*Vulpix09*
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This is my first fanfic so expect me to make lots of mistakes! This is mostly about Cyrus and is also set in Sinnoh. I'm going to post the prologue, sorry because it's quite long! Also good critism is very welcome, and so is bad critism, but make sure it's constructive please. Feel free to correct to my mistakes and point out typos and stuff, actually do correct it because it will help me in future chapters. Enjoy!
(This prologue is dedicated to my mum, who is currently helping me!)
Prologue:
"You have not obeyed my orders." The tall man with blue hair leaned back on the chair, half of his face slightly in shadow where the feeble light of the ceiling lamp couldn't reach it.
"B-but sir, you must understand. Evans is not an easy man to question. He has shown a great level of determination towards not answering our questions. Please Cyrus sir, believe me. We have interrogated him for several hours, but to no avail, we've truly tried our best." The small man who bore an acute resemblance to a rat was kneeling on the floor, before the blue-haired man, Cyrus.
"I understand, but you will still not go without a slight punishment. Grovelling will do no good Francach, you need to try your absolute best. Now, Lucian the whip, if you please." A small smile played on Cyrus' slightly parted lips, but was gone in an instant as a another tall but dark-haired man stepped out of the shadows.
"Certainly, sir." Lucian replied, then drew out a long stick with a metal coating. Unwillingly Franchan lifted up his shirt, he knew that if he refused this punishment much harsher ones would follow. He bit his tongue, he did not want to scream as this would give Cyrus satisifaction.
Lucian raised the whip above his head and brought it down with a sickening crack on Franchan's bare skin. He continued to do this, and after a while the pain was so unbearable for Franchan that he let out a piercing scream which echoed against the stone walls of the room. Cyrus, who was unfazed by the whole scene had sat back down and was watching with pleasure.
"Evans also must suffer. Perhaps I will remove one of his beloved daughters, that may make him buck up. Yes, I shall tell Lucian to go and take the first one he sees." Cyrus said to himself and continued to watch Lucian distorting Franchan's back with bloody gashes from the metal-coated whip.
*
6 year old Sara Evans was playing hide-and seek with her older sister, Kate and the family pokemon, Eevee.
"Can't catch me!" she taunted Kate, then she and Eevee ran behind the nearest tree and listened while Kate counted to a 100.
"60, 61, 62, 63, 6-" Suddenly Kate stopped and there was a deathly silence. Sara wondered why she has stopped, and listened intently. She motioned for Eevee to be quiet, and he obeyed her. Then a sudden scream chilled Sara to the very bone. She would know who's scream that was anywhere, Kate's. Another scream. Sara wanted to help Kate so much but she found for some reason she couldn't move. All she could do was listen in terror to Kate's pleading sobs and screams.
"Please! Let me go! Sara's so young, I can't leave her like this. Where are you taking me? Help, please someone, help!" It was too much to take. Eevee's teeth were bared and the hackles on his neck raised. He was emtting a low growling noise and Sara tried to hush him in vain, petrified he would give them away. She held tightly onto his back, so he couldn't get away. Tears were pouring down her cheeks, drenching her thin t-shirt. After a while Kate's screams subsided. Long after they stopped, Sara sat there, her hand still on Eevee's back so that he wouldn't rush out.
Why would someone come and take Kate away? had she done something wrong? All these thoughts were fluttering around in Sara's brain as she tried to make sense of it all. Tears were still trickling down her face and landing on Eevee's back, making him jump. Sara suddenly felt very tired, and after a while closed her eyes and fell asleep. Eevee stayed awake, even though he was tired too but he had to keep guard over them both. Many hours had passed when Sara woke up. She stretched and got up, and made her way cautisiously out from behind the tree, Eevee following close at her heels. Then she started to look for signs of Kate.
"Kate! Kate! Where are you, Kate? Answer me please!" She called. But there was no reply. Kate was gone and she was left, all alone.
Franchan (prounced Frown-coc) is an irish word. I will dedicate the 1st chapter to whoever can find out what it translates to in english. Remember to read the prologue closely, as this may provide some clues. I will give you a clue anyway, it is a rodent.
Good luck and the next chapter will be here soon! *Vulpix09*
(This prologue is dedicated to my mum, who is currently helping me!)
Prologue:
"You have not obeyed my orders." The tall man with blue hair leaned back on the chair, half of his face slightly in shadow where the feeble light of the ceiling lamp couldn't reach it.
"B-but sir, you must understand. Evans is not an easy man to question. He has shown a great level of determination towards not answering our questions. Please Cyrus sir, believe me. We have interrogated him for several hours, but to no avail, we've truly tried our best." The small man who bore an acute resemblance to a rat was kneeling on the floor, before the blue-haired man, Cyrus.
"I understand, but you will still not go without a slight punishment. Grovelling will do no good Francach, you need to try your absolute best. Now, Lucian the whip, if you please." A small smile played on Cyrus' slightly parted lips, but was gone in an instant as a another tall but dark-haired man stepped out of the shadows.
"Certainly, sir." Lucian replied, then drew out a long stick with a metal coating. Unwillingly Franchan lifted up his shirt, he knew that if he refused this punishment much harsher ones would follow. He bit his tongue, he did not want to scream as this would give Cyrus satisifaction.
Lucian raised the whip above his head and brought it down with a sickening crack on Franchan's bare skin. He continued to do this, and after a while the pain was so unbearable for Franchan that he let out a piercing scream which echoed against the stone walls of the room. Cyrus, who was unfazed by the whole scene had sat back down and was watching with pleasure.
"Evans also must suffer. Perhaps I will remove one of his beloved daughters, that may make him buck up. Yes, I shall tell Lucian to go and take the first one he sees." Cyrus said to himself and continued to watch Lucian distorting Franchan's back with bloody gashes from the metal-coated whip.
*
6 year old Sara Evans was playing hide-and seek with her older sister, Kate and the family pokemon, Eevee.
"Can't catch me!" she taunted Kate, then she and Eevee ran behind the nearest tree and listened while Kate counted to a 100.
"60, 61, 62, 63, 6-" Suddenly Kate stopped and there was a deathly silence. Sara wondered why she has stopped, and listened intently. She motioned for Eevee to be quiet, and he obeyed her. Then a sudden scream chilled Sara to the very bone. She would know who's scream that was anywhere, Kate's. Another scream. Sara wanted to help Kate so much but she found for some reason she couldn't move. All she could do was listen in terror to Kate's pleading sobs and screams.
"Please! Let me go! Sara's so young, I can't leave her like this. Where are you taking me? Help, please someone, help!" It was too much to take. Eevee's teeth were bared and the hackles on his neck raised. He was emtting a low growling noise and Sara tried to hush him in vain, petrified he would give them away. She held tightly onto his back, so he couldn't get away. Tears were pouring down her cheeks, drenching her thin t-shirt. After a while Kate's screams subsided. Long after they stopped, Sara sat there, her hand still on Eevee's back so that he wouldn't rush out.
Why would someone come and take Kate away? had she done something wrong? All these thoughts were fluttering around in Sara's brain as she tried to make sense of it all. Tears were still trickling down her face and landing on Eevee's back, making him jump. Sara suddenly felt very tired, and after a while closed her eyes and fell asleep. Eevee stayed awake, even though he was tired too but he had to keep guard over them both. Many hours had passed when Sara woke up. She stretched and got up, and made her way cautisiously out from behind the tree, Eevee following close at her heels. Then she started to look for signs of Kate.
"Kate! Kate! Where are you, Kate? Answer me please!" She called. But there was no reply. Kate was gone and she was left, all alone.
Franchan (prounced Frown-coc) is an irish word. I will dedicate the 1st chapter to whoever can find out what it translates to in english. Remember to read the prologue closely, as this may provide some clues. I will give you a clue anyway, it is a rodent.
Good luck and the next chapter will be here soon! *Vulpix09*
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