.:: Hedgehog's Dillema ::.

[Ash_Pokemaster]

.:: Name ::.
Hedgehog's Dillema

.:: Genre ::.
Drama/Romantic

.:: Main Characters(so far) ::.
Hikaru Wagaki
Hideka Wagaki (Hikaru's Mother)
Rei Ayami
Akaki Iyume (Mireille's Brother)
Mireille Iyume (Akaki's Sister)

.:: Plot ::.
In small village called "Hoyou Village", our character starts to find the meaning of the "Hedgehog's Dillema". Many time before that, an "event" happened to that place. No kid knows about it. Adults would rather not talk about it. Our protagonist Hikaru, is a 15-year-old alphic boy. He's really misterius and pretty weird. Now there's just one thing he wants. You'll learn it soon.

.:: COMIC ::.
.::Volume 1 -- The Beyond to here...
Chapter 1
Chapter 2 (To be released soon)






Ok, well I'll now try to do what the people making Pokemon couldn't do... Make a Pokemon story not focused to Pokemon more than to people. I want to see if you like it at first so that I will be more confident to keep it up. So please if you like it and want me to continue comment or vote at least.

PS: Well, that has MANY but MANY thigns from EVANGELION, if you have seen the series please don't spoil fot some things.

 

[Signomi]

A word of advice, it would be best if you didn't save your panels seperately, try combining them into one image, it would be a lot more easier for you, instead of having to upload each panel seperately. Also, the font you use for the text may be a little hard on the eyes, and on the second panel, the text seems somewhat squashed, you could keep the font if you want, but I'd suggest picking another. The Plot seems interesting, though I can't exactly rate the comic yet, since it just started. But I see you're planning to go somewhere with this comic, nice start. Keep at it ;)

 

[Matt Silver]

A word of advice, it would be best if you didn't save your panels seperately, try combining them into one image, it would be a lot more easier for you. Also, the font you use for the text may be a little hard on the eyes, and on the second panel, the text seems somewhat squashed, you could keep the font if you want, but I'd suggest picking another. The Plot seems interesting, though I can't exactly rate the comic yet, since it just started. But I see you're planning to go somewhere with this comic, nice start. Keep at it ;)

Totally agree with her.
I think this comic has potential and i'll have to wait and see.
Yeah, make the squares in one image and u'll be fine.

 

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Thanks Signomi and Matthegreat. :) I'll change the font. I didn't put all of them in a page because I thought that in next chapters it would spoil the story if for example someone looked a bit to the next pages. :)

 

[Signomi]

I understand, though I know viewers would much prefer it if the panels were combined into one image, but never the less, it is your comic, and I'm not aiming to deprive you in anything you do. And for the font, I'd recommend either Tahoma or Verdana, but you can use other fonts aswell, as long as you know they make text easier to read. Well, I shall be passing by whenever you've got an update :P

 

[Ash_Pokemaster]

I'll have to think about the comic style. I read the Matt's PokeSpecial Sprite Comic and I like that style. I may do that ;) And btw I shall update with the second part of the 1st chapter today :)