Here With Me

phantom_zangetsu

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    heres another one of my poems. im a bit slow these days coz of.....somone blah! nevermind!

    Here With Me
    im all alone again
    i miss you here
    i try to forget
    but its always coming back

    i thought i would be fine
    without you here in my world
    but i became lonely
    without you

    destiny made us together
    and after that
    will be separated
    and never see each other again

    my thoughts of you are fading
    as my sadness is growing
    why do i have to forget
    that i ever met you?

    i wish you hadnt been like this
    thats why i have to leave you
    my pain is once again
    filled with everything i never wanted

    hell in my world is back
    angry,sorrow and hate
    everything i felt before
    seems to come to me again

    now im sitting here
    like i used to do
    i think about my life with you
    but now theres nothing i can do

    but to forget...

    so? like it? its a bit messy for pro. poem makers, i think.
     
    Haha I don't think it's messy. But then again i'm not a pro in poems. Haha.:D I like your poem.^_^
     
    Hahahaha... nice one, dude. Still thinking about HER? Anyways, your poems good. Good enough for the ones who broke up their girlfriends or boyfriends. More power, dude.
     
    umm...FYI dude, she is totally out-of-my-life. she's gone forever bwhahahaha...*cough cough* hem,hem thanks for the critics anyways as i said earlier, my life will be nothig without you guys. now back to linkin park....*listening to "cure fo the itch"*
     
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