is this a good pokemon team

[pokecrazy123]

Shuckle Impish nature
Def 40/Sp Def 216/ HP 252
MOVES:
Toxic
Rest
Stealth Rock
Protect

Slamance Adamant Nature
HP 4/ Atk 252/ Spd 252
MOVES:
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Dragon Dance
Fire Fang

Roserade Modest Nature
4 Hp/ 252 Sp Atk/ 252 Speed
Moves:
Sludge Bomb
Energy Ball
Extrasensory
Hidden Power (Fire)

Spirotomb Bold Nature
4 HP/ 252 Def/ 252 Sp Def
Nightmare
Hypnosis
Toxic
Will-o-wisp

Lapras Bold Nature
216 Def/ 198 Sp Atk/ 96 Sp Def
Ice Beam
Thunderbolt
Sing
Surf

Metagross Adamant Nature
152 Hp/ 252 Atk/104 Spd
Meteor Mash
EarthQuake
Agility
Thunderpunch

they are all at 100 and item suggestions?

 

[wolf]

You need a sixth Pokemon, and Garchomp is banned.

 

[pokecrazy123]

Is it a good team now with my changes

 

[Dark Azelf]

You need a sixth Pokemon, and Garchomp is banned.

^This.

Wait, who allowed this thread ?

Anyways, for this to fit S+M standards, you need explanations for what each pokemon accomplishes and why they are on the team. So if you could do that for me that would be great. Add that means you will get better rates too.

Shuckle wants Encore >> Protect to stop it being set up fodder. Leftovers as the item.

Spiritomb wants Pain Split >> Nightmare for healing. Nightmare is an awful strategy since they can just switch. Also wants Sucker Punch >> Toxic and either Taunt/Pursuit >> Hypnosis. That ev spread is bad too 252 hp / 144 def/ 112 sp.def @ careful please. It needs max hp always to maximize its defensive capabilities. Leftovers as the item.

Roserade wants Leaf Storm >> Extrasensory for power. Extrasensory offers no additional coverage. Choice Specs as the item.

Lapras wants leftovers.

Salamence wants Outrage >> Dragon Claw @ Leftovers or Life Orb

Metagross wants Life Orb. I prefer Zen Headbutt >> T-Punch these days too. Helps with Zappy, waters (mostly swampert), Gyarados and the Rotom Alts all with one slot.

Basically Shuckle is dead weight (even more so without that Sandstorm support) and so is Spiritomb. Spiritomb's purpose is to only block Rapid Spin which this team really doesnt need. Lapras is also outclassed by most other bulky waters such as Suicune.

In addition you dont cover most threats sufficiently, there is really nothing stopping things like Heatran, Gyarados, Tyranitar, Salamence, Scizor amongst various others from sweeping you. Take a gander at this and this, its what they are there for. Not to be mean but this needs a massive revamp.

 

[Sebastien Loeb]

Classical team of a newbie, doesn't see strategy wrong moveset. However the least suggestion is that to balance the weakness when you create a new team, to the actual state of the things as you stop a MixApe with that teams?