In memory of my uncle

<<-_Lord-Krishna_->>

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    This rap is dedicated to my uncle, who was a great man.

    I still have nightmares in the night

    Sometimes I cannot longer fight

    Its a burden I carry to have witnessed your death

    I live like in a rain of pain, every drop is a hit

    I feel I could have prevented your fall

    But I guess it was destinys call

    There was nothing I could do

    But watch them gangster shoot you

    All these years my rage has taken over me

    I just hope I can be set free

    I only blame myself its like im living a lie

    A lie im gonna take with me till the day I die

    Every day without my uncle is a fight between wrong and right

    Cuz he's no longer there to teach me to stand up when I fall

    He's no longer here to tell me to keep tall

    Its through my rhymes I express my noexistent crimes

    To you I confessed my greatest fears

    Now all I have to remember you is my mothers tears

    I'll never be like you so why pretend

    But I promise that your pride I will defend
     
    You really need to get these rhymes out on a cd or something. These are deep, meaningful, and I came up with beats in my head while reading them. You have skill, and with more work you could hit the big time.
     
    Well, if I could, I'd hook you up with some major beats, but I can't sadly. But fear not. Your time will come. One way to try and help is you could try and find instrumental versions of songs and write stuff for them. Just a mere thought.
     
    GO DZ! That rap rocked!!!! It was like Eminem's raps, but shorter. I really liked it! I am a big rap fan cause the beat and stuff. So good luck! XD
     
    I have never been into raps...
    But yours is something special. ^_^ I enjoyed it. Keep up with the great work.
     
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