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Niko said:
That's quite true... I'm attracted to fics that have "battle", "journey", "Pokemon", etc, etc in them... =P
I never thought that titles can do so much.
 
You mustn't forget 'Team - something,' such as Team IceKing, or Team Doom, or TeamOMGwe'regonnadie. Regarding a (certain rare pokemon, or just a cool pokemon itself) + (a real special funky sounding word) = ex: Mew's Legend, MewMan's Prophecy -of Muffins-, Mewtwo's Journey, etc. Or (Certain name) + (Optional: insert adjective here) + (journey) + (Optional: a goal pertaining to something) = ex: Nekomajo's Journey, Eddie's Hopeless Journey, Onii-chan's Extravagant Journey for Green Day Fans, etc. In the other case, where one's title is a tad too long, such as The Mystery Behind the Crystal Orb letter of Mew's chosen funny one - Breezy, (oh yeah, ones with 'chosen' in them, sometimes, like The Chosen Script One - Yamato-San) or just simply ActonThat's Journey through Fanfiction.net - Part 1, Battling through Flames!, or LilyPichu's Journey to find Roy, Part 2, in which she rejects all ideas of his nonexistence coolly, shamelessly rambling on about his realism and hawtness oblivious to scientific proof anime characters cannot exist.
 
LilyPichu said:
You mustn't forget 'Team - something,' such as Team IceKing, or Team Doom, or TeamOMGwe'regonnadie. Regarding a (certain rare pokemon, or just a cool pokemon itself) + (a real special funky sounding word) = ex: Mew's Legend, MewMan's Prophecy -of Muffins-, Mewtwo's Journey, etc. Or (Certain name) + (Optional: insert adjective here) + (journey) + (Optional: a goal pertaining to something) = ex: Nekomajo's Journey, Eddie's Hopeless Journey, Onii-chan's Extravagant Journey for Green Day Fans, etc. In the other case, where one's title is a tad too long, such as The Mystery Behind the Crystal Orb letter of Mew's chosen funny one - Breezy, (oh yeah, ones with 'chosen' in them, sometimes, like The Chosen Script One - Yamato-San) or just simply ActonThat's Journey through Fanfiction.net - Part 1, Battling through Flames!, or LilyPichu's Journey to find Roy, Part 2, in which she rejects all ideas of his nonexistence coolly, shamelessly rambling on about his realism and hawtness oblivious to scientific proof anime characters cannot exist.
I could somehow imagine you, in the middle of the fic, starting to ramble on jargon about Roy and how you admire him so much...>>
 
*vanquishes all flames*

Generally words like 'journey', 'chronicles', 'chosen', 'ledengd' and the likes turn me off. A creative title shows effort, especially when there is no summary.
 
Yes... stupid summary for prologues are so annoying... and what really pisses me off are things like

*insert story here*

<two days later> (<- THOSE THINGS ANNOY ME!)

*continue story here*

Those markers annoy the hell out of me...
 
lol! I can ramble on about Roy, like that. xD

<one minute later>

Hi Niko!
 
Extravagant Journey for Green Day Fans, etc. In the other case, where one's title is a tad too long, such as The Mystery Behind the Crystal Orb letter of Mew's chosen funny one - Breezy,
That was my greatest story EVAH I must say. *sniffle* Does everyone remember when Mew met the fiendish little elf of Jupoxpolis who tricks poor Mew to where the crystal orb was so Mew goes off and finds the letter predicting her funny death? I sure do. :)

On another note, how do you spell thought? I think I got something hit me in the head early this morning when we had an earthquake, but for some reason, thought just looks spelled wrong to me. o.o

*crazy*
 
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Can any reviewers-of-doom *coughfrostweaveractonthatcough* please review my fic 'Heart of the Magma'? (goh, I cringe everytime I read that title nowadays)
I need some good, critical reviews, of which I'm in short supply; I'm planning to post on ff.net, but I wanted a bigger range of reviews first. *puppy dog eyes* Please help a poor, aspiring author...
 
Kwestun!

Would animalish mating be considered too mature for a fanfic? I posted a story with a somewhat detailed birth, and mating is, like, the prelude to birth. And look, my first post as a 21 year old.
 
I would allow it but my superiors would be *****ing me because it's a "kid" forum ... yeah right... like kids would love to read literature... sure you could do it. But just keep it under control...=D
 
ActOnThat said:
At least she's willing to take help. Meanwhile I'm getting hatemail with people telling me their canon-raping fics are fine because they say so. Lucky.

hmm... well, some people just think they can do things on their own... which is why you might get hatemail from them because they want to keep their pride...

like that works... it only makes a fan fiction worse.... XP
 
hmm... well, some people just think they can do things on their own... which is why you might get hatemail from them because they want to keep their pride...

like that works... it only makes a fan fiction worse.... XP
Actually, I got no help whatsoever when I first started and two years later I'm dare I say decent. ^^; Of course, the constructive criticism came AFTER I fixed the basic grammar and whatnot in my ficcies.

Hatemail is fun to read, especially from pissed off n00bs- uh writers that do not appreciate good help.
 
Full Name: Breezeh (Jamie) ([email protected])
Gender: Female
Birthdate: 10 October 1989

First Crush: Jerry Knew
Biggest Crush: Gary Stu

Do you have a boyfriend/girlfriend? Yes
Boyfriend/girlfriend's Name: Cheese Monkey

Current status of your relationship:
Cant wait to breakup

Ever had sex in your life? No
Porn Sites/Movies: No

How many times do you masturbate in a week?
Never

Are you attracted to an individual of the same sex?
No

Preferred Skin Complexion: Fair

What turns you on the most?
If he has any donkeys. Maybe a stick of hum too.

If you could do one thing to him/her, what would you do?
Ah silleh Lileh, I loved tricking my friends with these things too. XP Yes, Breezeh be bored.


I hate you, Breezy. =) XD
 
Ah yes. I pwnaged the person who was suppose to pwn others. ^_^ I tricked like 10 people way back when. *ebil laugh*

Cheese Monkey was hawt though.

In other news, I posted my favorite fic of all time "Walls that Talk" which I accidently capatalized wrong I believe, but meh. It's about Wally ranting about the many issues of life, like him being bashed way back when at ff.net lol.
 
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Breezy said:
Actually, I got no help whatsoever when I first started and two years later I'm dare I say decent. ^^; Of course, the constructive criticism came AFTER I fixed the basic grammar and whatnot in my ficcies.

Hatemail is fun to read, especially from pissed off n00bs- uh writers that do not appreciate good help.

LOL, I find that really hillarious!

And why does Lily keep making your a fan fic writer profile, anyways?
 


I was just wondering, why is Fanfiction and Otherwriting used as seperate forums. Is it just because you guys want to keep Pokemon stories and the other seperate? I'm asking this because I somehow feel myself discouraged -- to write my own fiction -- by the fact that the activity in Other fanfiction is practically non-existing, at least compared to what happens here.

Meh, I guess I have to just live with it :)

 
BlackLotus said:

I was just wondering, why is Fanfiction and Otherwriting used as seperate forums. Is it just because you guys want to keep Pokemon stories and the other seperate? I'm asking this because I somehow feel myself discouraged -- to write my own fiction -- by the fact that the activity in Other fanfiction is practically non-existing, at least compared to what happens here.

Meh, I guess I have to just live with it :)


Hmm... maybe so that mods will have an easier time moderating the two forums...

it's quite simple really... but I rather not say it... just figure it out yourselves then! XP
 
BlackLotus said:


I was just wondering, why is Fanfiction and Otherwriting used as seperate forums. Is it just because you guys want to keep Pokemon stories and the other seperate? I'm asking this because I somehow feel myself discouraged -- to write my own fiction -- by the fact that the activity in Other fanfiction is practically non-existing, at least compared to what happens here.

Meh, I guess I have to just live with it :)

Take a tour between the two forums and tell me the difference... ;P
 
You should all check out my thread here. It's a script based one, so I really need help improving it >>;

But it's one of my favorites that I've written =3
 
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Niko said:
Take a tour between the two forums and tell me the difference... ;P

In my post I already told you two differences, but I would like to know the reason that made you seperate them.
 
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