Harry Potter: A new Evil

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(ok then, deleting, sorry :D)
 
OOC: Oh, okay :3
IC: Seraph sat quietly in the tree. She moved down to a thicker branch toward the base of tree, where she changed back. She carefully aimed her wand ant the back of Greyback's head. "Petrificus totalus." she murmured, and the tall man fell to the ground, unable to move. His partners looked down at their immobile leader and looked toward Seraph. She remembered a charm that a friend of hers had used on her as a joke... She shouted the incantation, and the men were walking around, dizzly bumping into eachother and falling over. This was very temporary, however, so Seraph and Kayota would have to leave NOW. "RUN!" She shouted. She was partly happy, because this had been very easy.
 
Kayota growled at Greyback and ran off out of the woods. She turned back human when they were out. But before she was out, she had been hurt by one of Greyback's companions. She was bleeding profusely out of a wound on her leg. It extended all the way from her ankle to her hip. The blood stained her clothes and she staggered and fell, unconcious.
 
Seraph stopped and turned around after she heard something hit the ground. She turned around and ran back to Kayota, and picked her wounded friend up. She struggled to carry the second-year back to the castle, stumbling and alost falling a few times. She got odd looks from other students, and one offered to help. "Hey," She said, "what happened to her?" the little first year looked up questioningly at Seraph. "She's hurt." Seraph replied, "She needs to get to the hospital wing. The first year followed Saraph as she continued toward the school. "I can help you carry her." She said, grabbing Kayota by the legs. Serpah had her hands under Kayota's armpits. She used her elbow to open the castle door to the entrance hall. The two girls had a hard time getting Kayota upstairs, but managed to make it. Madame Pomfry greeted them, and took Kayota to a bed.
 
Kayota opened her eyes and blinked, then moaned in pain at realizing the pain on her leg was still there. She rolled over onto her good side and found herself face-to-face with Seraph. "Hi," she said. "What happened?" she asked, with anoth groan as she shifted herself to get comfortable.
 
Seraph had been sitting in a chair next to Kayota for about an hour now, just to be sure her friend was safe. "One of those guys attacked you. I don't know exactly what they did, but there's a big gash on your leg. You passed out after we got out of the forest. How a wound in the leg could make a person lose consiousness, I dunno, but you were out for a long time." She picked up one of two cups of tea that madame Pomfrey had brought. "Here," she said, tapping the cup with her wand to warm the tea, as it had been siiting on the table getting cold for a long time. She handed it to Kayota and then took a sip from her own cup, staring out the window above Kayota's bed.
 
the next day i heard about what happened, so i went to see her. i entered teh hospital wing, knowing where it was because of frequent quittich acidents i get myself into. i saw seaph and kayota looking out teh window drinking tea "hey" i said "why wasnt i invited to teh party?" they just looked at me like i was an idiot, everyone did, but i was actually one of teh brightest in my year.

"it was a joke" i said in a flat voice "no one thinks im funny anymore, i dont know why" i said sitting in a chair i created from thin air, yea, im that good at spells. "why dont i have a cup?" i said creating one from nothing with a flick of my wand the others just turned away "im not trying to impress you or show you up or something like that" i said "i just came to see if you were alright, but i guess you are, because your well enough to ignore me" they turned back, inspecting me, great, this wont go well

(im sorry if there was some pp'ing, but ive lost most of my internet time due to this stupid timer my dad put on my com, so i dont have as much time to be on, and im trying to cram everything in my head onto this page, so, bye until later)
 
OOC: That's hard to understand, my friend. I realy didn't understand a word that you just typed. *ignores you* Gosh... XD

IC: "I was probably unconcious from loss of blood, don't you think?" Kayota said, sipping her tea as well. "Can you go get my cat for me?" she asked. "And it would be nice if you could help me sit up so I don't choke to death."
 
(of cource, why dosnt anyone understand me? just so you can, im going to put a space between each line)

i heard kayota was in the hospital wing, i wonder why, oh well, id have to ask her later

i walked to the hospital wing, knowing perfectly where it was, due to the fact i was walking away from it every other quittich match

i walked in teh hospital wing door and saw kayota sitting on teh bed, she looked awful

"how ya doin kayota" i said walking over to a chair next to her bed

(did you understand that?)
 
OOC: It's understandable, kinda, but the problem is not that you don't put spaces between your lines, but that you don't use proper grammar. so it's hard to read. For example, the sentance '"how ya doin kayota" i said walking over to a chair next to her bed' should be "How ya doin' Kayota?" I said, walking over to chair next to her.

IC: "Alright." Seraph said, turning and leaving the room. She headed upstairs to the Gryffindor commonroom, and told the Fat Lady the password. "I am NOT letting you in unless you have a Gryffindor student with you!" She said, glaring. Seraph sighed and turned around. She'd have to tell Kayota that she couldn't see her cat right now.
 
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Out of the corridor leading to the Ravenclaw Common Room came a black haired boy. He was fairly tall, wearing the standard Hogwarts robes. However, underneath that he was wearing a shirt which read "ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US!".
He quietly walked along to the fourth floor singing a bad version of "eBay". However, he wasn't paying too much attention and his show met with a banana peel on the floor which he slipped, making a mighty noise. Thank goodness he was just outside the hospital wing as Madam Pomfrey came quickly to help him. He was in slight pain.
"Ooh, are you alright?" she asked. "By the way, I never met you. What year are you in?"
"Fourth and I'm Peter," he replied, still in a bit of pain.
 
(sorry, this is the way i rp, i started like this so this is how i learned, sorry)

i saw a new kid come in the hospital wing, he was a fourth year, of cource

"hey" i said to him
 
"Hey," Peter said to the boy. "I'm Peter. I'm in fourth year and such. And you might be?"
 
"stanlex, im a third year" i said "im the gryffendor seeker, so you might have seen me in one of the games"
 
"Ummm..." Peter said, not trying to draw any attention to not liking Quidditch. "No. I kinda stay in the library. Nice to meet you, Stanlex," he noticed two girls in there. "Uhhh... Yeah, sorry to ignore you," he called to them. "I'm Peter."
 
i was kind of dissapointed to hear that he didtn like quittich, i was really good, i had a firebolt evennot to mention i could see in any weather, due to a hex taht backfired and got accidentally casted on me, now i can see in any light, and any weather, the only downside is my eyes are now red, but, no biggie

"im thirsty" i said pouring some tea from teh kettle "hmm, cold, incendio" i muttered warming up my tea with a small flame at teh end of my wand
 
Seraph had returned to the hospital wing, no cat. She headed over to Kayotas bed with empty arms. "I'm sorry, the stupid portrait wouldn't let me in."
 
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