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Well...

*insert a laugh here*

I credit Farla for her excellent and valid detections of small things hidden within the connotations and diction, although I've never received a review such as her.

What can I say? It had reasonable explanations backing up those nitpicky details, but somewhat, her 'reviews' are always a bit hollow~

<3 oh well. I suppose I'd better cry in a corner, right? XD
 
I'd say save your tears...I dunno... When you look into her live journal she makes really good points from time to time. But overall Farla gives me the impression that she's a higher level of perfectionist.

Maybe it's my short-fuse speaking, but It kinda annoys me to no end that she would put someone's story into her journal just so she and her friends could laugh it up without even giving a heads up the "butt" of all the amusement. (Seems like a low-blow to a guy like me.)

There are some really obsure and badly written stories out there by even my standards but nobody's perfect. The last time I checked fan writing was suppose to be something you do intelligently yet still look beyond all and all the mistakes you make (and fix overtime) and still have fun and a feeling of accomplishment when doing it.

These guys and their live journals seem to suck that kind of factor away from people making many near paranoid should they be mentioned in it.
 
Plus people write for fun, not to be the best. I just... hate Farla... with all my heart. I drew a picture of her as a huge fat queen and a little human is bowing down to her and saying how great she is. I can't describe my hate for her...

Oh yeah, and she asks people to email her if they want to flame, yet she dedicates her journal to being a jerk. And yes, my hate did rise more because she picked on Dragonfree.
 
Nekomajo Asunya said:
Like me!
The Trial of Juno series is a classic! It practically has the word written all over it-nya!

Junomeow really does a heck of a job with his fics. Meow.
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Boy am I glad to see you here! Plus I see that you've released Hoenn Mirror World. Trust me, anyone who hasn't read it yet is in for a real treat, it's that good!

Hopefully we have more enjoyment and luck with PokeCommunity than we did with Pokemon Elite 2000...
 
Neo Pikachu said:
Boy am I glad to see you here! Plus I see that you've released Hoenn Mirror World. Trust me, anyone who hasn't read it yet is in for a real treat, it's that good!
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Thanks! I hope everyone likes it too.
I have made some minor changes in it, but that's pretty much nothing. It still has all the fun of Mariah, Connie, Cascadia, and Lyoko's adventures in a parellel version of Hoenn complete with talking Pokemon, bizarre necklaces, and all the Watmel berries you can eat. ;)
 
*sigh*

After the great depression, my creativity is drained. Should get some new inspiration somehwere... *scratches out love stories from his list*
 
oni flygon said:
*sigh*

After the great depression, my creativity is drained. Should get some new inspiration somehwere... *scratches out love stories from his list*
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Play some video games and watch some movies (Action or Science Fiction recommended). While you're doing so, try to imagine a conflict similar to the one you're seeing and know the reason for that conflict. Think of a way to add Pokemon to it. Switch time periods and locations if possible to mask the fact you got the idea from a movie or game. Then start building plot and characters.

Give it a shot. It usually works for me.
 
Whee, I posted my one-shot Pok?mon Master that I mentioned sometime earlier. Very revised...
 
MewMan said:
Can I have a review for Troubled paths ?
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I've read quite a bit of it (up to the battle between Larvitar and Teddiursa), and I have to say that I'm rather disappointed. First of all, I noticed a bunch of typos throughout the story. It was hard for me to enjoy the story with the constant spelling mistakes.

Also, I kinda lost interest in reading Trainer fics (there are VERY few exceptions to this). They get rather boring after a while.

If I have offended you by this, I'm sorry, but that's my opinion. I've understand that you've tried to put some effort in it, so I'll give you credit for that.

EDIT: Would anyone mind doing a review for my story? Thanks.
https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/24826
 
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I've posted Sunset Beach too, one of my best one-shots.
 
Dragonfree said:
I've posted Sunset Beach too, one of my best one-shots.
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*cries*
Aw, man...
That was so sad. It was so totally sad...
My favorite Pokemon... a murderer... in a sacred place...

I know I pretty much spoiled the juicy part, but I don't care. It was really sad... ;_; *wipes her eyes and blows nose*
 
Chapter 8 of Hoenn Mirror World up. It may seem like I'm skipping ahead, but it's actually a bit of foreshadowing about what's going to happen in a future chapter. For those who aren't liking HMW too much, hopefully this is where things start to get interesting. If not, I'm sorry that I've wasted everyone's time by reading it and I'll take it off first thing tomorrow.
 
chapter 2 for pokemon lengends is now up.
 
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