GFA's Pixel Place

[Myzou]

I personally like the bottom misty :) And max isn't half bad :O But there's just something lacking that makes it say "Max" to me.

 

[GFA]

Hmm... me to, *at Misty* but I still want to know others opinions... Yeah, I'm not really sure what to do with Max, he lacks something I agree...

Introducing the very first anime co-ordinator, May!



If you ask me, she looks like a lard butt... Her sprite I mean

 

[Myzou]

Haha, I can't get over the fact her bandana looks more like a beret XD I'd suggest making her ponytail things come out the side of the bandana, not under it, or it makes it look like a hat~

 

[GFA]

Foowie on May. I'll fix her lateer... Anywho, the brand new Misty with the bottom hair!

 

[Atomic Reactor]

hat on may needs to be redone

mistys hair still looks bad.
the ponytail is too big

maxs head is to big.

 

[GFA]

Oi, I know about the pony tail being to big, I'm still working on that. As for Max, ... meh its the same size as the class he's modeled after. As for May... she's taking a vacation. *Mwahaha!*

How's this for Misty?

 

[Atomic Reactor]

take a lil off the bottom of the pony tail.

ok, then its maxs hair.
its to big. try to work on that.

 

[Simoo-n]

I think your really good!
but i agrre that max's head (or hair) is to big.

 

[GFA]

OK AR, how's this?

 

[Simoo-n]

I think the first one was better (O)

 

[GFA]

... You mean when she had more on the bottom? Because the newest one's O and A are the same...

 

[Myzou]

I think the first one was better (O)

They're the same <_<

The top one has her Original (O) outfit, the bottom has the Advanced (A) one.

Personally, I prefer the older one (not the oldest one, but the one before this), I didn't think the extra hair looked too big.

 

[GFA]

Neither did I, lets see what AR thinks before I change it back.

Edit: I'd also like to say that this is my first thread to get to 2 pages, not to mention 3, so thank you all for the support!

 

[Anastasia.R]

OK AR, how's this?

The 2nd spite might need some darker shades on the clothes, since the outlines stands out alot. (Black outline, right?)

But, still, not bad I.M.O. ;]​

 

[GFA]

Eh, I'm not really good outlines. What do you think I should do, use a dark yellow outline, or darken the inside colors?

 

[Anastasia.R]

Eh, I'm not really good outlines. What do you think I should do, use a dark yellow outline, or darken the inside colors?

Hmm, maybe for the outlines you should use a dark yellow outlines. And for shades, a bit of a darker shade of yellow (inside, on the clothes).​

 

[Atomic Reactor]

not a huge change =/
idk. might as well leave it.

 

[GFA]

OK, lets see what I can do... Using a dark yellow outline dosn't quite work I'm afraid, so how does this look?



@ AR: OK

 

[TwinBroz]

Study the D/P overworld style a bit more to see that there are simplified colors and not much shading yet it looks stunning. Look at D/P's original Professor Oak and compare/study to improve.

Im saying this because I am very experianced with sprite artwork, ESPECIALLY Pokemon styled sprites. If I have the time I will show you examples.

 

[GFA]

... Was there a point in doing that besides to up your post count?

Anywho, I made a Sprite of my Orange Archipelago RP character, Bon Choc, he's my first sprite, and still a heavy edit: