GP's Art

[= GPR =]

I didn't know that iaza can do animations!

That's what i have been using lately for transparencies! Hmm... that is a helpful site!
Thanks for animating it for me! It looks great, and not all jpegy with the divets...

I'm still working on my edited frames... so his arm doesnt look like it's just being pulled from it's elbow...

Thanks!

(p.s. a bit faster would do better...i'll get it though! Thanks!)

 

[tbone1094]

nice job your art is fairly nice

 

[= GPR =]

nice job your art is fairly nice

<sigh> i could use a bit more helpful crit then that... what do like about them? which ones specifically? why do like them?

... i appreciate the post, and that you hold my work in such high regard, don't get me wrong... but i would appreciate a bit more helpful feedback.

Yeah, that about sums it up... again...

 

[Yume Tsuki]

^

The back of it's head and the spot i point at those are very straight..

 

[= GPR =]

Hmm... you're right frosslass... he's almost kinda jelly bean shaped isn't he? well, that's alright though, i think it looks good like that... unless others agree with you...then i might change it.

 

[mangaroll]

<sigh> i could use a bit more helpful crit then that... what do like about them? which ones specifically? why do like them?

... i appreciate the post, and that you hold my work in such high regard, don't get me wrong... but i would appreciate a bit more helpful feedback.

Well, slowqueen is a bit unusual... You should have recolored the shell using the palette of the actual rock on slowking/slowbro.

Also your RP character's guitar looks like it has no shading and outline.

Laplit's shell (The part with the light shining on it) Should have a lighter color. It sticks out.Also humsaw's wings looks... uneven...


But I like the shading on all of your re-edited fakemon, and your gyarados sprites are beautiful.=p

 

[= GPR =]

Well, slowqueen is a bit unusual... You should have recolored the shell using the palette of the actual rock on slowking/slowbro.

Also your RP character's guitar looks like it has no shading and outline.

Laplit's shell (The part with the light shining on it) Should have a lighter color. It sticks out.Also humsaw's wings looks... uneven...


But I like the shading on all of your re-edited fakemon, and your gyarados sprites are beautiful.=p

Thankyou so much mangaroll! This is great crit actually! Hm... where to start?

slowqueen... definitely not my best, but i think your right. the clamperl blue isn't cutting it, it seems to detract. I will go back recolor it...

As for Lance's guitar... i really don't know what to do about it... i tried to make it look "wooden"... instead it is just a tanned up mess... i might just entirely redo it, or take it out, or something... i don't know...

as for laplit, i will not be changing that one... i actually used the pallette directly off Lapras, and as that was the color used on the light spot of lapras, i transfered that tone to laplit.

As for humsaw, forget about it. it is LONG GONE! i gave up on it a long time ago! the anatomy is messy, the pose is awkward, the coloration is lacking, and just in general, it is an ugly sprite... wait a minute... i made that one didn't i...

But really, THANKS! I appreciate your ideas, and your crit! The slowqueen coloration never came to my head, so thanks on that!

Take care everyone!

Keep Spriting!

 

[= GPR =]

My newest and most probably best sprite ever!!!

It is the new milodos! I LUV IT!!!

My only concern with it is the shading and the back fin (technically milodos' right). I need crit on that please!

 

[= GPR =]

A little something old i dug up! a secret base i had made...

It's called the fissured shrine.

 

[= GPR =]

Some wiked cody pop art i made... there's actually some spriting techniques here... among them recoloring and editing...

Spoiler:

 

[= GPR =]

I was just playing around when i made this one...

It's a snorlax pokedoll under the possesion of a banette!

<shiver>

gosh that's creepy...

 

[Nina]

I was just playing around when i made this one...

It's a snorlax pokedoll under the possesion of a banette!

<shiver>

gosh that's creepy...

It's very creepy! But in a good way! The stitches make it look very interesting.

 

[= GPR =]

It's very creepy! But in a good way! The stitches make it look very interesting.

yeah... not my best work...

the actual fusion editing is pretty good looking...then i kinda ruined it with the stitching...

 

[Gary the Magic Fairy]

My newest and most probably best sprite ever!!!

It is the new milodos! I LUV IT!!!

My only concern with it is the shading and the back fin (technically milodos' right). I need crit on that please!

Spoiler:

Sorry if it's hard to tell Pink & Red apart. The red is pointing to the outline near the top; the pink is the shading inside.

My criticisms in the spoiler.

I do like the head & tail, though. XD

 

[= GPR =]

(a half an hour after fainting and having Cody peck me awake...)

Kenji, there are NO words to describe how i feel right now! Wow, i am gonna pass out (...again...)

Truly, you define good critism! From now on, when ever some one spams up my thread with lame crit or comments, i'm just gonna refer them to post #174!

(One minute while i take a breather!)

Now down to buisness!

1. My sprite has to be 64x64 and 16 bit... which leaves me a little less room and coloration than i would have liked. i can, and will, definitely darken the medium navy tone, or lighten the lightest.

2. Outline shading: i thought it looked a bit weird in some parts, but i guess you really pointed them out. (Thanks, thanks thanks!!!) For the tan and the navy, since i only have three tones of those colors, i can really only outline in those color's darkest tones... it's actually very frustrating! i'm very limited in the outline shading on the crest, which is probably the worst looking outlining anyways... i only have three colors to use for shading and outlining, not including black... same applies with the fins/wings... i'm not sure what to do about that...

3. the shading in the center of the body was also super hard. that has been my problem with milodos. i can't seem to get the tubular shading down. someone (i'm sorry to whom it was, but i dont remember) showed me how to shade tubes, or rather they modeled it, but i still have trouble on that shapes shaddowing.

4. the far right side of the pixel was actually a choice of the lesser evil. it was originally one large line, but it looked WAY to flat. so i gave it a bit more curve, where it did seem to step out a bit to far. But then i think the "Pointyness" comes from that one notch on the left of the segment. maybe by smoothing that out, it will loose the point, sharp look... and become more round.

5. as for the curviture of the body, i'll try it right off your model and see how it looks!

It may take me a day or two to redo this one, since i'm also making some other stuff at the moment, but mark my words, it will be redone!!!

Thankyou so much Kenji!!! I appreciate it soooooooooooooooo much! Your a great help, a great spriter, and a great friend!!!

 

[Cholo]

i think all ur gyrados sprites are great and ur sprite guitar man guy..lol i forgot the word for it right now..anyway nice work ^-^

 

[= GPR =]

oooh! my first victim of this ploy!

Cholo, please review post 174 to see how to properly critisize! (Granted, you don't have to be that in depth...)

but really, what do like about them?
which ones in particular do you like?
what do you think i need to work on?
why do you think these things?

I appreciate your post, but please, give me a hand here!

 

[Cholo]

haha i had feeling something like that was gonna happen while tryin to get 15 posts so i can make my thread..
lol but now that i have i guess i could be a little bit more thorough
the lance layer guy was very well done except i think u need a little bit more shading on the clothing (the hair's perfect) and the guitar looks great also, considering it was made from scratch (it was made from scratch right?) either way it looks good..
and the first 3 gyrados's were beautiful i think it was the way u colored it and the rest of the revamps were also done perfectly..
uhh thats about it i guess haha

 

[= GPR =]

Thanks for being a great sport! I was joking... but thanks anyhow!

I've never had anyone say something about the jacket's shading... where do you think it needs work?

As for the guitar... it wasn't scratched...as a matter of fact, it was ripped, recolored, resized and retextured... all resulting in a death trap of heavy crit! I actually agree with most everyone else and say the tones are to light... but if you like it, i'm glad! Your like only the second person...

as for gyarados revamps... WRONG!!! they are not done to perfection... as a matter of fact, i am a failure! i did not properly reshade them, hence they are only recolors...at least the old ones are anyways... as for the those two loose pokemon yellow sprites, they are properly done, to perfection!

Thanks again for the reply, and i appreciate you feedback! (it was much better than the first time around!) Now you'll know what to expect and you'll have an idea of what you want to recieve on your thread!

Keep Spriting Folks!

 

[Cholo]

I've never had anyone say something about the jacket's shading... where do you think it needs work?

as for gyarados revamps... WRONG!!! they are not done to perfection...

the jacket just seems like it needs a lighter shade blue on the left of the sprite...
other than that it looks good and the pants' shading are fine

as for the gyrados' i still think they look awesome haha..