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form my old rhyme book...PG-14 i guess =3

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Albel the Wicked
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    i'll post my more serious poems here:

    Purgatorio
    I trudge through the dark, i'll never see your face
    No matter how hard i try, i'll never see that place.
    Valhalla, Elysian Fields, Heaven, i'll never reach
    Because I don't agree with what you preach.
    A noble pagan, a learned one
    Who will never see the sun
    I want to be free, to move on, to go,
    But i'm trapped here in Purgatorio...
     
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    Ooh! Me likes! >=3 Purgatorio means Purgatory, right? The place between Heaven and hell? xD;; Yeah it is.

    I think you are basically saying you will be stuck there forever because you don't agree with teachings of certain religions.. That's probably only scratching the surface though ^^-;

    Great job on this poem! No rating though. xD;; I don't rate poems. Good job anyways, Matt-kun! Keep it up. ~origin
     
    nah...it means i don't necessarily accept every teaching in christianity so i'm gonna be stuck in purgatory XD but close enough
     
    0.o I so love this poem! Speaks the truth. Guess you and I'll be stuck there since I also don't agree with Christian teachings, that's why I converted to Wicca. But anyway I totally loved the poem, short but deep ^_^
     
    o.o Like Shadow said, short but sweet. I like it, Matt. Maybe that's cause I'll be joining you and her in Purgatory. XD
     
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