EX: MasterEmpire

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    That's my first set! It have 87 Cards I don't currently know what other cards I'll add later!
    01/87 Charizard |Rare|
    07/87 Oddish |Uncommon|
    11/87 Delibird |Uncommon|
    24/87 Scyther |Rare|
    85/87 Deoxys ex |ex Rare|
    87/87 Mew star |Rare|

    MYSTIC
    88/87 Rukario|Mystic Rare|

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    And... first Rukario card ever!!! Yeah!!! Yo man!!!
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    OK first off, bad jpeg compression. Text and everything is blurry. Also, no 9-digit ID.

    Wording:
    Hide-And-Seek
    If the Defending Pok?mon is (fire) and attacks Oddish, your opponent must flip a coin. If tails, the attack does nothing.

    (You don't need an "if heads it works normally" part)

    Forest Hiding
    Search your deck for a (grass) Pok?mon and make it your Active Pok?mon. Then shuffle Oddish into your deck.

    (Need to know what to do with any cards attached to oddish though)

    Seed Tackle
    This attack does damage equal to 20+ the amount of damage done by the Defending Pok?mon on your opponent's last turn.

    ^those are better, but may need be exactly correct.
     
    Besides wording like Shadow said there's one mistake i can pick out. "Seed Tackle" is too close to the energy cost. Move it over a circle if u no what i mean.

    EDIT: Just noticed this. The "+" on "20+" is too big and shouldnt be centered verticly with the "20".
     
    Well, firstly for Firemaker's oppinion.
    No I mustn't remove the Weakness, because there are some Pokemon that aren't influenced by Pokebody's or PokePowers^^
    Shadow,
    1. I explain that I need it
    2. Ok I'll correct
    3. I'll correct it but I won't write exactly that.

    Zooster
    I know, but that was the first time I used PhotoShop
    I can't put energys on the circle, there's no space... I'll correct "+"
     
    The text for you Poke-Body is too close to the Poke-Body symbol and name. Also, two retreat cost for such a simple basic as Oddish seems like too much in my opinion. Oh well, it's your fake.
     
    On it's good points, the card is impressive and it's a very nice concept. The art is really good! The errors I'm about to list aren't as severe as they will sound; this is better than some attempts.

    Now the placement/font errors. Some of these have already been mentioned.
    -Move the Pok?mon name about 2 pixels left.
    -The illus looks too bold.
    -It's not hard to get the energies on the circles, it really isn't. I normally have about 3 pixels space between each energy.
    -The left side of attack names should be around halfway through the 4th circle, and the bottom of attack names should line up with the bottom of the energy symbols.
    -Your text boxes should have margins of 10 pixels at both sides, and the right side of the attack damage should line up with the right of the text box.
    -The plus sign is too big (size 12 Humanist/Gill Sans condensed bold at 100 percent width is the norm) and should sit in the 10 pixel margin; it does not count as part of the attack damage.
    -The Body effect is far too close to the Body symbol. Move it down.
    -The attack and Body name fonts look to be the wrong size. Attacks are size 23 at 89 percent width, and Bodies are size 19.2 at 89 percent width.



    Less important things
    -No 9 digit ID?
    -The Set number needs to be moved a tiny bit closer to the rarity.
    -Move the set symbol to the right a bit.
    -Ugly fire symbol? Where does it come from? Or is it jpg compression, which looks quite nasty.


    Nonetheless, a good attempt. Keep it up! Here's a bit of useful advice if you like; if you want to be a bit more precise, you can try making the card while reading the sticky tutorial. This way, you'll pick up the techniques a bit easier. Take it slow and make a perfect job of it.
     
    in terms of balance, the fact that a basic Pokemon who can evolve got 60 hp (usually they got 50 hp) serves as a good reason why the retreat cost should be 2... makes sense to me to make up for the unusually high hp for a basic Pokemon.
     
    Well, I guess I understand that. I wondered about that HP being a bit high aswell.
     
    TyranitarDragonTrainer said:
    It's good, but since when did Oddish have arms?
    Click to expand...
    Whoah! I never noticed that. XD
     
    LOL your right but I didn't made it. I found it on a Site! Anyway I correct Oddish! Not all problems, but wait this is my first card this is PERFECT for first isn't it?
     
    No, not really, considering my first fake was perfect. Took me quite a few hours to make and then more to go back and edit things I noticed. This had errors, so therefore it wasn't perfect.
     
    I put my edited oddish now.
    Well PiroMunkie, this isn't only my first fake card this is my first picture in PhotoShop I used PhotoShop for first time when I made this card, realy!
    Anyway, I'm searching for picture from Pokemon to make new cards right now!
     
    I would say go www.google.com and try to find picture or try to find a websites that has good pictures. That is what I always do.
     
    Why did you switch it with Oddish. You probably should have kept Oddish and on your last post, the one that says you think you got better, have posted your mew fake in there. Now it looks like you posted a mew before and everyone was commenting on an Oddish which looks weird.

    EDIT:

    Nevermind, I see how you still gave the link to Oddish in your first post. That works out too. Don't mind my ranting above.
     
    I'm looking for a Lighting, Fire or Psychic Pokemon to make now! I'm between Charizard Ampharos and Mewtwo!
    Anyway do you like my Mew*?
     
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