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First fake! Criticism please!

Ethan621

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    • I want to know what you think, but don't tear me apart. It's my first one! First of hopefully many.


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    Barboach

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    • The only two things I see wrong with this is that th picture is blurred a bit. nd the fire on his tail is a bit big. Sorry if the blurred is the style of it, but other then that its very good.
     

    Ethan621

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    • Lol. the blurring was a spur of the moment decision. I hate it now. ANd the fire tail...eh, not what I was aiming for. It wasn't that big in the original sketch, but I ended up just going crazy w/ the mouse. ^_^
     

    Cipher 2008

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    The fonts are a little off...you forgot the nine-digit code and the set symbol...but apart from that, great.
     

    Ethan621

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    • D'oh! the code! I purposely left off a set symbol because i wanted to make my own, but the code totally slipped me.
     

    Forci Stikane

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    Eh, the spacing's a bit off on the attack text...but very good for a first try.
     

    Girafarig-chan

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    The only error I can see on it is Charmander's Weakness, of which is Fighting, instead of Water. Other than that, very good for first card.
     

    Ethan621

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    • I didn't want to go with the standard water weakness. Mostly, because there's a rival named Dan coming up who has a sruitle-> blastoise line, and I wanted them to be on an even footing. Charizard will probably be weak to Lightning, still debating on him having the resistance or not.
     

    Girafarig-chan

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    AdamCharlie said:
    I didn't want to go with the standard water weakness. Mostly, because there's a rival named Dan coming up who has a sruitle-> blastoise line, and I wanted them to be on an even footing. Charizard will probably be weak to Lightning, still debating on him having the resistance or not.
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    Fair enough. The weakness of Fighting is also fine as it is weak against Ground types.;)
     
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