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Journey to the Past (PG)

pokemongarnet

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    Plot: It's been all over the recent news. The legendary Pokémon of the Sinnoh region have been captured! This time it wasn't the meddling of Team Galactic, it was there predecessor Team Rocket. After Cyrus's failed attempts at capturing the legendary trio failed, the underground organization of Team Rocket, whose ex- executives had been scheming this plan since their downfall some years ago, traveled to Mt. Coronet. They used Silph Co.'s recently duplicated Masterball, to catch the two of them.

    They knew that the power of just two legendary Pokémon couldn't dominate the world, so they took a much smarter approach to world domination. They harnessed the time travelling powers of Dialga, and the spatial powers of Palkia so they could travel back in time, to any place they wanted. The purpose for that would be to go back to the ancient world and catch all the legendary Pokémon before their powers were fully developed. The current rocket base location is known but no one will step up to the challenge and stop Team Rocket.

    Where you come in: Not manypeople will stand up and fight Team Rocket, they remember the devastation they had brought upon the Kanto Region. You however are one of the fearless few who will rise to the challenge. To go back in time and stop Team Rocket.

    You respond to a call flyer posted all over the world as a distress call. You will now be heading to Vermillion city for a mission briefing.

    Sign-Ups
    Character Name: First and last, no middle or, nicknames are required but are both allowed.
    Gender: pretty easy
    Age: 12- 18
    Appearance: A detailed description on your characters appearance, no limit or minimum paragraph length as long as you give a good description.
    Personality: Try to avoid regular everyday type characters.
    History: must include what region he/ she is from
    RP Sample
    Pokémon: You are allowed 3 Pokémon up to level 30. No legendaries, or Zoruark or whatever its name is. Write them out in the following format.
    Species
    Level
    Nickname
    Moveset
    Nature
    Description: personality and what it likes, how you met/ caught
    it.
    Extra: anything else that doesn't fit in the categories


    Rules

    1. no bunnying, powerplaying, or godmodding, unless you ask permission of the RPer you bunny (verb?).
    2. Make the story coherent. SO…. Read the other RPers post's on the chapter so everything makes sense.
    3. As far as catching Pokémon goes, you can let any Pokémon appear, as long as it's not legendary, and makes sense for the environment, but leave it at you throwing the ball, so I can decide whether or not you catch it, and what level it is. No shinies, but if it is that better be a darn good post.
    4. Don't pester me about the start time.
    5. NO abusing swearing. Keep it very limited.
    6. Keep romance limited too.
    7. most regular community rules will apply.
    8. it is not first come first serve, it is best SU first.
    9. if you try and reserve a spot, try and get your su up by the next day.

    User
    1.ARCANINEOOD
    2.HANSA
    3.ZEPHYR THE WEST WIND
    4.ZIRKLE38
    5.WILDSPARKGIRL
    6.crockpot
    7.
    8.

    a Quick heads up, this will mainly be taking place in a setting similar to ancient greece.
     
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    Character Name: Mina Posu

    Gender: Female

    Age: 16

    Appearance: Mina is slender and around 5 feet and 4 inches. She has chocolate brown hair in two high ponytails, reaching to her waist; when her hair is down it reaches to her thighs. Mina's eye color is a honey brown color. She is around 115 lbs. and has a light Hawaiian tan skin tone.

    Mina wears baggy dark blue jeans, a pastel purple T-shirt with a silver design of a moonflower and a white undershirt. She has white tennis shoes, a black hip bag on both sides of her waist, and multi-colored bracelets around her wrists.

    Personality: Mina is a free spirit when she is alone. However with family and friends she is polite and friendly; strangers are greeted with a wary but happy front. Although she is a kind and gentle-hearted girl she has no hesitation when her Pokemon and friends are in trouble to jump into action, violently of nesscary.

    Mina has an extreme hate for being caged, look at history for more details. She prefers being out in the open air and where she can see the sky. Too long in one place, depending on the size of said place, can make her snappy and agitated. She is a true music lover and enjoys laying down in the afternoon and listening to the radio for an hour. Wind is another love of Mina's; she likes the feel of a breeze, gust, or whisper of wind.

    History: Mina was born in the Honenn region in the town of LittleRoot (Did you want me to make up a different town or still go with the canon towns?) Mina's parents kept her locked up in the house, only leaving her with books and other things to keep her occupied. Mina learned about the world but never lived in it.

    She lived this way until age 15 1/2, circumstances of hospitalization of her parents brought her to a one-person apartment. The sudden bout of freedom given to her scared her. She kept enclosed in the apartment for a half-a-year until finally realizing she couldn't wait around any longer and stepped out into the world. After receiving her first Pokemon, she knew she wanted to be a Pokemon Trainer.
    RP Sample: I'm sorry. I'm kind of new. Do you want a scene with my OC to see how I roleplay?

    Pokémon

    Species: Torchic
    Level: 10
    Nickname: Guardian
    Moveset: ???
    Nature: Lax
    Description: Guardian is calm and thoughtful. He ponders things and is very attentitive to Mina and his fellow Pokemon. Mina nicknamed him Guardian because of his protective streak to both her Pokemon and her. Mina and Guardian met in a lab when Mina recieved her first Pokemon.

    Species: Ralts
    Level: 7
    Nickname: Velvet
    Moveset: ???
    Nature: Careful
    Description: Velvet was caught on Route 102. She doesn't say much, but chooses instead to stay by Mina's side and observe. She can be mistaken for cold when all it is, is hesitantion to approach new Pokemon and their Trainers. At the same time she is gentle to her fellow Pokemon and Mina. Mina nicknamed her after her hidden soft nature.

    If there is anything else that you need to know, please ask me? (What does it mean Moveset though?)
     
    Character Name: Blaise "Bleach" Brewdale
    Gender: Male
    Age: 15
    Appearance:
    Blaise Brewdale is about 160 cm tall, being a little smaller than average. He is very slender and is also has a small problem with his back, making him bend it a little more forward than usual. This causes people to think he has some sort of 'attitude'. In reality, he has cartilage between some of his vertebrals, which cause this problem. Also, he is albino, which gives him a problem with sun. This is also what gives him his nickname; Bleach.
    Since Blaise is albino, his skin is completely pale with no pigmentation what so ever. His eyes are red, since they have no pigments, the same feature as his white hair has. His hair is cut in a bowl-cut, but is pretty ragged due to low hair-quality. (No, he is not losing his hair!) His face is pretty round, but a little taller than broad. His chin is sharp, just as his straight nose. Over all, he looks pretty colorless and depressing.

    Even though his lack of physical color, he choses sweaters with grey tones, often hoodless and not baggy. His trousers are never any other color than black or blue, and if blue, they are always denim. He always wears a scarf, which has great emotional value for him. This scarf is red and blue, striped.

    Personality:
    Because of his lost appearance and semi-crippled stance, Bleach has always had problems with getting friends... regular ones at least. Still, he managed to get a decent amount of them, who were mostly physically sick, in some way. His friends made Blaise develop a great sense of empathy and understand. Still, he is very afraid of talking to strangers and is generally asocial.

    Because of one of the happenings in his history, which will be apparent when read, made him swear to be a great trainer that would do something great. Therefore, he is very committed to Pokémon, and all that falls into that genre.

    History:
    Blaise was born and raised in the lively Pewter city, which was somewhat isolated from big cities. He went to an ordinary schools, and quickly befriended another semi-crippled boy, Daniel, who had been born with cancer in his brain. The surgeons managed to get it out, and Daniel had a scar ever since, splitting his head vertically, but mostly covered in hair. Because of this scar, which also showed on his forehead, he was also isolated by the other children. Daniel had a great love for pokemon all his life, which was cut short. The doctors didn't manage to kill his cancer completely, and Daniel died 13 years old, without ever starting a pokemon journey.

    After this incident, Blaise decided to start a journey, despite lack of interest, in Daniel's honor. His parents were delighted to hear that he was leaving on a journey, hoping he would open up and blossom as a person. They bought him an exotic pokemon from the neighbouring Region, Johto, which Blaise nicknamed the same as he used to nickname Daniel; Craniel.
    He chose to travel to Johto instead of leading his journey in Kanto, and made it all the way to Goldenrod City, where he found the news add of the Rocket doings, and swore to help...

    RP Sample
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    Pokémon:

    Name: Craniel
    Species: Hoothoot
    Gender: Male
    Level: 18
    Moves:
    Blaise mostly makes him use Hypnosis, and then excessively Peck. As he is carefully bred, Craniel also knows moves like Mirror Move and Feather-Dance.
    For defensive purposes, Craniel may use Reflect, and in a pinch Uproar.

    Nature: Naive
    Description: Blaise's parents bought Hoothoot from a breeder for Blaise's journey, being at lvl. 5. Craniel knows Blaise's feelings very well, and therefore is very naive when it comes to making him irritated or disappointed.

    Extra: Craniel is very easily attracted by female members of his egg-group.

    -.-.-

    Name: Inkelle "Inky"
    Species: Wooper
    Level: 15
    Moves:
    Inkelle will usually start a conflict with Tail Whip, despite Bleach's protests. Blaise would like more use of the ranged attacks of her, such as Water Gun and Mud Shot, but Inkelle is a more physical type, and will use Counter and Body Slam just as much.

    Nature: Naughty
    Description: Blaise met her at the edge of a river, toching the water, but not daring to swim. Since a Wooper's natural habitat, Blaise didn't think much about it while walking towards her. He suddenly pushed her out in the water in carelessness, and quickly picked her up when he noticed the doing. Inkelle noticed that she liked the water, and decided to join Blaise in his travels as a thank.
    She is very naughty, and never listens to Bleach, much to both his and Craniel's disdain.

    Extra: Inky usually takes the attention away from Craniel, which he thinks is okay... until there's a female avian involved. Therefore, they usually end up fighting when meeting one of these.
     
    Character Name: Sayomi Nakamura
    Gender: Female
    Age: 17
    Appearance: Sayomi stands at a height of five foot six inches, though she prays that she will stop growing there. Her skin is lightly tanned due to her life spent near the coast. Her hair is a light brown, often referred to as ginger, but only seems as light as ginger when in direct sunlight. When her hair is in a ponytail, as it usually is, the end will reach three inches above her shoulders; while it can be up to six inches when down. She has no visible bangs around her forehead, often taking out a few strands of hair to frame her face. Her eyes are a bright blue that seem like sapphire in the dark, but are not often seen in such dim light. She wears a light blue tank top along with a tan zipper jacket that is never actually zipped up. When she does take it off, a large crescent scar can be seen covering her left arm from where she had been sliced by an Absol. Sayomi wears a black belt around waist that carries both her Pokeballs and a small blue bag that carries her supplies.
    Personality: Sayomi is one of the most average people you will ever meet. Though she is mostly kind, it is hidden behind the wall that is formed from pure stubborn independence. She tends to be closest to her Pokemon – finding them to be almost if not more entertaining than most people and trainers that she has met. She treats them as her own family, and as such is a reserved person towards strangers. The moment she gets to know someone, however, that reserved mood will instantly vanish, often leading her to treat her friends as family.


    Wherever she goes, she never keeps her Pokemon in a Pokeball. She was often seen to have two or more out at a time. She is not particularly fond of battles, as she leans towards studying Pokemon and sketching them then battling with them – but the recent trouble with Team Rocket has caused her to join in the fight against them.
    History: Sayomi was born in Goldenrod City in the Kanto region, but left with her parents at the age of four. She and her parents journeyed through the many different regions, her parents quickly becoming scientists that studied the habitats of odd and rare Pokemon. Due to this, Sayomi grew up learning more about Pokemon then the average young trainer would learn in their trainer schools. The year she turned twelve, Sayomi and her parents had been in the Hoenn Region – over by Fortree City to study the Castform. But after a while, Sayomi had ventured out with Omno in order to sketch the scenery and Pokemon to pass the time…Only to return after an Absol accidentally sliced her arm with the sickle-like blade on its head. The scar remains even today, though Sayomi says it proves how careless she was in her younger days. It turns out that the same Absol later joined her team after Sayomi had seen it outside their campsite one night, urging her over in order to apologize.
    Despite being a rather peaceful person, Sayomi has finally decided to go to Vermillion City in hopes of stopping Team Rocket's plan in its tracks.
    RP Sample: Taken from 'The Seven Wonders of Pangero'
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    Pokémon:


    Species: Ninetales
    Level: 26
    Nickname: Omno
    Moveset: Omno can often be seen using Dark Pulse or Flamethrower due to the TM's Sayomi used on him, but will not hesitate in using Confuse Ray or Hypnosis.
    Nature: Naughty
    Description: As his personality states, Omno is a very naughty Pokemon. While he acts calm and refined in front of others- around Sayomi and the rest of her Pokemon, he becomes an attention hog. This was probably caused by the fact that he was Sayomi's very first Pokemon; given to her by her parents while they out studying Pokemon. Because he was the first Pokemon Sayomi ever had, and the one who thinks he knows her best, he tries to display such things when other Pokemon are around. He will even go as far as starting small fights with the others, though he is reprimanded immediately.
    Extra: Though not a Shiny Pokemon, Omno is far from a normal Ninetales. His eyes are a bright blue, while his ears are tipped with the same orange as the orange on the tips of his tails.



    Species: Absol
    Level: 26
    Nickname: Rei
    Moveset: Rei can often be seen letting out a few Shadow Balls and Dark Pulse's, and isn't much of the defensive type. He focuses on pure power rather then strategy, but is by no means an unintelligent Pokemon. He will often use a combination of moves such as Double Team and Perish Song.

    Nature: Mild
    Description: Rei was the second Pokemon that Sayomi ever obtained; and it was by no means a happy experience. Rei had been in the forest near Fortree City when Sayomi had come, aiming to sketch him. He took it the wrong way, however, and accidentally sliced her arm with the blade on his head due to how startled he had been. After apologizing to the human girl a few days later, he decided to join her team in hopes of redeeming himself. Though he is naturally a well rounded Pokemon, he tends to fight with Omno more then he would care to admit. Rei normally does this just to keep the peace when the unruly Ninetales' gets out of line.
    Extra: Unlike most Absol in the world, Rei has a dark black line that runs down the middle of his back. The tuft of fur on his chest is also colored black, which is an oddity that even Sayomi doesn't understand.
     
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    Character Name: Taylor Amya Zirkle, she goes by Amya

    Gender: Female

    Age: 15

    Appearance: At first glance, there seems to be nothing notable about Amya. Her height is very normal for her age, 5"5'. A light ivory face is framed in dark brown chin length bangs. The rest of her scrunched hair hangs down her back, reaching just past her shoulders. There are a few light brown highlights on her bangs. She's slim, but with no muscles at all, except on her small calves, presumably from all the walking she does. In the sunlight, her eyes are a very bright blue, some might even say they're pretty, while inside, they're a bit lifeless.
    Light blue jean shorts cling tightly to her thighs, and end right before her knees. A cheery yellow tank top fits snugly around her torso, with a violet short sleeved cropped jacket hung loosely over her shoulders. Black Velcro sandals protect her feet, and a pair of yellow and violet striped socks go up to her knees. On her back is a spacious black bag with rainbow polka dots. On the bag is a myriad of different sized pockets. And her last accessory is a purple belt with six slots, made for Pokeballs.

    Personality
    : When you first meet Amya, you may think she's... unorthodox. You'd be right. Her favorite thing to do is dress up in ridiculous costumes, and sometimes that leaks into her everyday attire. Most of the time, her outfits don't match, but she doesn't have a care in the world. Behind all her oddities is a gentle, caring person. Her Pokemon are her first priority and she deeply loves each one. Tough and weak don't mean much to her, she usually picks the Pokemon she likes, and doesn't particularly care to battle, anyway. Amya is a very friendly trainer, but she prefers to befriend people that are kind to their Pokemon. She's more-or-less just a push-over, settling for sarcastic comments rather than a confrontation. But, if she feels strongly enough, she usually won't budge. Even through all of her gentleness, Amya still tends to get into trouble. As a very heavy procrastinator, when she was in school she often forgot to do assignments, or dismissed them altogether. Her attention is also hard to keep for very long, and she found herself drifting away from school to a large farm, so she could play with her Pokemon. But now that she was excused from school to journey as a Pokemon trainer, Amya could procrastinate and wander without consequence.

    History: Amya is originally from the Johto region, and was raised in Ecruteak city. Through all of her childhood she was surrounded by myths and legends, but wasn't very interested. Her parents had always pushed her to become a Kimono girl, but with that came discipline, and she didn't want any part of it. What really interested her were the Pokemon from the legends. Everyday after school she went to the Burned Tower and looked at its ash covered walls. She'd wait a few minutes to see if she could feel any of the Pokemon from the legends, and she never could. Nonetheless, she did this everyday.

    One day, Amya actually did feel different. She looked around, but saw nothing. There seemed to be some sort of presence, but she couldn't tell why. Out of the corner of her eye, a brilliant silver shimmered. She looked up toward the spec, but Amya couldn't see anything. After that day, she decided to go on a journey, searching for that silver Pokemon she was sure appeared. That brings her to today, where she now resides in Cianwood City, because of it's proximity to Whirl Islands.

    RP Sample
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    Is that enough? If not, I could lengthen it. And is it too story-ish? I'm not good at examples, because they always turn out to be story things, were in a roleplay my posts are usually shaped by other people, a plot, etc. I can always try, try, try again (:

    Pokémon: Sandshrew and Furret

    Pokemon 1 -
    Species: Sandshrew

    Level: 19

    Nickname: Syria

    Moveset:
    Earthquake
    Dig
    Poison Jab
    Gyro Ball

    Nature: Naive

    Description: One day while her parents still thought Amya may turn out to be a Kimono girl, they decided to search for what they thought was a 'sturdy' Pokemon. Amya's mother caught the Sandshrew with her Slowpoke. Once her parents returned to show her, Amya immediately fell in love with her new Pokemon. Amya named him Syria, after a desert because she found her companion didn't much care for moisture.

    Extra: Syria is a very mellow Pokemon, and loves Amya, although Irra finds him clingy. His favorite thing to do is listen to music on the Radio.

    Pokemon 2 -
    Species: Furret

    Level: 17

    Nickname: Irra

    Moveset:
    Swift
    Shadow Ball
    Return
    Water Pulse

    Nature: Relaxed

    Description: After Amya decided to start out on a Pokemon journey, the first pokemon she captured was a Sentret, mainly due to it's cuteness. Once she saw the PokeDex entry, she thought of a nickname that would be suitable for her first self-caught pokemon. The mazes they dig underground led her to labyrinth, and the German translation for labyrinth is irrgarten. And, she derived Irra from that. After having her for a while, she evolved at level 15. Amya was very pleased.

    Extra: Irra is mainly sweet, but she prefers humans to Pokemon, and this frustrates Syria sometimes, who wants a Pokemon companion. Irra enjoys to dress up with Amya, and they have become very close.
     
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    Here's my SU. I'm willing to add anything needed. ^__^

    Character Name: Diana Leton

    Gender: Female

    Age: 16

    Appearance: Diana is 5"7, slim and feminine. Her muscles are well toned but are not so large she looks unnaturally buff. Her wide open eyes are red-violet: warm and comforting, with beautifully curved and styled eyebrows that complement her arched eye shape. Her eyelashes are long and dark. Diana's dirty blonde hair lies semi tied back from her face, but with the main body of it loose around her shoulders.

    Diana always carries herself well, with a straight back and good posture. She isn't the type to let her emotions be extravagantly displayed on her face, but always keeps a measured countenance; she's the type of person whose eyes tell the story. Diana has high cheekbones and full lips, and while her skin is pale by genes, it was been tanned by an active outdoor lifestyle.

    When it comes to clothes, Diana prefers to dress stylishly but with room for active movement. Her usual outfit is that of a simple straw coloured Ancient Greek style dress (much like a Chiton) that reaches down to the top of her knees, made out of a light, thin material and a wide green girdle that sits upon her waist. On her feet lies a pair of old and worn, yet comfortable, sandals that allow easy and swift movement. If she requires warm clothing, Diana dons a long tan trenchcoat which she keeps in a beige shoulder tote bag.

    Personality: Diana has always been a rather aloof girl. She prefers her own company to that of other humans, yes, but she does not shirk society. While she would probably prefer to be alone, exploring a forest (which she does very often) she often attends social gatherings and is well aware of the rules of social etiquette.

    As stated before, Diana often ditches human company and explores forests with her Pokemon. She finds thrill in adventure and likes to feel at one with nature. Forests and caves are absolutely her favourite place to be, although she relishes the thought of exploring anywhere. She's a curious girl who likes to face the unknown.

    Pokemon battles aren't really her thing, although her quiet confidence can sometimes unnerve her opponent and give her the upper hand; she prefers to train her Pokemon by letting them free from their Pokeballs to run around and explore to gain real world experience. She prefers to explore and discover than to fight.

    History: Diana was born in the beautiful Azelea Town, and along with her mother Clara, father Justin and younger brother Archer lived in the peaceful village. Living in such a small, quiet community, Diana learned patience and courage, for she always had to travel through either Ilex Forest or Union Cave in order to reach different towns. She was educated in Earl's Pokemon Academy of Violet City, and was accompanied there by her parents until she was seven years old. By that time she had spent so much time exploring Union Cave, Ilex Forest, the Ruins of Alph and the Slowpoke well that she no longer feared the journey. In fact, she relished the thought of exploring caves and forests alone. She became very attached to Flying Types, admiring their agility and beauty, and became interested in the history of Johto because of her constant explorations of the Ruins of Alph.
    She was present when the Rockets made their attack on the Slowpoke Well, but was not old enough to know what to do. She simply hid away in Ilex Forest for most of that distressing period.
    Upon reaching the age of ten, she was presented with her first Pokemon by her parents; an bright female Aipom. With a spring in her step, Diana set out on her Pokemon journey, exploring all over Johto with Aipom at her side (or more usually up a nearby tree). She later caught a Natu at her old haunt, the Ruins of Alph, which eventually evolved into a Xatu.
    While Diana grew up with these friends and had to make her way with maturity and sophistication through the dog-eat-dog world of Pokemon battling, she never forgot her love for climbing through caves or flitting through forests, nor that sense of wonder she got when exploring the Ruins of Alph and attempting to figure out the mystery of its history. Upon hearing about the quest to head back in time to defeat the Rockets, therefore, and remembering the damage they did to her hometown (however short lived), she decided that she would sign up and experience the feeling of heading into the unknown past to influence it positively in any way she could. She was thrilled at the chance to experience the history she had only dreamed of before.


    RP Sample
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    Pokémon:

    Species: Aipom

    Level: 27

    Nickname: N/A

    Moveset: Swift, Fury Swipes, Tickle, Sand Attack

    Nature: Jolly

    Description: Diana's parents felt that Diana didn't express her emotions enough, and didn't laugh enough for a child. They therefore presented her with Aipom as her starter Pokemon upon her tenth birthday in the hope that she would be taught to express joy properly.
    Aipom is… Hyper. She's jolly and carefree, and likes nothing more than swinging from trees (usually upside down!), playing jokes and generally making a nuisance of herself. As a rule, Diana doesn't carry sugary snacks, instead preferring fruits and nuts, but Aipom can't get enough of them when she gets the chance to eat them.


    Species: Xatu

    Level: 28
    Nickname: N/A
    Moveset: Lucky Chant, Wish, Confuse Ray, Night Shade
    Nature: Serious
    Description: Diana caught Xatu as a Natu while exploring the Ruins of Alph. She simply caught sight of it staring at her. Despite being quiet herself, Diana was slightly disturbed by its behaviour, and so was Aipom, who happened to be out of her ball at that moment. Upon taking a few tentative steps away, Diana watched as Natu hopped a few steps after her and stopped as she had done. Her interest piqued, Diana sent out Aipom to battle Natu, and was impressed at the Flying Type's mystique. It reminded her of the very reason she had come to the Ruins of Alph in the first place, and so endeavoured to capture it.
    After months of travelling, Natu eventually evolved into Xatu. It became much more serious and still, and Diana appreciated its quiet wisdom.
    Xatu often stands as still as a statue, simply gazing into space with its deep, enigmatic, grey eyes; looking but not seeing; hearing but not listening.


    *grumbles* Darn spoiler tags...
    xX
     
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    Good SUs by all of you guys. I have a few problems I must adress,
    Wildsparkgirl: a moveset is what attacks a pokemon has, and try to up the lvels of your stuff it can go to 30.
    you're all accpeted, with the exception of wild spark girl just fix those two things and you're good.

    ONE MORE THING I'M LOOKING FOR A FEW MORE BOY CHARACTERS. I THINK I'LL ACCEPT A TOTAL OF EIGHT CHARACTERS

    THIS WILL START SOON BUT I WANT YOU TO KNOW YOUR SUS WILL BE RATED AND IF AN SU I DEEM BETTER COME ALONG BEFORE IT STARTS YOU MAY BE BUMPED.
     
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    hey I'm still writing out my char.. I'll post her up soon though D=
    can I reserve a spot pretty please?
     
    Character Name: Mina Posu

    Gender: Female

    Age: 16

    Appearance: Mina is slender and around 5 feet and 4 inches. She has chocolate brown hair in two high ponytails, reaching to her waist; when her hair is down it reaches to her thighs. Mina's eye color is a honey brown color. She is around 115 lbs. and has a light Hawaiian tan skin tone.

    Mina wears baggy dark blue jeans, a pastel purple T-shirt with a silver design of a moonflower and a white undershirt. She has white tennis shoes, a black hip bag on both sides of her waist, and multi-colored bracelets around her wrists.

    Personality: Mina is a free spirit when she is alone. However with family and friends she is polite and friendly; strangers are greeted with a wary but happy front. Although she is a kind and gentle-hearted girl she has no hesitation when her Pokemon and friends are in trouble to jump into action, violently of nesscary.

    Mina has an extreme hate for being caged, look at history for more details. She prefers being out in the open air and where she can see the sky. Too long in one place, depending on the size of said place, can make her snappy and agitated. She is a true music lover and enjoys laying down in the afternoon and listening to the radio for an hour. Wind is another love of Mina's; she likes the feel of a breeze, gust, or whisper of wind.

    History: Mina was born in the Honenn region in the town of LittleRoot (Did you want me to make up a different town or still go with the canon towns?) Mina's parents kept her locked up in the house, only leaving her with books and other things to keep her occupied. Mina learned about the world but never lived in it.

    She lived this way until age 15 1/2, circumstances of hospitalization of her parents brought her to a one-person apartment. The sudden bout of freedom given to her scared her. She kept enclosed in the apartment for a half-a-year until finally realizing she couldn't wait around any longer and stepped out into the world. After receiving her first Pokemon, she knew she wanted to be a Pokemon Trainer.
    RP Sample: I'm sorry. I'm kind of new. Do you want a scene with my OC to see how I roleplay?

    Pokémon

    Species: Combusken
    Level: 23
    Nickname: Guardian
    Moveset: Ember, Double Kick, Focus Energy, Scratch
    Nature: Lax
    Description: Guardian is determinded and thoughtful. He ponders things and is very attentitive to Mina and his fellow Pokemon. Mina nicknamed him Guardian because of his protective streak to both her Pokemon and her. Mina and Guardian met in a lab when Mina recieved her first Pokemon.

    Species: Kirlia
    Level: 20
    Nickname: Velvet
    Moveset: Confusion, Teleport, Double Team, Psychic
    Nature: Careful
    Description: Velvet was caught on Route 102. She doesn't say much, but chooses instead to stay by Mina's side and observe. She can be mistaken for cold when all it is, is hesitantion to approach new Pokemon and their Trainers. At the same time she is gentle to her fellow Pokemon and Mina. Mina nicknamed her after her hidden soft nature.

    Speices: Mightyena
    Level: 21
    Nickname: Fang
    Moveset: Howl, Bite, Roar, Tackle
    Nature: Calm
    Description: Fang was caught on Route 101. He is calm and very careful of his surroundings. Doesn't get caught up in anger or lured in by taunts. Steady and sure. He was nicknamed Fang because as a Poochyena he had very large fangs and knew how to use them. Now he is a Mightyena and though his fangs aren't as big they are still impressive.

    (How about this? All good?)
     
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    Character Name: Jared Nogicura (pronounced no-geh-coor-uh)

    Gender: Male

    Age: 15

    Appearance: blond hair, 5'3,small legs and arms,weakish,looks like the boy in jhoto in soul silver

    Personality: a very loving trainer,keeps his pokemon out of his ball as much as possible,has a blue backpack in which he holds his items,has a blue pokegear,hates climbing,loves running and exploring

    RP Sample:Ive never rp'ed a pokemon one but ive read the rules.............

    Pokémon:

    Species: cyndaquil

    Level:15

    Nickname: quill

    Moveset: ember,tackle,flamewheel(TM),smokescreen

    Nature:cheerful

    Description:Loves battling,Used to be tormented by old trainer but was stolen away by jared,stays out of pokeball most of the time
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    Extra: Im new to pokemon rping
     
    thank you for editing that wildsparkgirl. but daveyp1997 you need to rework that completely you were way to vague, look at the other SUs to get a good idea how an SU should look
     
    im fairly new to rping itd be longer if i had a sample...............
     
    Daveyp1997; I might have some useful tips, if you want. You said he has blond hair. How long is it? Is it messy, or does he keep it very tidy? You could talk about his eyes, and his clothing especially. Assume I don't know what they boy from Soul Silver looks like. Describe the details. Does he have good posture? Or does him being weak make him prone to slumping, and an all around not confident gait? Why does he hate climbing? When he was younger did a caterpie jump out and scare him from the tree? The history is also very important. Where did your person come from? When creating a character, answer questions like, where? why? who? what? when? and how? There are a million little things you can add (:
     
    Magical Leaf

    Character Name: Adam Locke
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Appearance: Adam has brown hair, which is reasonably short but always well kept. He has misty grey eyes that do not betray any emotion and his skin is very pale. His mouth is small and usually a thin, hard pressed line, only a few shades darker than the rest of his skin. He doesn't have any skin marks or blemishes. His nose is quite small, but not inproportionately so, and his eyes are about average.

    He is quite tall, but a lot of his height comes from his legs, but not enough to make himself look gangly. He has medium sized arms and long, graceful, dainty hands, with very elegant and long fingers. His legs are graceful and elegant, and look like they've been through a lot of acrobatics. He is very lean and very agile.

    Adam's self made "Armour" Is very durable. He wears burgundy armour of adamantium all over his body, legas and feet, which protects him from fire and most other forms of attack due to engineering and enhancements. Over his chest and back, he wears a plate of black metal with a small gap running down and then separating to circle him right around to his back to provide flexibility. His legs are also covered in adamantium, and have black plates running down them, too. His shoes are made of adamantium and look like combat boots, but smaller and sleeker. He wears a small cape that is only over his right shoulder and goes down halfway his back.

    Personality:
    Adam isn't the kind of person who you'd meet and instantly like. He rarely speaks to anyone except his closest friends. He practically radiates an aura of malice and fear, but also of loneliness and sadness, and other people instinctively know- He's not one of them. He's different. An outsider.

    He has extreme standards for friendship and trustworthiness towards other people, and he deigns very few people to be worthy to even regard as a friend. If you could gain his trust, you'd find he wasn't a completely emotionless. In truth, he is a lonely and generally sad person, and his silence and apartheism are drawn from his sadness, and his intelligence lets him use it to a great amount of success. He is an emotional and creative person.

    However, kindness is not a word that comes familiarly from Adam. He has a strong desire for justice, but his idea of justice is his own and will conflict with others. He is not accustomed to giving out random acts of kindness to those who he doesn't know. He'll often only aid those who he considers he owes a favour, or those who have earned his trust and respect.

    Adam takes vengeance, promises and honour
    very seriously. To someone who he makes a promise, he will go to any length to fulfill his promise. If he is made a promise, he expects it done, and if it isn't, life coul rapidly get unpleasant for those who would fail him. Despite all, his silence is his most prized trait, and he always tries to remain quiet at all times.

    Adam loves the environment, and by extension, any Grass Pokemon. Despite the common misconception, he isn't one of those hippie environmentalists; he is a true envrionmental warrior, ready to fight, and possibly die, to save the planet. His "Armour" Is proof of his skirmishes. Many would call him an eco-terrorist.

    Overall, He is very, very quiet, and a loner. He knows who has power and who doesn't. He walks with an air of malice and seems incredibly sinister. He never seems to show any emotion other than comprehension, but inside, he is a compassionate and determined soul, willing to do anything to acheive his personal justice. And he never forgets. And he never forgives.

    History:
    From a young age, Adam was an outcast. Always the one who would be teased and picked on. Always the one who would be alone whenever it came to choose partners. Always the one who'd get kicked around by those who were stronger than him. But instead of channeling the energy into anger, he made into sadness and regret. And vengeance. Always vengeance.

    As he grew, he came to understand a great truth. People were evil and they ruined everything they touched. It was this that helped him become who he was. It was this that helped him train himself to become nature's guardian. And, when he was older, it helped him to fight for the planet.

    When he was 10, about four years after his family had moved to Celadon City, his parents split up, leaving him feeling truly alone, so he set off on his Pokemon journey to find adventure, friendship and peace with his precious Chikorita, Florence. During his many battles and attacks on factories and their owners, his Chikorita evolved into a Bayleef, and he's working to evolve it again.


    RP Sample:
    This is my first RP.

    Pokémon:
    Species:
    Bayleef
    Level: 27
    Nickname: Florence
    Moveset:
    Razor Leaf
    Synthesis
    Magical Leaf
    Sweet Scent

    Nature: Calm

    Description:
    Adam met Florence in the usual way; when Professor Birch was visiting Celadon City, and under the guidance of Erika, the gym leader, Adam chose a Chikorita to be his pet for two years, then his first Pokemon. The two became inspearable, to the poitn that Adam would allow Florence to sleep on his bed. When he set off on his journey, Adam naturally took Florence along with him. When the pair attacked an oil cruiser, she engaged in battle several Water Pokemon. The amount of experience gained from the fight let her evolve. She is known for a love of classical music and ice cream.


    Species:
    Roserade
    Level: 25
    Nickname: Rose
    Moveset:
    Mega Drain
    Stun Spore
    Grasswhistle
    Magical Leaf

    Nature: Sassy

    Description:
    Rose was Adam and Florence's first new partner. On a trip to the Hoenn region, Adam found an injured Budew and took it into his care. After it was fully reccovered, it evolved into a Roselia because of it's feelings towards Adam, and it joined Adam and Florence in their quest to save nature and combat the forces of technology and environmental harm. Since then, she was exposed to the radiation of a Shiny Stone when Adam bought one off of a merchant, mistakenly believing it to be a diamond. She adores mostly herself, and likes mirrors and jewellery. She also loves cherries.



    Species:
    Breloom
    Level: 23
    Nickname: Toxin
    Moveset:
    Mach Punch
    Leech Seed
    Stun Spore
    Headbutt

    Nature: Brave

    Description:
    Toxin is the most aggressive and dynamic of Adam's Pokemon, and the way he came to join Adam is equally so. Adam was tending to some plants that he had found near his camp in Petalburg woods when Toxin, at this stage a Shroomish, attacked him with a cloud of spores, thinking he was a predator. When he woke up, he set off after it, with Florence and Rose following on. He found it tending to some mushrooms, and sent Rose out to fight it. During the ensuing battle, Adam managed to capture Toxin and gain his trust, and eventually, it evolved into a Breloom.
     
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    You know, it kind of seems like he's mideavel, in other words he has armor. If you could just turn him into a modern day person that'd be great.
     
    Character Name: Salom Hollow
    Gender:Lady?
    Age: 16
    Appearance: Dark, chocolatey brown hair, with sparkly dark green eyes. She's always wearing something that is black.
    She has bangs in her face that are cut just below the eye.

    Personality: Shy, but once she warms up to you, it can be a little crazy! More or less a weirdo once she knows you.
    History: She has lived in a family of two divorces, her mother is a drunk, and she was in Sinnoh, but she moved to Johto; Has a major crush on a dude named Eathen
    RP Sample ???
    Pokémon:
    Species: Gyarados, Quilava, and Noctowl
    Level 30; 29; 23
    Nickname Krista; Daron; Shavo
    Moveset Bite, Dragon Rage, Rock Smash, Aqua Tail; Flame Wheel, Quick Attack, Cut, Swift; Hypnosis, Peck, Uproar, Confusion
    Nature Quirky; Brave; Naughty
    Description: All of them love their trainer, none of them will hurt unless told to. All are very caring, and will only obey their trainer
     
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