics" animals weren't in this competition, they were forgotten by Evons, and continue to live...They weren't the good preys : too small, with a body poor in energy...

But the body has limits, it can't be use too much, powerfuller Evons can reproduced them and defends their offspring, but they don't live a long time...2 years, 1 years, and the formidable fighting creature die...The evolution had reached a limit in this world, some of the best Evons disappear.

This limitation had an effect : it can't exist Evons highly powerfuller than others, there had a levelling of Evons' power, with small variations to the top or the bottom, but no creature can move away far of this level, if it did, it disappears.

Years and centuries passed...An animal - not an Evon - developps a new talent, non-existent in Evons : the intelligence, it was the rise of mankind. With his intelligence, the man can fight against Evon, and he dominated speedly the world.

Evons had physical body limits, but their spirit weren't very developped. So it did. It wasn't an advanced intelligence, like the man, but sufficient to fight against mankind, and to transmit knowledge between generations.

A millenium later, it was the era of darkness for mankind, Evons were able to resist because of their intelligence.

Some villages were destroyed, if the man wanted to survive, it had to gather in big cities. It did that, but cities were isolated poles. Convoys travel between cities. They were often attacked.

With their intelligence, parents Evons learned to their offspring how to behave with the man, their adversary
Somewhere in the world, some people try to catch Evons and tame them, it was long and difficult, because of Evons knowledge who say them "resist", but possible.
These people were called "Evon trainer". Those who pay them, were sure to travel without Evons attacks : the trainer were here to defend them, or the convoy.

In all cities, an the better Evon trainer called Champion were promoted at the defense of the city if it was attacked.

In a mine were discovered a strange rock; minors were attacked by a ground Evon. To defend themselves, they throw stoness on it, with dispair. One take a stone with a special blur transparent aspect, it was an uncommon and unused mineral found sometimes in mines. When the Evon was hit by the stone, it disappear, all it's body energy were absorbed by the stone, which get another aspect, colored, with a nebula in it, that's why this rock were called Nebula.

The discover were quickly known all around the world, and mankind start to exploit the Nebula. A machine commonly called NS or NSphere (for Nebula Sphere) , made with Nebula and other minerals was available in the main cities shop, for trainers. They exploit the NS to catch,transport and tame Evons easily.

Years passed, Evons learned that the discover wasn't a good thing for them, they stop their attacks, or made less; mankind could restart its expansion.
The trainer job was so much common that mankind were near to nature, and broadly don't try to developp its more than need, in respect for Evons.

Nowadays...Mankind has developp it, no more than need. Of the old times, it stay isolated big cities system, Evon trainers...And Evons has learned to like their condition of fighting creatures : they travel, become powerfuller, because of the training, meet others Evons, and why not an Evon of the same species but the opposed gender...

Champions who defends cities exist no more, but they become a representative of a city activity, it was good for tourism, for example; they become too great adversary, and every trainer who fight against them and win is sure to become a great trainer...If it win against all trainers, he is allowed to fight against nation's Evons masters, and after, world's Evon masters...And THE master's champion.

All get good, but a new Evon appear, highly powerfuller than the maximum possible level, it is able to destroy one city with only one attack, and only the army seems to be able to make him die...Evons experts are in big activity, how can this Evon exist? Why is he so more powerful, what had can push him to evolved like this?...It's the first campaign of missions...

x_x There is more than an hour i'm writing that, i hope really my text will be read, and it's understandable...If you see often the same words, please excuse my miss of vocabulary...

Now, i can show two screenshots, taken from my editor :

Err, what can i say more?
Ah, yes, of course, my bug problem has disappear, i have found a solution, it's really a good new for me...(...and for you? ;) )

 

[Doc]

New artworks :

Of course you can't know that, but this guy will be your best ally or you worst enemy...When we see his head, impossible to know his alignment, good or evil.

A spiritual leader form the Ma?ans clan, their entry test is a logic-based mini-game. If the player don't have the competence to wi it, it will be only his fault. I depends not of the game's avatar skills...To be authorized to pass this test, the player must have an honnest (opposed to chaotic) alignment good or evil...

Help the police to stop clan wars, join them and become powerfuller than all other clans!

A laboratory, nothing to say more.

Than an ever seen character, a member of the Order (original name, isn't it ? ^^ - Entry if you're honnest and evil)

 

[phunboy]

Some more nice artwork though your description of what Evon's are and what it is all about was a bit convoluted.

Though I do like that you do explain certain things as in Pok?mon nothing really is explained in a clear manor such as Pok? Balls origin and what not.

Also you may wanna spell check before posting as I have noticed ton's of errors that can make it hard to know completely what your saying.

Also what program are you using as I am thinking about making a Pok?mon game up. And I notice its in French so is English your second language?

 

[Doc]

What you notice is good, i'm French and English is my second language...Fortunately, I don't need to write in English to make artworks...
Is spell check an option in the reply screen?

If there are lines which you don't understand, say to me which, I would try to correct them, if I can...

To make my game, I use the Dark Basic Professional language (I already said it); it is absolutely not like RPGMaker : it is a programming language.

I use a translator for this message, is it better for the orthography?

 

[Budgie_boy]

What you notice is good, i'm French and English is my second language...Fortunately, I don't need to write in English to make artworks...
Is spell check an option in the reply screen?

If there are lines which you don't understand, say to me which, I would try to correct them, if I can...

To make my game, I use the Dark Basic Professional language (I already said it); it is absolutely not like RPGMaker : it is a programming language.

I use a translator for this message, is it better for the orthography?

If you need help in translations I can always help.

PM me in french If I don't understand a few bits I'll ask then translate in proper english for you.

*PM Moi en francais et j'ecrire ton message en englais...(I think)*