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Cascade Of The Sky

Shining Porygon master
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    check this out, 2 cards inspired by the sky.. figure it out?

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    Ok, my verdict:

    (Porygon2): The colours are awesome... ;) i also hope the attacks make sense. The image was the best drawing i have done yet! The back ground was also drawn by me. On these blanks, porygon2 fits in perfectly... (eeep, im starting to sound like a translator (babelfish) translating Japanese to English!!! how embarrassing)

    Smeargle): IT LOOKS LIKE A FUNKY MONKEY!!! :P hehehe.. and i did the pain bluse because the shining one has like red paint or something, but the non shining one in the gold and silver games has red pain, it;s totally mental!!! The attack that is in german means SUPER ARTIST!

    have fun rating guys!
     
    SWEET art. It would be perfectly at home on real cards! You're getting better and better, and you were amazing to start with. The Porygon is essentially very underpowered, but the Smeargle is quite acceptable, especially the Pok?-Body which is cool.
     
    Those cards are excellent . I rate them 9/10

    I hope you make more
     
    PORYGON2 *
    (Skipping the font/placement part, perfect as usual)
    Amazing card and art. 50 damage for the second attack and it's balanced. Remove the Psychic resistance (colorless Pok?mon haven't had it since Neo Destiny) and the "Any other effects etc." part (same thing, Pok?mon haven't had it since Neo Destiny).

    Vote: 9.0

    SMEARGLE *
    I love Smeargle. It's my favourite Pok?mon. *_* Haven't you drawn it a bit too thin? :D Feed that poor Smeargle!

    The Pok?-Body is too powerful. I think it should be something like this:
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    Pok?-Body: Twinkle Trick: If Smeargle * is your Active Pok?mon and is damaged by an opponent's attack (even if Smeargle * is Knocked Out), you may flip a coin. If heads, both Smeargle * and the Attacking Pok?mon are now Paralyzed.
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    As with Porygon2, remove the Psychic resistance.

    Vote: 8.75


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    A very good job in the Cascade style! ;D
     
    Whoa... That's about all I can say. You drew those from scratch!?!
     
    axctually, everyone of these attacks are from real card ;) so their is NO wording errors at all :P and they are shining pokemon.. they are menta;... and i wanted them to have psychic resistance... (that's why i put it their), and as for underpowered porygon, now i look at it, it is underpowered... ;)
     
    Hmm.....Well, if they are from real cards, orginality is not your friend here in that instance. However, the blanks and art is tremendous! Well Done!.

    Porygon 9/10
    Smeargle 9.5/10
     
    well, i have chnaged the attacks SAlightly, and yeah, it's not like i said that i totally made these attacks.. (that's called plagerism)... im horrible with wy own attacks ;) i depend on art! what??? is their something wrong with that?
     
    Wow. Just wow.
    Here, have my babies...
    (In other words, I love it. You are a faking god)

    *Crosses fingers and hopes that CotS makes an uber-card of Godzilla*
     
    Cascade Of The Sky said:
    axctually, everyone of these attacks are from real card ;) so their is NO wording errors at all :P

    Hmm, yeah, but propably you took them from old cards (from Base Set to Neo Destiny). Anyway, mine was just fussiness. :15:
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    King Shuckle said:
    Hmm.....Well, if they are from real cards, orginality is not your friend here in that instance

    That's not a matter of originality... I copy/paste pieces of texts from real card cards too, just to be sure I won't make syntax errors. That's the same thing with Cascade, I think. It's something that every good faker should do :)
     
    Yes, I agree with Nemes and Cascade about it, you have to take, sometimes, complete texts from real cards and modify them to fit your desired utility!

    Also, awesome cards, I love the new art and the effect of the blanks.

    I like the Pok?-Body on Porygon2 but I have a question. Is there a Colorless Energy card (just plain Colorless), or your PROMOS will have one??

    PS: What's a Kunstler?
     
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