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Im back @ PC! With a new card to boot!

NeoRyder

NeoRyder

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Im back @ PC! With a new card to boot!


    I entered in the sme acanthite contest as Cipher :P

    The lineart of venusaur is by KaeMantis - I just coloured it in

    tell me what you think of the card - improvements would be most welcome

    EDIT: You may need to refresh as I reworded the text a bit
     
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    Wow! you have a great improving in the coloring and shading Neoryder... thecoolab beetween you and Kaemantis do a sweet art
    Let me say it, strange delta specie o.o... I never thought in a double type Electric/Psychic for Venasaur =O
    Let me say than the Pokepower is really cool if you use it wisely... if not you will finish losing cards from your deck until finish DOOMED
    However I think than this card has low compatiblity with a deck... the kind is Psychic/Electric, the pokepower use [E] and [M] Pokemons and the attack uses four kinds of different energy cards... you will need like 4 Rainbow energies and 4 Delta Rainbow Energies for can charge this monstrosity and it will take you like 4 turns for do that if you are lucky... in that time a Fire pokemon in a pure fire deck can charges more quick and finish kicking the @ss to Delta Venasaur (a simple flametrowher performs 100 damage by the weakness)
    Art: 10/10
    PokePower: 8/10
    Attack: 5/10
     
    Hey! FlameClaw... I was checking and there is a little white line of 1 px in the upper illustration's border (I don't know... if it is for a contest that detail can give you a lower score... so try to fix it ;) )
     
    Cipher DSX said:
    Honestly?

    It's...okay. But far too busy for my liking. :( Still, 7/10. :)
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    lol, I see what you mean

    It wasn't actually meant to have so much effects - but I had to balance it out, I overdid it XD

    Still, at least i'm improving :D

    thanx for feedback guys, means alot to me :)

    AdeptEx...Im not FC!?

    just noticed the white...stupid magic nooby wand :(
     
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    NeoRyder said:
    lol, I see what you mean

    It wasn't actually meant to have so much effects - but I had to balance it out, I overdid it XD

    Still, at least i'm improving :D

    thanx for feedback guys, means alot to me :)

    AdeptEx...Im not FC!?

    just noticed the white...stupid magic nooby wand :(
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    You're welcome NeoRyder! For that is this community xD
    However I finish with the curiosity.... Where is the contest? If I can approve my exams and finally have FREE TIME maybe I can enter in the contest

    And sorry Guy:embarrass ... I'm dizzy! I was posting two message in two IE windows and the cerebral traume by have test practically all the days killed the half of my neurones :15:
     
    Mmmmm, I love the at card man, but as it was the Contest i really couldn't say how bad it wa........Joking dude, joking.
    I think the Attack costs needs to be like this:(Gr)(Gr)(L)(L)(C) Solar-Blitz, I think that make it centred in the gap you've got.
    Also, get rid of the 2 Resistances. 3 Retreat costs.
    Nonetheless, I love that card man, post use SOME MOR!!!!!
     
    [M][L][P][G][G] and discard all basic energy?
    All I can say is Holons Castform/ton/trode ftw. Its a bit of a complicated attack, but oh well.

    The picture is amazing and the [P][L] type works really well (and reminds me of the Zap! Theme deck). Only downside is whoa, thats a lot of text for one card.


    Also the power doesn't really make sense since you missed out the 'if heads, draw a card' line. Yours says:
    "Flip a coin for each [L] and [M] Pokemon in play. For every Basic or Evolution you draw, put 1 surge counter on Venusaur"
    Looks like you need to fit another line of text in.

    EDIT: the power will also need a 'and show these cards to your opponent' line in there to prove during the game that you're not selectively dumping or keeping cards. ;)
     
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    jwilso72 said:
    [M][L][P][G][G] and discard all basic energy?
    All I can say is Holons Castform/ton/trode ftw. Its a bit of a complicated attack, but oh well.

    The picture is amazing and the [P][L] type works really well (and reminds me of the Zap! Theme deck). Only downside is whoa, thats a lot of text for one card.


    Also the power doesn't really make sense since you missed out the 'if heads, draw a card' line. Yours says:
    "Flip a coin for each [L] and [M] Pokemon in play. For every Basic or Evolution you draw, put 1 surge counter on Venusaur"
    Looks like you need to fit another line of text in.

    EDIT: the power will also need a 'and show these cards to your opponent' line in there to prove during the game that you're not selectively dumping or keeping cards. ;)
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    Crap, when I reworded it I accidently deleted the flip a coin thing XD omg silly mistake on my behalf :P

    Ok guys, ill fix that pokepower and I think i'll totally change the attack in a mo

    EDIT:Fixed!! Refresh to see the updated card XP
     
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    Cipher DSX said:
    Now there's far too much text on there. :( You've gone below size 10, right?
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    yeah, size 9 :( o well, better luck next time for me, since I deleted the psd file and am not able to edit anymore.
     
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