I started a comic!

[Kirozane]

And it's totally terrible! Seriously. XD
But I do still like it, so I am seeing what you all think.....

So, to get out the creative juices I got for the RP while playing mystery dungeon... I am now doing something somewhat similar... This is technically a cross over since the two main characters (Kona and Larx) are from our Star ocean RP. I can't really give much backstory because I haven't really though of much... The idea literally just came to me while playing PMD....

So yeah! A loose base! Let's GO!

Page One (There is text on the second to last panel... warning you now!)

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Page Two (Oh hey... a tail...)

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Page Three (Meet the Quilavaphlosion... that's supposed to just be a quilava)

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That's all I have so far. So really... HOW BAD IS IT? Or... good, if you think it is?

 

[Poster]

It's pretty good. Though I hope it's not like PMD.

 

[Kirozane]

That was where I got the inspiration, yes... But I do intend to make it different.... More realistic for starters. XDBut we'll see. I am writing and drawing at the same time. It's totally impromptu. But page 4 is up. XD

 

[Poster]

I really wish I had at least a pen to draw. I draw my manga on my mouse and it's so infuriating.

 

[Kirozane]

D'awww really? I remember those days. My sister got me my tablet a year ago for walking her kid to the boys and girl's club and watching her when she didn't go. ^^ And the difference is amazing. <3
Here's the next page if you didn't find it, btw....

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[Poster]

The drawing is alright, but you need to sort out a good spot to put the text-and put a bubble or a background to it, because currently it's hard to read it.

Are we meeting another character here?

 

[Kirozane]

Yeah we are. The Larx that Kona(The Eevee) was talking about in the first page...

And I have been trying to think of ways, but I use SAI for the drawing (Merely because it's the easiest and I don't wanna mess anything up.) and there's no obvious method so page five I'm gonna have to get creative and experiment something out.

 

[Truality]

Cool. I hope you won't let me down. =]

(This is Poster btw, I swapped accounts)

 

[Tyrantrum]

This looks pretty neat, so far. c:

 

[Kirozane]

Thanks Eeveon!

And Poster, page 5. What do you think? (Strokes in the bubbles are supposed to be there. XD If I didn't want 'em I would blur 'em.)

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[Truality]

>What do you think?

I think it's getting intense. Though I really wonder what happened in the second panel, because the 'phlosion is so blurred it looks like it was copy-pasted from somewhere else.
Aside of that, great job on the text, maybe that 'no' in the pre-last panel needed a darker colour, but I'm really happy for you! You improve by the page!

 

[Kirozane]

It was using quick attack... I was trying to emphasize the speed a little more. so I blurred everything about it. XD And I won't have an update until Friday or so, since I'll be at my internetless sister's until Friday (even if she did have internet and her lappy, said lappy is an art nazi. I wouldn't be able to draw a new page.)

But thanks! ^^ I'm trying, now that I see so many people like it. ^^

 

[Truality]

...so is this still going or you dropped the project?

 

[Kirozane]

It's still going. I made another blog about it (And the comic progresses.... 8D) , which I may update with the page I finally finished yesterday XD