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Blaze looked at the closed door and got up. She kept walking though more slowly. She was tired though she wasn't sure why. It was true that she hadn't slept well but she was used to it. Eventually she fainted with out a clue why.
suddenly as nick was gettin up so did articuno so i tackled it off a cliff and on the way down screamed go through the door its closing hurry!!!!!!!!!!!
Just as the Vulpix reaches the waterfall and certain death the girl catches up with it. She grabs the young red fox by the scruff of the neck and hoists it to shore. She then follows and lies on the damp grass panting. But her task is far from done. The young Vulpix has swallowed to much water and is no longer breathing. She places her hands on the creatures chest and presses gently. Nothing. She does it again. A small cough escapes the Vulpix. A few more times and the little thing is coughing up a gallon of water.
Blaze felt pain but from where she didn't know. She also relised that she couldn't breath. She rasped and kicked.
OOC;There is no cliff so lets say you ramed it into a wall
"Ok lets go"*They went back to the other door marked Whisp away and started to bang on it*"I can hear her theres something wrong.Hold on we're coming"Nick banged the door again
It didn't take long to figure out what was going on. She had been through this before. It had felt the same way when Akira pulled her out of the water. When her lungs were so full of water she couldn't breath. But she hadn't been in the water and there was no Akira to help her. She was consous again but everything was blurred. She gasped trying to get air. She heard as if from far away her friends banging on the door. "Use Wilo Whisp." She gasped before standing up. Lack of air made her fall again.
"She said use Whilo Whisp,but i only saw her use it once." Nick backed up took a breathe and used Whilo Whisp.* the door opened and they hurried to them to get Blaze who was gasping for air*"What should we do?"
ummm wait ive got it we have to use the stone on her dont you see this whole thing hasnt been about putting her trainers body somewhere it was laying her spirit to rest so she will finally know that blaze is safe
Blaze shook her head. "I swore I wouldn't evolve unless Akira could see me do it." But she felt some thing. Like a hand being placed on her head. She heard Akira's voice. "But I'm here Blaze." A tear fell down Blaze's face as she struggled to take the fire stone from around her neck. She placed a paw on the stone and glowed for a minute. When she stopped glowing she was a Ninetales. She felt very tired and fell to the ground sleeping comfortably. The fire stone lay beside her. She could still feel Akira's presence and she felt safe and happy for the first time in years.
Blaze finds its easier to breath and she opens her eyes. "Hey guys, I'm sorry. I was a jerk back there. But I just felt that I had to go alone. But for right now. I just feel like taking a nap." She closed her eyes and fell asleep.
O OK good thanx finally sum1 believes it was there now that that thing iz dead i can go home c ya o wait can i go over 2 ur house 4 a sleep ovr im so despreatly lonely lol