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u know pokespecial? I'm thinkin of writin a manga on this thread based on it.
wat do u guys think?
wat do u guys think?
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Good Idea for a fan-made manga
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well i cant draw well im just plannin on doin serebii-like manga summaries
i just did the first chapter but it got DELETED!!!
DX
its gonna be based on the pokespecial Diamond/Pearl/Platinum saga
Well, here's the first chapter! Enjoy!
Things 2 Know:
Plat, the main character, is a young trainer who seeks to conquer the battle frontier with his trusted Empoleon, named Empo. A while back, I made a chapter explaining all this in more detail, but decided just to put aside the idea and get on with the main plot. Plat is currently on his way to the frontier via the ship in Snowpoint City.
All the characters besides Plat are the same as the ones from Pokespecial, so I don't really need to explain them.
Chapter 1: Vs. Aggron
On the S.S. (whatever ship's name is in Sinnoh), Plat eagerly awaits his arrival at the battle frontier. Looking at his Empoleon, Empo, he asks whether or not it is ready, and the penguin pokemon replies with a determined nod from inside its pokeball.
Over the intercom, the captain announces that they will be arriving at the frontier in ten minutes, and Plat gtes all hyped up. He runs out onto the deck, and, surely enough, sees the frontier looming on the horizon.
In the ship's control room, a man in a white jumpsuit stares down at the unconscious captain. He coolly states that he wouldn't have resorted to brutal force if the man had simply backed away. Snickering, the man turns to the control panel of the ship and commences to hack into the ship's main system. This, however, causes the security alarm to go off, and, cursing, the man swiftly exits the room.
Back on deck, Plat hears the alarm, and- as rash as ever- dashes back into the ship. Running through the halls, Plat accidentally collides with the jumpsuit man, and is knocked down. He apologizes, but is then pushed aside by the man, who keeps running. Plat shouts at the man for his rudeness, but is angered even more when he is paid no attention to. Quite annoyed, the boy begins to give chase.
Eventually catching up with the man, Plat continues to shout. Annoyed, the man yells at Plat to stop following him, and commences to send out his Aggron.
Stunned at the man's brutality, Plat barely avoids a hyper beam from Aggron. Thinking quick, Plat sends out Empo and orders an Ice Beam, only to be blown backwards into the wall by another hyper beam. Injured slightly, Plat begins to get up, but bolts when he suddenly sees that his opponent is no longer there.
On the top of the ship, the jumpsuit man is in the middle of a call on his Poketch. After hanging up, the man looks up to see the battle frontier straight ahead. After a slight pause, the man grins that things are about to get intresting…
Chapter 2- Vs. Magmortar Spoilers
Shortly after arriving at the frontier, Plat meets Flint, a member of the Elite Four! Plat is eager to test his skills… but can he stand up to one of the strongest trainers in Sinnoh?
i just did the first chapter but it got DELETED!!!
DX
its gonna be based on the pokespecial Diamond/Pearl/Platinum saga
Well, here's the first chapter! Enjoy!
Things 2 Know:
Plat, the main character, is a young trainer who seeks to conquer the battle frontier with his trusted Empoleon, named Empo. A while back, I made a chapter explaining all this in more detail, but decided just to put aside the idea and get on with the main plot. Plat is currently on his way to the frontier via the ship in Snowpoint City.
All the characters besides Plat are the same as the ones from Pokespecial, so I don't really need to explain them.
Chapter 1: Vs. Aggron
On the S.S. (whatever ship's name is in Sinnoh), Plat eagerly awaits his arrival at the battle frontier. Looking at his Empoleon, Empo, he asks whether or not it is ready, and the penguin pokemon replies with a determined nod from inside its pokeball.
Over the intercom, the captain announces that they will be arriving at the frontier in ten minutes, and Plat gtes all hyped up. He runs out onto the deck, and, surely enough, sees the frontier looming on the horizon.
In the ship's control room, a man in a white jumpsuit stares down at the unconscious captain. He coolly states that he wouldn't have resorted to brutal force if the man had simply backed away. Snickering, the man turns to the control panel of the ship and commences to hack into the ship's main system. This, however, causes the security alarm to go off, and, cursing, the man swiftly exits the room.
Back on deck, Plat hears the alarm, and- as rash as ever- dashes back into the ship. Running through the halls, Plat accidentally collides with the jumpsuit man, and is knocked down. He apologizes, but is then pushed aside by the man, who keeps running. Plat shouts at the man for his rudeness, but is angered even more when he is paid no attention to. Quite annoyed, the boy begins to give chase.
Eventually catching up with the man, Plat continues to shout. Annoyed, the man yells at Plat to stop following him, and commences to send out his Aggron.
Stunned at the man's brutality, Plat barely avoids a hyper beam from Aggron. Thinking quick, Plat sends out Empo and orders an Ice Beam, only to be blown backwards into the wall by another hyper beam. Injured slightly, Plat begins to get up, but bolts when he suddenly sees that his opponent is no longer there.
On the top of the ship, the jumpsuit man is in the middle of a call on his Poketch. After hanging up, the man looks up to see the battle frontier straight ahead. After a slight pause, the man grins that things are about to get intresting…
Chapter 2- Vs. Magmortar Spoilers
Shortly after arriving at the frontier, Plat meets Flint, a member of the Elite Four! Plat is eager to test his skills… but can he stand up to one of the strongest trainers in Sinnoh?
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I believe your idea would work better in the Fanfiction section. You can get reviews there and helpful tips.
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hmm
oh well i kinda thought to put it here since its the manga section
i dont wanna interfere with the other guy writing a dp manga hes cool too
do u like it tho
uhh... im not gonna bother with this one cuz everyone knows wats gonna happen
srry gay double post
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr that pisses me off so bad!!!!!!
oh well i kinda thought to put it here since its the manga section
i dont wanna interfere with the other guy writing a dp manga hes cool too
do u like it tho
uhh... im not gonna bother with this one cuz everyone knows wats gonna happen
srry gay double post
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr that pisses me off so bad!!!!!!
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Does it matter if someone is already writing about a fanfiction that is based off of the samething. I'll review it if it gets there.
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true...
oh by the way THANK YOU for breaking that gay double post thing
yea i'll see wat i can do about that
ok new thread is in fanfiction section its "my platinum manga"
oh by the way THANK YOU for breaking that gay double post thing
yea i'll see wat i can do about that
ok new thread is in fanfiction section its "my platinum manga"
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Please don't throw the word "gay" around as a slang term. It is an insult to a large group of people in the world, some of which I am friends with.
Also, the double posting merging is there because the community rules don't allow double posting unless you are posting in a certain section, which does not include the Revision Bin. Before complaining about something that is a part of the rules, I would suggest you read them.
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Er...right-o then.
I believe that this would be safer off closed. Since the author doesn't have a use for it.
I believe that this would be safer off closed. Since the author doesn't have a use for it.
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