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Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
Adamant Nature (
- Brick Break
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 52 HP / 252 Atk / 52 Def / 51 Spd / 51 SAtk / 52 SDef
Brave Nature (
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rock Slide
- Surf

Salamence (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spd
Adamant Nature (
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Bold Nature (
- Counter
- Defense Curl
- Seismic Toss
- Softboiled

Alakazam (M) @ Focus Band
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 1 HP / 2 Atk / 2 Def / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 1 SDef
Modest Nature (
- Fire Punch
- Ice Punch
- Psychic
- Thunderpunch

Snorlax (F) @ Leftovers ** Hunry
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 252 HP / 104 Atk / 76 Def / 76 SDef
Careful Nature (
- Double-Edge
- Rest
- Shadow Ball
- Sleep Talk

 

[Ice demon]

Blissey and snorlax on the same team is a bit redundant.I'd drop blissey and make lax your starter.

2 DDers is a bit much also.Try CBtar or CBmence or better yet, drop either one for a physical wall.

You lack a phazer [skarmory acts as both a phazer and a physical wall] and if you do choose to CB one of your pokemon, you'll want to consider something to rapid spin, [although its not entirely necessary.]

Your EV spreads need some serious help, try looking at the sticky at the top of the page entitled - 'OU metagame guide' for standard movesets and EV distributions for these pokemon.

BTW never use focus band, stick leftovers on ur Zam.

On a good note, you got all ur natures right and many of ur movesets are close to standard.

Keep at it.

 

[aragornbird]

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On Netbattle, when you go into expert mode, please check the box that says "Snap" otherwise you are wasting a lot of EV points.

You don't need Blissey and Snorlax on the same team. It only increases your Fighting weakness (Heracross really likes to sweep this team). I'd choose Snorlax since it can actually attack.

Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 Def
Adamant Nature (
- Taunt
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide

Taunt over Brick Break please. Taunt ensures you can beat things like Skarmory and Weezing without them phazing you away. Also, give it max speed instead of HP, or else a lot of Pokemon will still outspeed you even after 2 DDs.

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 156 HP / 68 Atk / 176 Def / 56 SAtk / 54 SDef
Brave Nature (
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rest/Protect
- Surf/Curse

Never give non-CB Swamperts max attack, especially if you're using a Brave nature. Swampert needs to be just as defensive as it is offensive. It only needs enough EVs for 300 Attack and needs a lot more Defense and HP. No real need for Rock Slide since Ice Beam is used for Flyers. Try Rest or Protect instead. The standard Cursepert set also works.

Salamence (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spd
Adamant Nature (
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

Fine.

Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
Bold Nature (
- Counter
- Aromatherapy
- Seismic Toss
- Softboiled

You're using a Blissey that doesn't have Aromatherapy? O_o
Get rid of Defense Curl since Blissey's job is to special wall and support with its healing moves, not sit around and Seismic Toss.

Alakazam (M) @ Lum Berry/Choice Band
Trait: Synchronize
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Modest Nature (
- Fire Punch
- Calm Mind
- Psychic
- Substitute/Trick

Alakazam with 4 special attacks won't work. It can't do anything against Blissey/Snorlax/Regice. The only attacks it really needs are Psychic and Fire Punch. Your other moves should be more defensive. Substitute to gain an extra turn of attacking, Calm Mind to deal more damage, or go with the sneaky TrickBand set.
Also, give it the Timid trait because Alakazam NEEDs that speed.
Don't use Focus Band, it relies on luck. Go with Lum Berry and a Synchronize trait.

Snorlax (F) @ Leftovers ** Hunry
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 160 HP / 176 Atk / 68 Def / 104 SDef
Careful Nature (
- Double-Edge
- Rest
- Shadow Ball
- Sleep Talk

Standard Sleep Talk Lax. I'd take off some HP for a little more Sp. Defense and more Attack since you aren't running Curse.

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