Hoenn: Shadow Legacy

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    Hoenn: Shadow Legacy

    [PokeCommunity.com] Hoenn: Shadow Legacy


    This is my first comic... I need suggestions, please comment...

    This is a Re-make of Hoenn! Yes it has a whole new story line and region is based in the future...

    Hoenn looks peaceful for now, but danger is coming... Deoxys has been acting very wierd lately and uses its powers very abnormally... Deaoxys is going around the region destroying everything in sight. Its up to Silver, Alisha, and Sakura to save the region of Hoenn before it is too late...


    Current Characters:
    Good-
    Silver
    Alisha
    Sakura
    Bad-
    Rocket Boss
    Rocket Grunts
    Deoxys



    ----------------------------------------------
    Hoenn Introduction

    Season 1:
    The New Beginning
    Rare Chance to Rise
    Shadow Trainers Destiny
    The Problem Starts (Part 1)
    The Problem Starts (Part 2)
    The Problem Starts (Part 3)
    Rock Hard NEW!
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    A little mix... A whole new perspective on the Sevii Islands... This is a mini series that may just get you looking at the Sevii Islands alittle different than you do now...


    Sevii Journeys: NEW!
    The Journey Begins
    Trouble at the Start


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    Credits:
    Silver
    Dark-Umbreon
    VG Maps: Pokemon Emerald
    Serebii Sprite Resources
     
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    Slow the comic down a lttile everything is happening to fast but besides that it's okay. I can't give it a true rating yet but it's okay so far.
     
    Houndoom1 said:
    Slow the comic down a lttile everything is happening to fast but besides that it's okay. I can't give it a true rating yet but it's okay so far.
    Click to expand...

    Same as what Houndoom said, btw, where did you get the Mudkip overworld, i don't have Hoenn overworlds.
     
    O.o.. im in the comic... ^^ hey, what in the world!? What kind of hat is that?!?
     
    Don't show the whole route, just sho a little bit, and organize the panels a bit more so they're like:

    1 2
    3 4
    5 6
     
    1. Organize the panels. Like C.S. said.
    2. The text is in horrible order. Arrange it either from left to right of the panel or right to left. Put the first text that's in the panel up highest, or to the farthest left.
    2. Recolours aren't really good. Try to add something unique to them.

    I'd give it a 3/10. Try imporving though.
     
    Now... I've edited my comics, following almost all the suggestions I got... Now check it out... they're better than they were... I added a Special mini series and made some more of the main slides...
     
    whats wierd about the speech bubbles... I wanted them to be different from the rest... being kind of original...
     
    Ok... now i've made the next episode called Rock Hard... It's my favorite... Go check it out...
     
    That was just...really boring...i mean you could of included Onix and Geodude, or Zubat, or added more excitement.
     
    I think its good... i really don't think its bad at all, i dont know why everyone doesnt like it, so if you dont have constructive critisism, dont say anything at all... *humph*
     
    Well, each Gym Leader is in this Line-up...

    Brock- 1 Pokemon
    Misty- 2 Pokemon
    LT. Surge- 3 Pokemon
    Erika- 4 Pokemon
    Koga- 5 Pokemon
    Sabrina- 5 Pokemon
    Blaine- 6 Pokemon
    ???- 7 Pokemon

    Sorry for not exciting you... It's not my job to do that... So thats not my responsibility! Mines different, so what? I don't want to be the same as everyone else... I'm tryin to be original! Dark-Umbreon and I try to keep it atleast alittle original... But everyone here wants all the comics to be the same... I think thats wrong...


    Please only post Constructive Critisism!!! The other stuff is all Spam to me and will not be read! For those of you who are kind and only post Constructive Critisism, I thank you...

    Matt Silver is one of the best Contstructive Critisismer's here < Thank
    You!
     
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    yea, you wouldnt know good comics if it came right up to you and smacked you in the face... *thinking* wish i could...

    (BTW: Don't ban me, im juist speaking my mind... Silver too...)
     
    Forgive me, you took my comment in the completely most wrong way, when i refered to excitement i ment the enjoyment of having a longer battle scene, that kinda thing, i wouldn't ask you to have it all the same, why do you think my comic is based off the 4th generation?
     
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