Fix My Team ^_^

[Enatia]

text marked bold means that it has been changed from the original list


(starter) [stolen from Pokemon of the Week, Serebii]
Drapion @ ???
Ability: Battle Armor
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 SPD ???
-Knock Off
-Toxic Spikes
-Earthquake
-Crunch

(physical sweeper)
Blaziken @ Choice Band
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 ATK 252 SPD 6 SDEF
-Night Slash
-Blaze Kick
-Sky Uppercut
-Stone Edge

(physical sweeper)
Aerodactyl @ Choice Band
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 ATK, 252 SPD, 6 HP
-Fire Fang
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang
-Crunch

(special sweeper)
Starmie @ ???
Nature: Modest
EVs: 252 SATK 252 SPD 6 HP
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Psychic
-Thunderbolt

(special sweeper)
Gengar @ ???
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252 SATK 252 SPD 6 HP
-Psychic
-Dark Pulse
-SLudge Bomb
-Thunderbolt

(healer)
Umbreon @ Leftovers
Nature: ???
EVs: ???
-Wish
-Substitute
-Baton Pass
-Dark Pulse

 

[Chompah :x]

z0mg nais team

ignore this post, it was an accident.

 

[Anti]

Run jolly on Aero and you might wanna give it a STAB move.

 

[Iceman3k]

text marked bold means that it has been changed from the original list
I really don't know what the original list is okay


(starter)
Drapion @ Black Sludge
Ability: Battle Armor
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP / 176 Def / 80 SDef
-Knock Off
-Toxic Spikes
-Ice Fang
-Crunch
Tanks are NOT to be used for Speed.

(physical sweeper)
Blaziken @ Choice Scarf
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 ATK 252 SPD 6 SDEF
-Night Slash
-Blaze Kick
-Sky Uppercut
-Stone Edge
Infernape does this 3x better. Replace with him.

(physical sweeper)
Aerodactyl @ Choice Band
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 ATK, 252 SPD, 6 HP
-Rock Slide / Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang
-Aerial Ace
EWW. That moveset is totally uncool.
Here's some better moves. Jolly Nature is required.

(special sweeper)
Starmie @ Choice Specs
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252 SATK 252 SPD 6 HP
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Grass Knot
-Thunderbolt
+Spd Natures always on Sweepers, okay

(special sweeper)
Gengar @ Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252 SATK 252 SPD 6 HP
-Hypnosis
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-Thunderbolt
Dark Pulse and Psychic on Gengar? Total fail.

(healer)
Umbreon @ Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EVs: 212 HP / 176 Def / 120 SDef
-Wish
-Protect
-Yawn
-Dark Pulse

This team has way too many sweepers and hardly any damage absorbers. You lack a special tank, Jolteon can 1-man-army that team, and you have total Choice Scarfed Heracross problems.

 

[Azonic]

Like Iceman said - you NEED more walling pokemon.

 

[Arcknight316]

Here are sme Special Wall options:
UU:
Mantine
Tentacruel (I think....?)
BL:
Slowbro
Slowking
OU:
Blissey
Milotic
Regice (I think....?)

Yeah, I probably got the categories mixed up -_-

 

[Azonic]

Lets not forget Cradily or Claydol. They get moves that boost Defense and Special Defense (Stockpile / Cosmic Power). And Cradily also gets a recovery move.

 

[Enatia]

so what's my fire type going to be if i take out infernape/blaziken?
i would like to use a slowbro however.

 

[Anti]

Here are sme Special Wall options:
UU:
Mantine
Tentacruel (I think....?)
BL:
Slowbro no...
Slowking
OU:
Blissey
Milotic
Regice (I think....?) it has 200 base SDef, I'd hope so.

Yeah, I probably got the categories mixed up -_-

You in fact did. Slowbro is for absorbing physical attacks, not special. though CM helps it, it can't seitch in to them at all. Just to clear that up.