Five Plates

[y stri]

Here we go, another comic. It's about a big war and the *title* needed to end the war.
Warning: Sometimes, there's blood and cussing.

Prologue

 

[Esper]

You use a lot of frames for the opening monologue, or rather one repeating frame. Perhaps you could add a little something unique to a couple of them such as a person passing by. It feels a bit needless to have the same image over and over. You could also try putting the monologue into fewer panels to cut down on space.

And by the way, so we know where we stand regarding blood and cussing: what you've got is okay, but I just want to be sure you don't go past a PG-13 level.

 

[y stri]

The prolouge is creepy, I think. Aero's blank stare at the end is disturbing..

I got another comic up.

Page 1

Page 1 does not contain any Toy Story references.

I was lying about that.

And if anyone's interested in seeing the background image I used, here it is:

The Wing