Jaiyke's Drawings =)

[Jaiyke]

okay here are the drawings i have uploaded...
these are the ones i've done in the last week
they're just drawings/sketches... and i suck at Coloring so i won't be coloring them =) my art style is Inspired by Tetsuya Nomura

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okay!... feel free to Critic Them as you Please -^^- they may be fairly large so careful =) and you may have to click the image thing if it doesnt come up ^^;

 

[tehGDS]

uh there's no pictures, OI see your avatar :) it's good but can I criticise one thing?

 

[Jaiyke]

oh darn it... for some reason they didn't show up...
try right clicking then press Open in New Tab or Window
or just search
Jaiyke in Deviantart sorry for that >.>

 

[tehGDS]

oh darn it... for some reason they didn't show up...
try right clicking then press Open in New Tab or Window
or just search
Jaiyke in Deviantart sorry for that >.>

kk ^^ thanks bvut you should go to imageshack or tinypic if you want, lower the mouth and nose please, and you'll do darn great :)

Looks like marluxia o.P

 

[Jaiyke]

thank you for commenting =D
haha yeah i do agree with you all the way about the Proportions xD
but i've never been one to perfect anything =P
oh god... looking at it now he does look like Marluxia...
but then again i'm sure i'd look like the dude too if i had pink hair.. =P
and i should probably throw the habit of drawing huge hair now >.>;
i have a Photobucket.. would that work?

 

[tehGDS]

YES that will work :p okay I hope I can help anytime :) , btw, cosplay as him when you're in a con :), I'm Roxas

the knees are a little skinny but that's fine I see a lot of them like that :)

 

[Jaiyke]

Alright!.. i totally fixed it xDD

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same ones Just with a Fixed Image =D

Skinny Jeans xDD

 

[♣Gawain♣]

The drawings are good, but I suggest you should consider the body-head-extremity ratio. The hands are somewhat small, and it should be as big as the face(second drawing). And add more muscles to it, they're somewhat skinny :).

Overall 7.25/10

 

[Jaiyke]

yeah after i uploaded the picture i realized how small i made the arms XD
my friend is pretty skinny himself and he was rushing me a bit saying
"Hurry and start with the woopers!!" he's obsessed with them =\
but it was pretty rushed and i've been pushing myself to draw better proportions i've made a couple that i think i've improved with the proportions but i probably won't upload them because they're so random o-o;

thank you for your opinions they're really appreciated it shows what i still must work on ^^

 

[BlueberryYumYum602]

Cool pictures, keep up the good work! You have talent =D