Hazard7's first made comic.

[Hazard7]

Here is my first comic I made so rate this! Hope it's funny for you.

*image removed*

 

[PrinceOfDarkness]

wow, alittle cool, quite hillarious 8/10 ~Johnny~

 

[Jeremy]

XD Woah, didn't expect old ladies. XD Anyway sweetie, I think you might get in trouble for saying the "s" word like that. ^^; My comics, I just inferred it.

Well, 8/10 for a first comic, sweetie.. ^^

 

[Latias Lover!]

Really funny! I like it! (messege to short)

 

[Shinin]

That's incredibly unfunny and blurry. It's the kind of stuff that only immature little kids who recently figured out what sex is would laugh at. 1/10.

 

[Goatman56]

Although I don't completely agree with Shinin. I don't agree with the others either. Shinin is right it is a little blurry. Your grammar is a little bad but I won't really hold it against you. The joke to me doesn't seem very funny. Over all i'll give you a C which would be a 5/10.

 

[Hazard7]

Well i have been using Microsoft Word for speech bouble(?) and the text are use in Microsoft and you should know that they cheack for spelling mistake :/ **** you Word!

Anyway, i'm British writer. It's might not match with American. Also it does look blurry cos I've screenshot it and paste it in Adobe Photoshop 7.

 

[Esupio]

Well i have been using Microsoft Word for speech bouble(?) and the text are use in Microsoft and you should know that they cheack for spelling mistake :/ **** you Word!

Anyway, i'm British writer. It's might not match with American. Also it does look blurry cos I've screenshot it and paste it in Adobe Photoshop 7.

XD its fine its just us brits we spell things different from you americans
its was good for a first comic actually very good

 

[QFred]

It's very, very, very, very, very cool!!!!

Love it!!!!

91/100

 

[Fox♠]

XD its fine its just us brits we spell things different from you americans
its was good for a first comic actually very good

yep...we call our mothers "mum"...not "mom" and stuff like that...pretty good...oh and pay attention to goatmans advice

 

[pokemonfreak]

Terific! It was soo cool! Old ladies is a cool suprise! 10/10! I like the names too!

 

[mizu-dragon]

Shnaples, that is funny! 9/10

 

[Gohan]

That's funny. 9.2/10. And its not the kind of comic only immature little kids would laugh at Shinin.

 

[obelisk-kun]

wonderful 10/10(message to short)

 

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

Lol, funny stuff. I likde it. 10/10.

 

[BluePhoenix]

Hm....Funny comic. Really funny. First I thought oh...coo. But later my mouth openned up and I started laughing.^^
~RAP~

 

[Fox♠]

That's funny. 9.2/10. And its not the kind of comic only immature little kids would laugh at Shinin.

yeah true...but shinin has to hate nearly everything...or it just wouldnt be shinin...and this time he didn't say "it made no sense"...so i presume he's getting better with crit

 

[Draik]

It's OK, not too good. You have a few grammical errors though.

Mistakes are circled in red.

 

[Lokhlan]

5/10

Negative:
- This being a Pokemon board where many age 9's & up post, it was a little perverted
- For such a quick joke, it was too drawn out
- Bad grammar

Positive:
- This being your first comic, it looks like you've got the basic idea down
- The old ladies joke was relatively funny

 

[Hazard7]

Whoa thatnks for your comment guys! I will make a second comic sprite soon!