He Never Said a Word

[Sydian]

Poem removed because I was an emo kid.

 

[h POKE]

Hmm... Is it just me, or has there been a recent theme in your poetry? Thankfully I've never known anyone to be so pushy. Is this a reflection of your experiences (hopefully you didn't actually kill a man. Right?) or of somebody else you've known? I like the wording, even if it's just a short, but not-so-sweet poem.

 

[Sydian]

Theme in my poems? Elaborate, if you please.

No, I didn't kill him. I think I might have killed his soul. Apparently, my ex boyfriend still asks about me and hasn't been the same since I broke up with him -cough- a year ago.

 

[h POKE]

Oh, my... Clingy people get to me as well. But, it is your own experience, so I won't delve further.
In terms of the theme I see, it's death. Either literally or figuratively, there is a lot of death in your poems.

 

[Sydian]

Oh, my... Clingy people get to me as well. But, it is your own experience, so I won't delve further.
In terms of the theme I see, it's death. Either literally or figuratively, there is a lot of death in your poems.

I haven't even seen him since April of 08, so I wouldn't call him clingy. But that's just my definition.

Figurative death, I suppose. Or wanthing to die...something. I guess you're right. I do have a lot of death. Ho hum.

 

[Ember]

nice poem :) is kinda literal thought ...

 

[Sydian]

Thank you~

Yeah, I tried for the literal thing, but not all of it is literal. I obviously didn't kill the dude. xD;

 

[Ember]

keep up the good job :) hehe