Hoenn 2012

[adwajr]

If you didn't know, London is holding the olypics for 2012 and that's where I got the idea from.

HOENN 2012!​

Intro: http://i1.tinypic.com/s1jocj.png​

Season1: The Dangerous Pokemon!
Comic1: http://i1.tinypic.com/s1k9xs.png​

Comic2: http://i1.tinypic.com/s1memq.png
Comic3: http://i1.tinypic.com/s4m5jc.png
Comic4: http://i1.tinypic.com/s4m7ok.png
Comic5: http://i2.tinypic.com/sbpuo1.png

Main characters:

Read ---> across.​

Text colour
Name: Jake
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Birthplace: Fushia, Kanto
Job: Pokemon Trainer
Nature: Cool
Likes: Marina, Fire pokemon, Computers, Dolls
Pokemon: Sputteren​

Text colour
Name: Marina
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Birthplace: Ecruteak, Johto
Job: Pokemon Artist
Nature: Arty
Likes: Green, Pokemon, Reading, Nurses
Pokemon: Petital​

Other characters:

Read ---> across.​

Name: Johnathan Harly
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Birthplace: Mossdeep, Hoenn
Job: Research Assistant
Nature: Adamant
Likes: Jackie, Pokemon, Research, Comics
Pokemon: Mareep, Geodude​

Name: Jackie Briney
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Birthplace: Vermillion, Kanto
Job: Lab Assistant
Nature: Impish
Likes: Sea, Pokemon, Gyms
Pokemon: None​

Name: Prof. Sindy Marsh
Age: 38
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Birthplace: Littleroot, Hoenn
Job: Pokemon Researcher
Nature: Serious
Likes: Pokemon, Inventing, Comics, The beach​

No one is allowed to join due to the rules.​

Credit:
raichu.s41.xrea.com
Elite 2000
The Spriters Resourses
The Pokemon Treasures Forum
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Pokemon X​

 

[The Dash]

Er i dont really like the sprites. They seem very rough. The beginning is VERY VERY VERY overdone,
To early for me to rate it however.

 

[Chizzy]

I like the little dude throwing himself into the building...but i must ask...WHY?

 

[adwajr]

Well, he thinks the Prof man was going to charge right into him so he tride to dodge but Marina Shouted.And the sprites... TOUGH! I'm sticking with them.

 

[Sheepnut]

Fix the text boxes and itll be half good.

 

[Decepticon]

Fix the text boxes and itll be half good.

along w/ the text. verdana size 7 is the way to go...

 

[adwajr]

Do not post in YOU SHOULD DO THIS TO MAKE IT BETTER.
I'm sticking with everything I want. You don't want to know I'm making a new one then.

 

[Chizzy]

I'll agree with Sheepnut and Decep. Veranda size 7 and Better text Boxes. Then it'll be better! But hey! Im not a SC writer! Im a spriter!

 

[adwajr]

New eppy up!
http://i1.tinypic.com/s1memq.png
You wouldn't think of a battle this early. ONLY POST GOOD COMENTS HERE! I DON'T WANT MODS SHOUTING AT ME!

 

[Sheepnut]

I dont really know whos talking.

 

[Raze-finiarel]

If I remember right, green text = Girl, Red text = boy.

 

[Matt Silver]

Ok comic here Adwajr. Good to see that you are not mixing FRLG with RS Sprites.

 

[Sheepnut]

If I remember right, green text = Girl, Red text = boy.

But theres black text :( whos talking then?

 

[Egyptian Sphinx]

It is a very good story line and since I really like how well the comics are I'll give them a 10/10

 

[Kylie-chan]

Do not post in YOU SHOULD DO THIS TO MAKE IT BETTER.
I'm sticking with everything I want. You don't want to know I'm making a new one then.

If you're not open to criticism, tough. Stop posting comics if you can't deal with fair comment, because as long as your thread is open, people are going to comment. To improve, you need to change things, and critiquing is a really important part of that process.

These guys aren't going to flame, but if they do, we're going to deal with them for doing it - feel free to report any outright bashing; we're not going to punish you for things you didn't do. You can't expect praise to simply rain from the skies, because there's always going to be someone who doesn't like what you do.

^_^;

 

[Omega Latios]

Hmm... You Should Make Text Bubblethingies Better. And Yes... Verdana Size 7 Is Good Font To Do Comics. Sprites Are Not Very Good. Well, They Aren't Just Cheap Recolors, But Shading Is Not Very Good. Fix The Shading And Your Sprites Will Be Better. By The Way The "Wild Pokémon" Is Invisible...

3/10 Because I'm In Good Mood Today.

 

[adwajr]

For black text, it's who the text is nearest to. Er... no updates now.

 

[RocketMemberMichael]

it-is-okay listen be a bit more ORIGINAL or summin...

 

[adwajr]

A new comic might be up tomorrow.

 

[Evil Ducky]

you are a great spriter! keep it up!