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First Team, Lots of criticism please!

Beginnings

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    This is my first attempt at an OU team so I know I'm gonna have a lot of screw ups, but thats why I'm in this forum.

    Weavile@ Choice Band
    252 Atk/216 Speed/42 Hp
    Jolly
    Pursuit
    Ice Punch
    Brick Break
    Night Slash

    Weavile is a great lead, Brick Break gets Lucario, Rock Types, Magnezone etc. Ice Punch gets dragons, Night slash for gengar and such. Pursuit is for the runners.

    Starmie@Life Orb
    Timid
    170Hp/120 S.Atk/216 Spd
    Ice Beam
    Surf
    Rapid Spin
    Recover

    Starmie is a great special sweep/spinner, it can dish out the pain and when it gets into the red, it just recovers

    Rhyperior@Leftovers
    252 HP/80 Atk/176 Def
    Adamant, Solid Rock
    Earthquake
    Stone Edge
    Roar
    Stealth Rock

    Rhyperior is my FAVORITE physical wall because it can take a hit, stealth rock, roar can get the passers, and eliminate stat changes, Earthquake and Stone Edge are for stab and get good type coverage.

    Snorlax@ leftovers
    Careful
    252HP/252 Sp.Def/4Atk
    THICK FAT
    Rest
    Sleep Talk
    Body Slam
    Crunch

    rest-talk snorlax is awesome, it can soak up the special hits and can hit right back with this set

    Porygon-Z@Life Orb
    Timid
    252SpAtk/252Spd
    Adaptability
    Nasty Plot
    Tri Attack
    Dark Pulse
    Hidden power Fighting

    Life Orb Sweeping Owns after a nasty plot, HP Fighting makes TTar go WAAAAH

    Lucario@Choice Scarf
    Adamant
    252 Atk/252 Spd
    Close Combat
    Blaze Kick
    Crunch
    Stone Edge

    Lucario, just one of my favorite sweepers
     
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    Beginnings said:
    This is my first attempt at an OU team so I know I'm gonna have a lot of screw ups, but thats why I'm in this forum.

    Weavile@Choice Band
    252 Atk/216 Speed/42 Hp
    Jolly
    Pursuit
    Ice Punch / Ice Shard
    Brick Break
    Night Slash



    Dark pulse, ewww...Use 42 hp evs, it lets you survive an unboosted Azelf flamethrower, and a specs starmies surf =D.

    Electivire@Life Orb
    252 Atk/252 Speed/4HP
    Adamant
    Earthquake
    Cross Chop
    Ice Punch
    ThunderPunch

    Walled to no end, but w/e.

    Rhyperior@Leftovers
    252 HP/80 Atk/176 Def
    Adamant, Solid Rock
    Earthquake
    Stone Edge
    Roar
    Stealth Rock

    Yep

    Snorlax@leftovers
    Careful
    252HP/252 Sp.Def/4Atk
    THICK FAT
    Rest
    Sleep Talk
    Body Slam
    Crunch

    You do realize Belly drum ups attack right and Shadow ball is special. Chesto sucks , WALLS NEED THEIR LEFTOVERS. Your team also cant take status.

    Dusknoir@Leftovers
    Impish
    252 HP / 180 DEF / 76 SP.DEF
    ThunderPunch
    Fire Punch
    Will-O-Wisp
    Pain Split

    heracross eats you, so use Fire Punch.


    Porygon-Z@Silck Scarf
    Timid
    252SpAtk/252Spd
    Adaptability
    Nasty Plot
    Tri Attack
    Dark Pulse
    Ice Beam / Hidden power Fighting

    K. I prefer HP Fighting, or Magnezone, Heatran and T-Tar go OLOL.

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    ew no special attacks on physical sweepers and vise versa. there are exceptions for mixed sweepers.

    Weavile@choice band
    Jolly
    252atk/252spd/6 hp or 252 atk/216 spd/40 hp
    -Pursuit
    -Ice Shard / Ice Punch
    -Brick Break
    -Night Slash

    Life Orb for Electivire if you want.

    Snorlax@leftovers
    Careful/Sassy
    thick fat
    244Hp/236SDef/30Def
    -Body Slam / Return
    -Crunch / Earthquake
    -Rest
    -Sleep Talk

    crunch is a good option, so that gengar doesn't come and wall you.

    Quick Claw is an Hax item, and this isn't allowed in Some battles If i recall..

    Shadow Sneak is for the revenge kills and its a priority move =O
    i can't explain right now, because my brain isn't working atm, but its a really good move.

    give porygon a Life Orb for more damage if you want.


    i see that you only have one special sweeper. and no rapid spinner. this can be quite troublesome.

    so I suggest a BulkyMie!!!!
    Starmie@leftovers or Life Orb
    Timid
    170Hp/120 S.Atk/216 Spd
    -Thunderbolt/Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Rapid Spin
    -Recover
     
    good idea teaching your electivire earthquake and ice punch it's pretty hard to take out (trust me I know!)
     
    behbod55 said:
    good idea teaching your electivire earthquake and ice punch it's pretty hard to take out (trust me I know!)
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    Nope. No it's not. Very easy to take out. My Tangrowth beats it, as not even Ice Punch scares it. My Gyarados beats it, by switching into obvious moves. My Luvdisc beats it, with Sweet Kiss & Toxic.

    Yeah, I tried out Anti's Faildisc. Not so surprising results using it on Vire.

    Vire is walled to no bounds.
     
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