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Instead of being lazy, you should actually type out your Pokemon's moves, EVs, natures, items, and everything. Even though your movesets may be standard, we still need the Pokemon presented in full so we can take a good look at them.

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suicune bold @leftovers
252hp/252def/4spdef
surf
rest
sleep talk
calm mind

zapdos timid @leftovers
192hp/64def/252spe
sub
roost
t bolt
toxic

tyranitar adamant @choice band
160hp/252atk/96spe
eq
stone edge
crunch
pursuit

gyrados adamant @leftovers
252atk/252spe/4def
ddance
eq
ice fang
waterfall

lucairo adamant @life orb
252atk/252spe/4spD
sdance
cc
extreme speed
stone edge

weavile jolly @choice band
40hp/252atk/216spe
brick break
ice shard
ice punch
night slash

dusknoir impish @leftovers
252hp/28atk/228def
eq
thunder punch
will-o-wisp
pain split
 
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That's better.

Tyranitar and Lucario make a good pair. Lucario lures out Ghosts types which Tyranitar can switch into and kill with Pursuit, giving Lucario more chances to use Swords Dance.
Both of them are weak to Fighting and Ground, so having a Gyarados in your team would also be great.

Anyways, the biggest issue here is that you don't have a good lead for this team. You've got sweepers and walls and all that, but you need a good reliable Pokemon that you can put in your first slot.

Another good Pokemon for this team is Gliscor. Gliscor gets an evasion boost from Sandstorm and gives you an Electric immunity. It can also set up Stealth Rock which is VERY IMPORTANT to every team.

Gliscor @Leftovers
Jolly Nature
Sand Veil
252 HP / 40 Def / 216 Spd

-Earthquake
-Stealth Rock
-Roost
-Toxic

Gliscor can make a good lead for your team, but I wouldn't lead with it in this case.

Swampert is one Pokemon that may give you problems and Vaporeon can also be annoying. To beat these Water types, a Grass type would be useful and having Toxic Spikes would also weaken opponent Water Pokemon a lot. So a good lead for your team would be:

Roserade @Focus Sash
Timid Nature
Natural Cure
6 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd

-Leaf Storm
-Toxic Spikes
-Sleep Powder
-Hidden Power Fire/Sludge Bomb

Finally, since entry hazards have become important, you can add Dusknoir to your team to counter Rapid Spinners.

Roserade/Gliscor/Dusknoir/Gyarados/Tyranitar/Lucario would be your final team.

Hope that helps!

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