Hilarious Mario and anime comic

Shikon no Tama

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    I have drawn out my very first comic! I would like some feedback so I know what to edit and how to do it next time I make a comic! I think this would be rated G. But I rate it F for FUNNY. XD

    I hope you guys like it. Took me over an hour to draw, then colour it. It's SUPER MARIO FUNNY!
     
    It's not a Sprite comic... That's all I have to say. It's quite good, but some of (what I'm presuming) You doesn't have a shirt but a big empty white space. Keep it up though. 7.5/10
     
    I forgot to add shirts to the heads of Kagome and Inuyasha in some parts. *Blushes*
    Thanks for the imput! It was hard to make and draw out. And I'll try to make more of those in the future! ^_^
    Oh and about the comic being in the wrong place, I can't put it anywhere else because the art gallery is only for art, this is a comic, so I don't think it would belong here. This was the closest I could get to a place for comics.
     
    That's Pretty Funny MD!
    I Liked The Inyuasha Part!
    *Gives Rep*
     
    The Inuyasha part was pretty funny. Besides, Inuyasha is after Kikyo more, so what better way to advertise that than making Inu say he thought Kagome was ugly. And the Mario thing was a little hilarious. But, that's what he gets for being a Nintendo trademark! I'm planning to make a part two for that comic in a week or so. Until then, I'll allow people to critize my work so I know what needs work. And no, I will not do shading because it takes out the feel of the funniness.
     
    I liked it waiting for more hmmm waiting takes so long *looks at watch*hmm its been 5 seconds
     
    Ah, neat comic! I used to make some Mario sprite comics of my own last year, and they were always a lot of fun to create (Poor plumber never catches a break, hehe). Anyways, yours was really funny, and I can't wait to see more!
     
    Moonlight Dreams said:
    The Inuyasha part was pretty funny. Besides, Inuyasha is after Kikyo more, so what better way to advertise that than making Inu say he thought Kagome was ugly. And the Mario thing was a little hilarious. But, that's what he gets for being a Nintendo trademark! I'm planning to make a part two for that comic in a week or so. Until then, I'll allow people to critize my work so I know what needs work. And no, I will not do shading because it takes out the feel of the funniness.
    Click to expand...

    Apparently InuYasha likes Kikyo and Kagome equally. ^_~ He isnt really after a certain girl. *doesnt want to go offtopc so doesnt say what she wants to say next* >.O

    Anyways, I loved your comic! ^_______^ It was great. I cant wait to read more. =3

    ~Karli
     
    Ok everyone, part 2 of the Mario comic is under construction now. I have worked a it on it. Here is a spoiler in the plot:
    Mario somehow find himself in the Pokemon world along with that annoying girl and he meets Pikachu. Let's just say meeting a yellow rat Pokemon wasn't a good idea...... And it also features a certain TRAINER in that comic as well.
     
    While it is a comic, it's not a sprite comic. Hmm, I'll just leave it here for now.
    Btw, nice comic. XD
     
    *image removed*

    Sorry I couldn't resist.

    Anyway, should work on the drawing a bit more. Seems too bland if you ask me.
     
    very awsome for a hand drawing on paint! i love how it's so anime! i could never do that ;_; your so awsome! 9/10 i would only siggest to make bubbles for their speeches
     
    it's good...................................
     
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