Iveechan
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- Seen Jan 12, 2006
GUILTY BY DESIGN
By Katelyn, aka Iveechan
*Note: These are the same characters in the episode "The Punchy Pokemon"...boy, what a crappy title. Anyway, I don't remember if the man had a name and I'm too lazy to look at episode guides, so bear with me, 'cause I'm doing this from memory.
***
He watched the small modest house with intense golden eyes. His claws dug into the cold earth, his muscles tensed, his heart pounded angrily. In that house was the man who ruined his life. The latch on the door started to turn. Now was his chance for revenge...
Five years prior...
"Remember when it hatches, let it see you first. That way it will become more attached."
"Yes, I know."
The breeder, a young man with pleasant blue hair, led Rick and his daughter Rebecca to the incubation room. It housed rows upon rows of pink, geletanious Ditto eggs. The eggs contained some of the rarest Pokemon known to man, including ones yet to be named. The breeder picked one of the eggs up.
"Here it is," he said. "This egg contains a Tyrogue. The father was a powerful Hitmonlee, a champion fighter. This one has good blood."
The breeder handed Rick the egg. The surface was warm and soft. "When will it hatch?" Rick questioned.
"Any day now," said the breeder. "Just keep it under a heat lamp in a quiet room and it'll be fine...and you have to be there when it hatches. You have no idea how many Pokemon came out traumatized when there was no caretaker in site at the time of their birth."
"No problem!" Rick beamed. The breeder handed Rick the egg in a special box that would prevent it from rolling around. Rick wrote out the check...$2,973.95.
Rebecca sighed. 'There goes my college education,' she thought.
***
Almost a week had passed. Rebecca was in the kitchen with the pink egg. She adjusted the red-lighted heat lamp and turned the egg over. It was surprisingly heavy, about 4 pounds.
"It should've hatched by now!" she heard Rick yell from another room. "That d@mn breeder, I should demand my money back!" The egg flinched - it could still hear outside noises.
"I'm sure it will be tonight!" said Rebecca. She stoked the egg's smooth surface. 'Please let it be tonight...we depend on you,' she thought.
About a year ago, Rebecca's mother, the sole breadwinner of the family, was killed in a car accident. Her father Rick has been deeply depressed and near suicidal ever since. He was too upset to even hold a decent job. One day, he saw a sign for the P-1 Grand Prix...a Fighting Pokemon tournament held every four years. The winner recieved a rather large cash prize, among other things. With only 6 months to go until the next tournament, Rick had to get himself a good Pokemon quickly, so he invested his life savings into the egg he hoped would get his family out of their rut.
Suddenly, the egg started moving. A tear appeared on the surface and translucent pink liquid poured out. Rebecca shot up. "Daddy, it's hatching, come quick!"
Rick zoomed into the room, almost tripping. "Don't let it see you, don't let it see you!"
Rebecca moved out of the way. They watched the egg intently. Finally, a small Tyrogue slipped out. Rick was so overjoyed, he picked it up in one hand and held it to the light to get a better look at it. The Tyrogue squirmed in his strong grip. Unlike the more reconizeable fighter, the hatchling had almost no crest definition, was more of a dust rose tone with paler coloration on the belly, and its proportions resembled that of a newborn monkey. It had a short lizard-like tail and its feet looked almost like a small dinosaurs', the four clawed toes were shorter on the outside and longer on the inside *I always draw Tyrogue with four digits on the hands and feet, three looks odd to me*
"Look at him, Rebecca," said Rick. "He may look like a scrawny runt now, but one day he will make us rich! I think I'll name him Champ...that sound good?"
"He'll be dead if you don't let me clean him off!" Rebecca said. She was quite knowledgable about Pokemon births, thanks to her free-roaming pet Meowth who presented her with a fresh litter of kittens every few months.
Rick waited a few moments. "Ok, he opened his eyes, so he should be imprinted on me now! Here you go, be careful."
Rebecca gathered the Tyrogue up in a thick towel and vigorously rubbed off the liquid. Then, making sure her grip was secure, gave one quick shake, to get the remaining fluid out of the Tyrogue's lungs. He cried out, his shrill squeal sounding like a bird's chirp.
"Oi...kinda earpiercing, huh?" Rick laughed. He looked at the clock. "Wow, sure is late. Let's go to bed, I should wake up early to start training Champ."
"Training so soon?" Rebecca questioned. "But he won't even be a full day old!"
"The sooner the better!" said Rick. He took the towel wrapped Tyrogue from his daughter. "You better be worth what I payed for, Champ. Good night, Becca!"
"Good night Daddy!" Rebecca has never seen her father so happy and hopeful before. She hoped it would last...
It was the next morning. Despite what he said, Rick had woken up pretty late. When Rebecca came downstairs, the Tyrogue, Champ, was sitting in Rick's lap eating a peach. Actually he was licking the inside. Rebecca noticed Champ had a cloth wrap around his waist, a old custom which stemmed from tha belief that the center of the body is the most important and should always be kept warm.
"Didja start training yet?" Rebecca asked.
"Huh? Oh, no, thanks for the reminder!" He stood up, causing Champ to grip onto his pants leg for dear life. The Tyrogue slid down and hit the floor.
"Be careful!" said Rebecca. She ran to help Champ, but he leered at her.
"Hey Rebecca, watch this!" said Rick. He took a few steps and paused. Champ quickly followed Rick and stopped right next to him. "This imprinting really works! Ok, buddy, time to train!"
Rick didn't really know how to train a Pokemon, but thought the experience of watching "Rocky" movies would help. He took Champ to a large hanging punching bag set up in a shed.
"Ok, Champ, see this thing?" Rick said to the little Pokemon. Champ was busy watching some tiny dust particles gently floating in the sunlight. They were so interesting...where did they come from?
"Champ? Hello! Good, got your attention. Now, this thing...Champ!"
Champ clumsily wandered to the ray of light just barely shining through a dusty window. The dust particles continued dancing in their clear yellow ballroom. Champ reached for them...
"Dammit," Rick said quiety under his breath. He swiftly stormed over to Champ and grabbed him around the waist, his fingers pressing into Champ's belly, then angrily dropped him infront of the bag. Champ blinked and looked around, surprised and confused by that sudden action.
"Ok, good," said Rick. "Now, do as I do. First you stand with your arms like this, then..."
Champ suddenly noticed an interesting tear in the bag. A long piece of dark string was dangling from it. Champ touched the string, pulling at it with his short fingers.
Suddenly, WHACK! Something struck Champ on the side of his head. The force caused him to collide painfully against the hard concrete floor. Champ looked up and saw Rick glaring at him, teeth clenched.
"Look, stupid, do as I say or I'll hit you again!" Rick snarled.
"Ty?" Champ questioned.
Rick yanked Champ up by the arm and set him in front of the bag again. Rick took a fighting stance, his fists near his face, and then gave the bag a punch so strong, it swung wildly and a cloud of dust flew out. He looked at Champ. "Now, you do the same."
Champ imitated Rick exactly. After he punched the bag also, he looked at his trainer for approval. Rick seemed pleased.
"Good! Now do it again. Good, good, now do it with more power. No, I said more power. More power I say!"
WHACK!
Later that evening, Rick and Champ entered the house. Rebecca was in the kitchen sitting on a stool near the stove, waiting for the pot of water to boil. She smiled when she saw her father enter.
"I'm glad you're finally back! You must be famished, you were out there all day! How's Champ doing?"
Rebecca jumped down, ran up to the Tyrogue, and knelt to his level. She was surprised. He was covered in dirt, had scrapes on his body, and a dark greenish purple bruise was forming around his eye. Champ backed away from Rebecca, pressed himself against Rick's leg and growled.
"He doesn't listen half the time," said Rick. "This runt was a waste of money."
"He's only a day old!" said Rebecca. "Give him time, he'll get better! This is 'training' he won't become a champion over night!"
"He better be a d@mn good fighter by the tournament," said Rick. "I'll have to train him harder tomorrow!"
*more to come...*
By Katelyn, aka Iveechan
*Note: These are the same characters in the episode "The Punchy Pokemon"...boy, what a crappy title. Anyway, I don't remember if the man had a name and I'm too lazy to look at episode guides, so bear with me, 'cause I'm doing this from memory.
***
He watched the small modest house with intense golden eyes. His claws dug into the cold earth, his muscles tensed, his heart pounded angrily. In that house was the man who ruined his life. The latch on the door started to turn. Now was his chance for revenge...
Five years prior...
"Remember when it hatches, let it see you first. That way it will become more attached."
"Yes, I know."
The breeder, a young man with pleasant blue hair, led Rick and his daughter Rebecca to the incubation room. It housed rows upon rows of pink, geletanious Ditto eggs. The eggs contained some of the rarest Pokemon known to man, including ones yet to be named. The breeder picked one of the eggs up.
"Here it is," he said. "This egg contains a Tyrogue. The father was a powerful Hitmonlee, a champion fighter. This one has good blood."
The breeder handed Rick the egg. The surface was warm and soft. "When will it hatch?" Rick questioned.
"Any day now," said the breeder. "Just keep it under a heat lamp in a quiet room and it'll be fine...and you have to be there when it hatches. You have no idea how many Pokemon came out traumatized when there was no caretaker in site at the time of their birth."
"No problem!" Rick beamed. The breeder handed Rick the egg in a special box that would prevent it from rolling around. Rick wrote out the check...$2,973.95.
Rebecca sighed. 'There goes my college education,' she thought.
***
Almost a week had passed. Rebecca was in the kitchen with the pink egg. She adjusted the red-lighted heat lamp and turned the egg over. It was surprisingly heavy, about 4 pounds.
"It should've hatched by now!" she heard Rick yell from another room. "That d@mn breeder, I should demand my money back!" The egg flinched - it could still hear outside noises.
"I'm sure it will be tonight!" said Rebecca. She stoked the egg's smooth surface. 'Please let it be tonight...we depend on you,' she thought.
About a year ago, Rebecca's mother, the sole breadwinner of the family, was killed in a car accident. Her father Rick has been deeply depressed and near suicidal ever since. He was too upset to even hold a decent job. One day, he saw a sign for the P-1 Grand Prix...a Fighting Pokemon tournament held every four years. The winner recieved a rather large cash prize, among other things. With only 6 months to go until the next tournament, Rick had to get himself a good Pokemon quickly, so he invested his life savings into the egg he hoped would get his family out of their rut.
Suddenly, the egg started moving. A tear appeared on the surface and translucent pink liquid poured out. Rebecca shot up. "Daddy, it's hatching, come quick!"
Rick zoomed into the room, almost tripping. "Don't let it see you, don't let it see you!"
Rebecca moved out of the way. They watched the egg intently. Finally, a small Tyrogue slipped out. Rick was so overjoyed, he picked it up in one hand and held it to the light to get a better look at it. The Tyrogue squirmed in his strong grip. Unlike the more reconizeable fighter, the hatchling had almost no crest definition, was more of a dust rose tone with paler coloration on the belly, and its proportions resembled that of a newborn monkey. It had a short lizard-like tail and its feet looked almost like a small dinosaurs', the four clawed toes were shorter on the outside and longer on the inside *I always draw Tyrogue with four digits on the hands and feet, three looks odd to me*
"Look at him, Rebecca," said Rick. "He may look like a scrawny runt now, but one day he will make us rich! I think I'll name him Champ...that sound good?"
"He'll be dead if you don't let me clean him off!" Rebecca said. She was quite knowledgable about Pokemon births, thanks to her free-roaming pet Meowth who presented her with a fresh litter of kittens every few months.
Rick waited a few moments. "Ok, he opened his eyes, so he should be imprinted on me now! Here you go, be careful."
Rebecca gathered the Tyrogue up in a thick towel and vigorously rubbed off the liquid. Then, making sure her grip was secure, gave one quick shake, to get the remaining fluid out of the Tyrogue's lungs. He cried out, his shrill squeal sounding like a bird's chirp.
"Oi...kinda earpiercing, huh?" Rick laughed. He looked at the clock. "Wow, sure is late. Let's go to bed, I should wake up early to start training Champ."
"Training so soon?" Rebecca questioned. "But he won't even be a full day old!"
"The sooner the better!" said Rick. He took the towel wrapped Tyrogue from his daughter. "You better be worth what I payed for, Champ. Good night, Becca!"
"Good night Daddy!" Rebecca has never seen her father so happy and hopeful before. She hoped it would last...
It was the next morning. Despite what he said, Rick had woken up pretty late. When Rebecca came downstairs, the Tyrogue, Champ, was sitting in Rick's lap eating a peach. Actually he was licking the inside. Rebecca noticed Champ had a cloth wrap around his waist, a old custom which stemmed from tha belief that the center of the body is the most important and should always be kept warm.
"Didja start training yet?" Rebecca asked.
"Huh? Oh, no, thanks for the reminder!" He stood up, causing Champ to grip onto his pants leg for dear life. The Tyrogue slid down and hit the floor.
"Be careful!" said Rebecca. She ran to help Champ, but he leered at her.
"Hey Rebecca, watch this!" said Rick. He took a few steps and paused. Champ quickly followed Rick and stopped right next to him. "This imprinting really works! Ok, buddy, time to train!"
Rick didn't really know how to train a Pokemon, but thought the experience of watching "Rocky" movies would help. He took Champ to a large hanging punching bag set up in a shed.
"Ok, Champ, see this thing?" Rick said to the little Pokemon. Champ was busy watching some tiny dust particles gently floating in the sunlight. They were so interesting...where did they come from?
"Champ? Hello! Good, got your attention. Now, this thing...Champ!"
Champ clumsily wandered to the ray of light just barely shining through a dusty window. The dust particles continued dancing in their clear yellow ballroom. Champ reached for them...
"Dammit," Rick said quiety under his breath. He swiftly stormed over to Champ and grabbed him around the waist, his fingers pressing into Champ's belly, then angrily dropped him infront of the bag. Champ blinked and looked around, surprised and confused by that sudden action.
"Ok, good," said Rick. "Now, do as I do. First you stand with your arms like this, then..."
Champ suddenly noticed an interesting tear in the bag. A long piece of dark string was dangling from it. Champ touched the string, pulling at it with his short fingers.
Suddenly, WHACK! Something struck Champ on the side of his head. The force caused him to collide painfully against the hard concrete floor. Champ looked up and saw Rick glaring at him, teeth clenched.
"Look, stupid, do as I say or I'll hit you again!" Rick snarled.
"Ty?" Champ questioned.
Rick yanked Champ up by the arm and set him in front of the bag again. Rick took a fighting stance, his fists near his face, and then gave the bag a punch so strong, it swung wildly and a cloud of dust flew out. He looked at Champ. "Now, you do the same."
Champ imitated Rick exactly. After he punched the bag also, he looked at his trainer for approval. Rick seemed pleased.
"Good! Now do it again. Good, good, now do it with more power. No, I said more power. More power I say!"
WHACK!
Later that evening, Rick and Champ entered the house. Rebecca was in the kitchen sitting on a stool near the stove, waiting for the pot of water to boil. She smiled when she saw her father enter.
"I'm glad you're finally back! You must be famished, you were out there all day! How's Champ doing?"
Rebecca jumped down, ran up to the Tyrogue, and knelt to his level. She was surprised. He was covered in dirt, had scrapes on his body, and a dark greenish purple bruise was forming around his eye. Champ backed away from Rebecca, pressed himself against Rick's leg and growled.
"He doesn't listen half the time," said Rick. "This runt was a waste of money."
"He's only a day old!" said Rebecca. "Give him time, he'll get better! This is 'training' he won't become a champion over night!"
"He better be a d@mn good fighter by the tournament," said Rick. "I'll have to train him harder tomorrow!"
*more to come...*