Here With Me

[phantom_zangetsu]

heres another one of my poems. im a bit slow these days coz of.....somone blah! nevermind!

Here With Me
im all alone again
i miss you here
i try to forget
but its always coming back

i thought i would be fine
without you here in my world
but i became lonely
without you

destiny made us together
and after that
will be separated
and never see each other again

my thoughts of you are fading
as my sadness is growing
why do i have to forget
that i ever met you?

i wish you hadnt been like this
thats why i have to leave you
my pain is once again
filled with everything i never wanted

hell in my world is back
angry,sorrow and hate
everything i felt before
seems to come to me again

now im sitting here
like i used to do
i think about my life with you
but now theres nothing i can do

but to forget...

so? like it? its a bit messy for pro. poem makers, i think.

 

[fallen_angel]

Haha I don't think it's messy. But then again i'm not a pro in poems. Haha.:D I like your poem.^_^

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

many thnks to the critics. my world will be nothing without you!!

 

[Witch Girl Pilar]

Hahahaha... nice one, dude. Still thinking about HER? Anyways, your poems good. Good enough for the ones who broke up their girlfriends or boyfriends. More power, dude.

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

umm...FYI dude, she is totally out-of-my-life. she's gone forever bwhahahaha...*cough cough* hem,hem thanks for the critics anyways as i said earlier, my life will be nothig without you guys. now back to linkin park....*listening to "cure fo the itch"*