SuperDeoxys
Deoxys RULEZ!
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- 17
- Years
- At the back of you! *Ahh!*
- Seen Jan 20, 2010
My first comic if you cant see words then put it on paint i'll talkl more later right now i'm busy:
first episode
first episode
Ok sorry it's my first........I'll get better.....
Edit: And if u have nothing nice to say then dont post.........And i was in a rush that time!
Its okbut the ash sprite looks messed up just use a diamond and pearl sprite or something.
Its because it is an edited sprite, and its in FRLG style, wheras the other sprite is in RSE.
And heh, you go and find an Ash DP sprite - Very hard Indeed.
ah...um...ah....o-kay...
about the smallest comic I've EVER seen. Hard to read text,
Bad humor (Swears used over and over does NOT make humor),
As said before, NEVER use photobucket- I use Imageshack
because they don't resize your image, and use text bubbles witch are easier
to read. And I suggest watching the TV channel "Comedy Central" they have loads of
material, that you could use. sorry, but I didn't find this comic funny...at all.
yeah, but when I used photobucket when I tried to make my first comic, BUT it was so small, and who cares about popups and a little longer waits? doesn't it matter who well they do it? it works. trust me, my VGcats avatars where always destroied by photobucket- just give me a second and I'll show you some examples.I've always used photobucket, and my comics have never lost any quality, whereas Imageshack is plagued with pop ups and lengthly waits.
People can't join comics, it's against the rules here.
Don't overuse swearing, noone in real life uses sh** in every sentence. As well as read the PC rules, you can't swear period.
Finally, get better jokes, there's nothing too funny in there.