(F) Art of a Wannabe - Laptop Doodles and Sprites

[Pokemon Trainer UV]

100% Custom Charizard:

It was originally supposed to be Charmander, but it came out so horribly mutated that I needed to change it.

Spoiler:

A doodle of the ram Pokemon that I posted in the "Desirable Starters" thread, the pre-evolution is unfinished, as you see there.
The ram thing does need some tweaks, though... but you guys can point out any thing wrong with it that I might not see.

Random edit of Pikachu. I'm planning to do a Metroid one.

The ram sprite

Spoiler:

Reshiram; almost done, just needs a bit of fixing and shading.

Tauros is not approving of something here.

Spoiler:

He's probably not approving of this Entei...


So, any questions, comments, suggestions? Tips?

PS:
Using MS Paint in case anyone asks what I'm using. I've got Gimp, but I'm kinda too lazy for it...

 

[Kyoune]

Oh mann. You really need to finish that Tauros and Entei... ;___; They look so cute. You should just keep them as mug shots. D:
Do you use a tablet? Those lines are soooo nice.

Secondly, on the Charizard you should use some more distinct colors and shades to help separate and define the sprite.

 

[Pokemon Trainer UV]

Oh mann. You really need to finish that Tauros and Entei... ;___; They look so cute. You should just keep them as mug shots. D:
Do you use a tablet? Those lines are soooo nice.

Secondly, on the Charizard you should use some more distinct colors and shades to help separate and define the sprite.

Thank you! I really appreciate the input!

Nope, don't use a tablet. I use nothing but my mouse pad and crippled fingers from trying to play FPS games on mouse pad.