I write my own songs!!!

Poet of Darkness

Poet of darkness
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    Here's my most recent song. It's called: The best thing that ever happened to me!!!

    Girl, you know I love you. You know I'd do anything for you.
    (Chorus X2)
    Because you are the best thing that ever happened to me(echo happened to me)! Because you are the best thing in my life! You are the thing that can make me think about what I do!

    And that's all I've got so far!!! Do you like what I have so far???
     
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    Err..wrong forum. This goes in poetry. *gets mod*
    Pretty short for a song. I don't know about you but I didn't have any personal feelings about it..
    Ya might want to lengthen it.
     
    espyon luver said:
    Here's my most recent song. It's called: The best thing that ever happened to me!!!

    Girl, you know I love you. You know I'd do anything for you.
    (Chorus X2)
    Because you are the best thing that ever happened to me(echo happened to me)! Because you are the best thing in my life! You are the thing that can make me think about what I!

    And that's all I've got so far!!! Do you like what I have so far???
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    Awwwws, I think it's really cute. ^________^ I might just recommend that you try and make it a little bit longer, unless you have the chorus sung through a few times. ^^

    I think you're doing pretty good so far espyon luver. ^^

    ~Kelsey
     
    Thanks Kelsey!!! I'm glad you like it!!! But that's all I had so far because I just thought of the song!!! But I was gonna except any suggestions at all that you thought of to add to it!!! :D
     
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