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You did? ...What does Kris look like...? (Almost afraid to ask :O)
 
Like a kid haha. I drew him next to harley. his beanie was hard D:
it's uploading to DA now.

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Uh...I guess he looks okay. He doesn't stray too far from his description (although in cartoon form that's probably almost exactly what he'd look like =/)

So good job :)
 
YOU GUESS?!?!! I SLAVED OVER THESE GUYS.

oh yeah, sorry for the pokemon crappiness. srsly, i made that espeon really fugly and those umbreons are like walking turds. i've made nicer ones, i just cbf making them nice as the people are.
 
WAAAH!
No, I mean they all look good but i'm saying I guess he looks pretty good compared to how I picture him.

I'm used to criticizing my sister's drawings too so...yeah, that may rub off a little.
 
Just realized the way they have the types set up on Pokemon their is only one with Flyging as its Primary... I'll just make it so Normals primary doesn't factor into the transforming equation and poof, no longer limited to Tornelos.

Also those pictures are pretty good, my sister also does/did art on SheezyArt, i'm not sure what her account name is but her name on this site is RainbowMunchies[not that she ever gets on anymore]
Either way great drawings.

Just a bonus for the characters I created so far:

Name: Ice
Hair color: Light Blue
Favorite form: Articuno
Fun fact: Oblivious to Dragon's love

Name: Dragon
Hair color: Orange and Blue[I'm going by the color of the type icons]
Favorite form: Latias
Fun fact: Only one with dual colored hair

Name: Psychic
Hair color: Dark pink
Favorite form: Mew
Fun fact: She can hear everyone but Dark's thoughts

Name: Dark
Hair color: Black
Favorite form: Umbreon
Fun fact: Loves Psychic

Even those these two were only mentioned, not actually seen.

Name: Water
Hair color: Blue
Favorite form: Floatzel
Fun fact: Male and in love with Fire

Name: Fire
Hair color: Red
Favorite form: Ninetales
Fun fact: Female and in love with Water

Fun fact: When they touch the air becomes filled with steam ^_^

I'll get around to the others at some point I guess
 
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(sees the drawing)

I think everyone looks good. o.O Although I didn't really imagine Miharu like that. XD
 
Hey Michaela, how do you like my story so far?
Her it is just so you don't have to scroll up.

*sigh* everyone but me.
*Starts thinking up a pretty good plot line for a story*

Edit: Well, heres the story, The basic concept is that every Pokemon type is represented by one of these beings, who are named their type, and who can transform into any pokemon whose main type is their type[i.e. Psychic can become Mew. Dark can become Absol, Dragon can become Dragonite, Grass can become Bulbasaur, etc. But in contrast Ice could not become a sneasel because Sneasel has Ice as its secondary type, not its main]

Psychic was talking to Dragon, "So you can hear all our thoughts" Dragon said skeptically

"Of course, i'm Psychic, it makes sense, doesn't it?" she replied, "Well actually, I can't hear Dark's, but he's the only one" she added

"So do you know what i'm thinking of?" Dragon asked curiously

"Yes, you're thinking of Ice" she said in an exasperated voice, "you spend nearly every moment awake, and many asleep thinking of her. Not that I needed to be psychic to know that" she added

Dragon blushed, "Is it really that obvious?" he asked

"It seems to be obvious to everyone except Ice" she replied, "Also I can feel her coming" Psychic added. Ice soon appeared behind them, "Hey, do you guys wanna go play or something?" she asked. Dragon immediately said yes, You guys go ahead, i'm just going to relax here" she replied thoughtfully knowing Dragon would want to be alone with Ice, "Tell her how you feel" she said telepathically to Dragon. He smiled and gave a nod as the two walked out of her mind's eye's field of view.

Psychic was laying on the grass, just enjoying the sunshine, suddenly "Hey", Psychic jumped before realizing it was Dark.

"Sorry, forgot you can't feel my mind like the others" he said apologetically, "So how are you doing?" he asked thoughtfully.

"I'm doing well, just as well as yesterday I guess, a little better maybe" she said, "Is their anything in particular you wanted to talk about?" she asked.

"Sort of, I just can't seem to remember something" he said in an odd voice, "I can't seem to remember their being anything before this" he said, gesturing to the hills and fields.

"If it was important then we would remember it, wouldn't we? Plus, whats so wrong with here" she imitated his gesture, "its nice, theirs plenty of room, and no one seems interested in running us out or anything" she said.

"I guess your right, it is nice here and if it was important we would remember, wouldn't we?" he said, "Anyways, wanna go play tag or something?" he asked hopefully

"Do Fire and Water love each other" she answered

"Yes, and I wish they'd stop kissing, it creates clouds of steam when they do" he said playfully, "Now whose it?" he asked

"You are" she said, and with that she transformed into a mew and flew out of Dark's reach, Dark retaliating by turning into a Murkrow and flying after her.

OOC: I might continue this later, depends on how much Ichiro rages about it.

Skymins drawing of Anthony looks exactly like Stephen Stills lol
 
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I just realized, this is Scott Pilgrim drawing style. Miharu looks like Kim
 
Josh looks like Neil I think
Miharu looks like Stacy, but it might be Kim, been a little while since i've looked at the books
Kellyn looks like other Scott[Maybe]
I can't place a character to Harley or Kris
Anthony definitely looks like Stephen Stills
 
I think everyone looks good. o.O Although I didn't really imagine Miharu like that. XD
I think I made her a little fat. :(
I gave her asian eyes since she's asian like Knives Chau. Her face is a little fat too. If you could draw a quick even a stick figure, i could draw her again lol.

THAT GOES FOR EVERYONE!

Skymins drawing of Anthony looks exactly like Stephen Stills lol
Yeah I was thinking that as I drew that. Beardy guy, i never really imagined anthony as that before i read the SU.

I just realized, this is Scott Pilgrim drawing style. Miharu looks like Kim
ALL SHE NEEDS IS FRECKLES!

Josh looks like Neil I think
Miharu looks like Stacy, but it might be Kim, been a little while since i've looked at the books
Kellyn looks like other Scott[Maybe]
I can't place a character to Harley or Kris
Anthony definitely looks like Stephen Stills
I think Josh looks like other scott with those dark eyes. Miharu is a bit like stacey and knives combined.
Harley and chris are kind of style clashes. d: probably should havegiven harley eyelashes.
YES LOL.

IN OTHER NEWS was PC down for everyone?
 
Yes, it was. Annoying. D=

Guys, wait on the splitting up thing. Ichiro told me he would tell me what to do (;~;) so I don't ruin his plot. XD
 
Oh, well, anyone mind if I post some more stories, just like little stories like before..
Also I didn't spend all day at home, Went to the National History Museum in D.C. with my sisters and mom, saw the flag that inspired the Star Spangled Banner.
Would have gone to the National Art Museum but we got lost and it got late, since we got back i've been listening to Moonlight Sonata and Beethovens 1st[all four movements] on my laptop.

Edit: *RAGE!!!*
I got like two pages worth of a story up and then when I submit the website went down and it all got lost ]=
I'm gonna keep that story to Wordpad now and copy and paste so I don't lose anything
Soooooooooooo...
How have your nights been so far?
 
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Not night yet for me, but today I played at a concert, went on here and started writing a post, cleaned the bird's cage and am in the process of writing a musical! EXCITING STUFF.
 
Not night yet for me, but today I played at a concert, went on here and started writing a post, cleaned the bird's cage and am in the process of writing a musical! EXCITING STUFF.

Writing a musical?
Wow, your creative talent puts mine to complete and utter shame.
 
Hey guys, eugh full time work is aweful, but the money is good.
Skymin, I love the drawings, really good! Anthony looks quite like his SU, and pretty awesome at that.
Still catching up on Main Thread, might get an post up tonight. Be warned, there might be some japanese in it, I'm translating some stuff for a family friend and they wanted it by tonight!

EDIT: New post is up.
Michaela, I'll PM you tomorrow when I get a chance.
 
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Alright, glad to see you on.
If I run across anything i'm unfamiliar with i'll just run it through google translator one word at a time[since sentence fragments always get jumbled]
At the moment though i'm just writing a little story on wordpad, not sure how much time i've spent on it but I remember it being before midnight when I started and now its almost 2 a.m. where I live.
 
I'm writing it with my friend about the so called true story of my music teacher. d:
by the way, this is what harley looks like when her BANDAGES are off. PLUS THE BLOODSHOT EYE! it might be a little exaggerated but you know

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I liked that speech, Josh might just develop a liking for Harley after all then, but for now it is a bit of awe and respect.
 
I liked that speech, Josh might just develop a liking for Harley after all then, but for now it is a bit of awe and respect.
WHICH TURNS TO HOT, PASSIONATE LOVE. Josh doesn't hold some kind of love interest for Miharu still does he, since she has some kind of information I can't remember. The guns, right?
 
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