Judgement day in Sinnoh: Rise of Heatran

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My Character.

Name:Max Rivers

Age:13

Gender:Male

Appearance:Max is about 5ft9in tall.He wears a pair of baggy blue jeans and a plain black tee shirt.His eyes are a dark brown almost balck color.His harir is black and comes just above his eyes.It runs down his neck and spikes out.He also wears a blue bandana as a bracelet.

Personality:Max is a fun loving person.He is a very hard worker when it comes to training his pokemon.He loves making friends,and rivals too.

History:Max became a trainer at age 10.He got his first pokemon at the age of eight but he didnt become a trainer untill he became more experienced.Max grew up in the area of Kanto know as Pewter City.He was friends with the local gym leader,Brock.He taught Max to be a greatly skilled trainer.He only has two pokemon:A Scyther,and a Roserade.The Scyther was given to Max as a gift by his dad.It was his first pokemon,giving it sentimental value.On the other hand his Roserade was found as an injured Budew while max was on his gym battle jouney.
Max was on his journey through Kanto[having already gotten his eight badges]when he wandered into a battle of epic proportions.Moltres,Zapdos,and Articuno were being chased by members of Team Rocket.Max had no choice but to intervine.He and his two pokemon destroyed the grunts,and freed the legendary birds.The creatures bacame good friends of Max and his pokemon,making them available whenever Max is in trouble.


Species:Scyther
Nickname:None
Gender:Male
Personality:Very playful,funloving,he has been around Max for so long that he has picked up his traits.
Obtained: Given to Max as a gift on his eigth birthday by his father.
Other:N/A

Species:Roserade
Nickname:None
Gender:Female
Personality:Very calm,and content.Likes to battle especially in contest battles.
Obtained:Found injured on Max's pokemon league journey.
other:N/A

Species:[obained later]
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EDIT: Okay max, you're accepted.

Nick and company had just polished off a big meal and were heading back to Vielstone when he was stopped by a Junior trainer. "Wow, Mister!" He said with awe "You look really strong! Would you like to battle?" Nick was unsure at first, I mean, the kid looked like ten, and if Nick lost, that would make him look real bad. "Okay, then." He said getting over it. "Let's go!" "Great!" Said the Jounior trainer. "Go, Raticate!" Alright, Piplup! Let's do it!" Shouted Nick. Raticate glared at Piplup, and the glare was returned. There was no fear in piplup's eyes. "Raticate, use superfang!" Shouted the trainer. "Piplup, Use rain dance!" SHouted Nick. The trainer had a puzzeled look on his face. Raticate connected, and Piplup summoned rain. "Super fang agan, Raticate!" Yelled the trainer. Nick just snickered. Raticated connected again. "Piplup! Use Brine!" Bellowed Nick. Piplup attacked, and Raticate fell, defeated. The junior trainer was astonished. "I lost..." he said, then walked away. It was at this time that he saw a older looking fella with wild grey hair march into the town square with three others following. Not knowintg that it was Galactus, Nick said to himself "He look's pretty mad..." then went back to Sunnyshore's Pkemon center to heal Piplup.
 
Dyan, at sight of the entrance to Sunnyshore City. All of a sudden two Team Galactic members running for freedom with 100 Officer Jennies chancing them.

"Looks like trouble Drow, Lets put a stop to this" says Dyan and Drow sped to the scene. Drow used her Mean look attack, scaring the goons to solid still. "We are introuble now." Said one of the team Galactic members "Look at that umbreons eyes, they are demon like. I can't look away.. I'm Scared!!" said the second Galactic Member ignoring his partner "Shut up, Stay nothing. We have nerves of steal. We can't be broken!" the first goon said looking at the approaching Officers and a very small trainer.

"Good job Drow!" happily said Dayn As he started to pet her

"Thanks, you were a real help" stated one of the Jenny's "These Team Galactic members were up to no good"

"I saw a boy on a Flygon flying into this city, It looked pretty urgent so I came to check it out"

"Really, Well keep an eye out for you, Thanks again" said Jenny

Dyan then proceeded into the city leaving the Team Galactic Members to be investigated, he saw one of the goons crying. Dyan turning his head back to the city laughing.

Inside the city, Dyan quickly sighted the lighthouse suspecting actively up there, Pasting the Pokemon center just missing Nick.
 
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Just as the masked maniac was about to shoot Alex,Max rushed in the door and ordered his Scyther to cut the gun that the masked man was aiming at him."Lets get out of here,now!"Max yelled."I'll explain later lets just go!"he screamed at Alex."Now Roserade,use sleep powder!"he ordered as the masked man dozed off into a deep sleep."No tie him up with your string shot,Roserade."Max ordered to his Roserade."Scyther you grab cynthia and lets go!"
"Scy,scyther!"his pokemon exclaimed.Alex,Max,the unconsious Cynthia,and Max's two pokemon escaped the from the mad man and ran to saftey."Im sorry for the lack of introduction,"Max said out of breath,"But my name is Max,I heard the rucus from next door,so im wondering why the pokemon league champion isunconsious,and you were just at gunpoint if you dont mind explaining!"Max said.
 
Hawk moved away from the Binoculars in the lighthouse, He walked down the staircase and to the elevator.

"Wow the Pokemon League building is amazing," Hawk says taking a pokeball off of his belt, "We'll fight there one day." The Elevator radio chimes and the door infront of Hawk opens. Hawk walks out to the door and into Sunnyshore. He takes in a deep breath, the ocean air reminds him of Mossdeep. Hawk takes a short walk until he reaches the Pokemon Center.

"Alright you two come on out!" Hawk shouts. Larion jumps out of his Pokeball excited to be free. On the other hand Eevee jumps out of her pokeball immeadetly turns around and headbutts Hawk in the chest. Upon seeing Eevee's poor conduct the other trainers around Hawk laugh.

"EEVEE! Gah! Can you not do that around the other trainers!" Hawk shouts to Eevee, but Eevee just struts around stubbornly. Lairon jumps ontop of Hawk and happily shouts out.

"Ok you two calm down I've got to call Dad." Hawk walks to the Vid-Phone and enters his house's phone number. Shortly after his fathers face appears on the screen. "HAWK! Are you ok! We heard you ship crashed!" Hawk's Father shouts as soon as he appears.

"I'm fine Dad, I have a new friend for you to meet! Hey Ee-" Hawk calls over Eevee but is cut off when she head buts him out of the screen. "Hello Eevee." Hawks father says. Eevee greets Hawks father by shouting its own name. "Hawk your Eevee looks very strong. Her Coat is so Shiny she'll be a monster in battle."

Hawk puts his hand behind his head. "You have no idea..." Hawk says giving Eevee and angry stare. "Well I have good news for Jimmy. Aron evolved!" As soon as Hawk says that his call cut short by a Power surge. The lights go out and then on again.

Nurse Joys calms everyone down and sighs.
"Volkner..."
 
"I'm Alex. And for how I got into this... Well, I got a note to come to the Lighthouse here," Alex said to the new guy named Max. "And I came, and that guy knocked me out. And I woke up, tied up in a chair with Cynthia. I think that guy is from Team Galactic."

"Forgetting something?" said a voice. It was Aura, his Lucario, from the Poke Ball.

"Oh yeah," Alex said. He went back and picked up the three Poke Balls. Then they exited the Lighthouse. Suddenly, the lights in every building in the city went out, and went back on. "Power surge.." Alex said, letting out Dragonfly.

"Let's go, Dragonfly," he said to the Flygon. Alex turned to Max. "Hop on."

"Who's this?" Dragonfly asked.

"It's Max, the guy who saved us," Alex said. "good thing there's enough room for Cynthia."

"Where are we going now?" Dragonfly asked.

"To find all those Officer Jennies," Alex replied. He turned around, seeing a kid with an Umbreon. "Um.. hi," Alex said.
 
Edit, OOC:Sorry, I thou God-modding was when I control another character, and making myself seem better, I know i made them say stuff, but I though it would be ok, since I used Alex and Max to say stuff which was already stated. Ill re-edit this to fullfill the rules.

"hey, Your the guy with flygon, I saw you on Route 222 flying here, looked pretty important" Replied Dyan "Oh ya I'm Dyan. And this is my Umbreon Drow" Umbreon feeling easier to see the Flygon looks up at Dyan. Dyan looking around seeing broken bons and a small tubed TV with a scratched out Team Galactic Logo sticker on it, believing that the Galactic Members responsible for this. And without a word from Alex and Max ,Dayn said "Follow me, Me and the Officer Jenny's Had a Chase for some Galactic goons earlier, Must not waste time."

Zooming passed Dayn was Flygon with the Trio on board
Wasn't that Cynthia the League Champion at the end? What is going on in this town
 
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Dragonfly easily got to the Officer Jenny HQ at the other side of town in about 10 minutes. Just then, Cynthia woke up. "Huh?" she said. "What happened?"

"Um, some Team Galactic guy kidnapped you, remember?" Alex asked. "Then I came in, and saved you."

"You were the boy who got my note?" Cynthia asked. "I sent my Wingull with it when the man wasn't looking."

"But you don't have a Wingull," Alex pointed out.

"You think I only have six Pokemon?" Cynthia asked.

"Anyway, do you know that guy who kidnapped us?" Alex asked.

"No," she replied. "I know he's from Team Galactic. He must be one of the admins."

"Yeah, he put some grunts outside to divert the Officer Jennies," Alex said. They stopped in front of the Officer Jenny HQ. "OK, here we are."
 
"hey, Your the guy with flygon, I saw you on Route 222 flying here, looked pretty important" Replied Dyan "Oh ya I'm Dyan. And this is my Umbreon Drow"

"I'm Alex, My flgyons name is Dragonfly" Alex said after seeing so many new faces " Umm.. oh this is Max and Cynthia. Max here just saved us from a weirdo creepy guy with a gun who was working with Team Galactic members"

"I see, I help the officer Jenny's stopped afew Galactic Goons just outside Sunnyshore" Replied Dyan

"We were about to met up with them" said Max

"Cool, Ill join" Said Dyan looking at Dragonfly seeing she can't lift anymore, "...I'll walk. "
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(OOC: okay, this is a perfect example of God-modding. Dyan is Umbr3on's character, thus, is the only character he should control. I'll let it slide this time, but next time, you will get the boot.)

Nick had just exited the pokemon center with Piplup following. Piplup looked very refreshed and restored. "Feel's good to have all of those scrapes removed, huh?" Asked Nick. "Piplup!" Answered Piplup, obviously happy. Then the two noticed the two Galactic grunts being towed away by the Jennies. "Whoa, look's like trouble has started." Said Nick "But it look's cleared up." "Pip Piplup!" Replied Piplup. Just tha Nicoloas noticed Galactus again, this time, he looked at the grunts, scoffed, then left the scene. "What's his deal?" Wondered Nick. Then he noticed Dyan, Max, and Alex. Nick approached them, and asked "You three wouldn't know what's going on, would you?"
 
"Um, yeah," Alex said. "Some weird dude kidnapped me and Cynthia, and it turns out he was from team Galactic! Then, Max saved us, and we met Dyan."

"Hello, boys, and Cynthia," said an Officer Jenny, walking past them. They all grabbed the Galactic members and brought them into the HQ, locking them up.

"Well, looks like we didn't need to go to the HQ then after all," Alex said. "So, guys, where do we go next?"
 
"I have a sugg.." Was all Nick could let out when Galactus and his three admins showed up in the middle of Sunnyshore. Galactus then shouted in a megaphone "Attention, Citizens of Sunnyshore!" He said with his usual insane voice "I have an important announcement to make. I promise this will change your life forever!" Just then a reporter and three cameramen went over to get a good shot of Galactus. The cameramen set up their equippment, and the reporter said "Hello, this is Gabby, and we have a situation in Sunnyshore. There is a madman on a bridge and he is ranting about something. let's watch." Galactus then Shouted "You may remember a team by the name of Galactic five years ago! They were nothing! This is were true evil lays! Right then hundreds of grunts, drssed all in black and dark grey, appeared behind the admins and Galactus. "We of team Universe shall rule all!" The grunts do some kind of cheer. "Just what do you plan to do, exactly?" asked the mayor of Sunnyshore. "Simple" Said galactus, with an insane grin. I plan to engulf the entire planet in lava! Gasps can be heard all around "This is getting good" said Gabby from a distance "and creepy..." "You're out of your gord!" Replied the mayor. "How do you possibly plan to do that?" "Excellent question!" said Galactus. "You may have heard of a place not far from here by the name of Stark mountain, correct?" the mayor cringed "Yes?" he said with an impatient tone "Go on!" "I have a few associates feilding out the place for a few hours" Galactus stated "That will allow me to wake up Heatran! The fabled creature said to dwell in the mountain's walls!" The mayor cried "You're sick! You actually think you can get away with this, Psyco?" Galactus glared at the mayor. "First off, my name is Galactus! Second, who is stupid enough to mess with us, right guys?" the admins and grunts do that same cheer. "So you see" says Galactus "I'm not worried. Heatran will awaken, thus allowing me to capture it. Once I do, Heatran will make this planet what I want it to be: A complete wasteland. Nobody or nothing will live unless I say so!" Galactus bellowed. Just then, a man with red and yellow hair went over to Galactus. "What is it, Buck?" Galactus asked "You were supposed to stake out the mountian!" "Relax" Stated Buck "I just came to tell you that our evaccuation plan was a sucess." "Excellent!" Said Galactus with glee. "People, In approxamently four hours, the planet that you now know will be gone forever! Farewell" Galactus then left, with his admins, grunts and Buck. "And that's the news" said Gabby, trying to sound happy, but failing horribly. "Wow" Said Nick "That was disturbing..."


AT THIS TIME, NOBODY ELSE CAN ENETR THIS RPG!
 
"Well, now I know where we go," Alex said after the weird speech was over. "We have to go to Stark Mountain. We have to stop Team Galactic from destroying the Earth."

"But how will we be able to do that?" asked Cynthia.

"I'm not sure," Alex said. "But do you know anyone else who'll do it? Let's go." He got back on Dragonfly.
 
Gathering around the site, were many people some were locals, some were travellers just arriving. Surprised to the sudden news,"Why, What did we do?" said many feared people "We have to do something"

Drow, Scared Crawls behind Dyan, sensing her fear Dyan returns Drow to her pokeball. Over hearing Alex, Dayn thinkings
this can be our only chance to stop this madness I usually Travel alone, but desperate times call for desperate measures

The Day soon faded, Dyan took off his day glasses and started to speak with a loud volume to get everyones attention.
I hope I dont make a fool of my self, Someones gotta do it

"Who else will help us.. help us defeat Galactus?" shouts Dyan to the rest of the people with a slit shudder, never making a public announcement before.
 
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"Who else will help us... help us defeat Galacticus?" Dyan said.

Alex looked up at him. Everyone in the crowd looked away, too scared. "You cowards!" Alex said, standing up. "You aquiesce to defeat already? I will join you, Dyan. Who else will come?"

"I will," said Cynthia. "To repay you for saving me."

Alex looked at her and looked back into the crowd. "Who else will stop the world from being a giant Pompeii?" he asked.

((BTW, Cynthia is just an NPC. We can all control what she does.))
 
As I was entering the city there was a crowd of people looking up at a man talking about the end of the world. I thought it was just a joke but after I seen the grunts I understood it was no joke at all. I looked at Treecko who was in my arms it looked like it was ready for action. Thats when a boy named Dyan made a Speech I said "Im in Im not going down without a Fight". Thats when I took out my PokeNav and informed my parents of the news so they told me to do my best and to make sure I come home safe.
 
"I w-will he-lp you." I gulped. "What had i done? I just became a trainer!My pokemon are still weak!" I looked at my terrified Chimchar

"Chim..Char" it said slowly. i could tell it was terrified.
"Don't worry,Buddy we'll get tougher along the way,right?"
Chimchar and Turtwig ran away from me,but a team Universe grunt scared them off and they came back.

There was nothing i could do.."i Guess we're going to Stark Mountain" i said,sounding terrified

"I will help you!" i said this time with all my courage..
 
Nick doesn't get scared easily, but his face suggested otherwise. "I'll help" He started "We can't just bend down and kiss their feet. Not without a fight, anyways." Nick was getting over confident. He knew his team wasn't the best, but they always seemed to get the job done one way or another. but no matter what, He was confident in their abilities and was sure they could get it done.

(OOC: If you have planned to catch another pokemon, do so either now, or at stark mountain, even if they can't normally be found there. also, Those who were too late to post may show up at stark mountain for any reason to catch up with the storyline when the hero team gets there.)
 
Hawk walked through the crowd after the speech was over. But was stopped by Nurse Joy when she said.

"Excuse me but are you Hawk Hasro?"
"Yes? Why might you ask?" Hawk said puzzled.
"A package came over a Wi-fi system. Its from your brother."
"Really?!?" Hawk asked excited and Nurse joy gave him a brown box. "Wow in all this chaos I wonder what it is." Hawk said.
As he opened it there was a note and a pokeball. Hawk took the note and opened it.

Dear Bro,

I don't think we have much time... I've been noticing some real strange things going on in Mossdeep. Mr. Stone came by and was on an Investigation with Lance & Cynthia of the Elite Four. I think something huge is about to happen. And since your a begginer I think you'll need some help. Heres my Buddy Pigeot. You'll need a Pokemon the fly out or around if something bad happens. Don't worry about me. I'll be fine without him, Metagross will take care of me. I'm worried about you. Stay of trouble...

Your Older Bro.

As Hawk picked up the Pokeball he put it in his Belt and Steped forward. He thinks to himself "If my older Brother is helping so will I." He steps forward.

"I'll Help you!" Hawk says. Everyone around him gasps and an older Citizen grabs his shoulder.
"Step down son... This is serious bussiness, a Kid can't help."
"I'm no Kid. I'm a pokemon trainer and I CAN help." Hawk pushes the mans hand away and joins the others.

OOC: Also I had an idea earlier today when I was bored. Should a Moltres show up and help fight Heatran later in the story?
 
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"Well, then we have our group," Alex said. "It's time to go to Stark Mountain."

"You'll never survive!" said some old man. "We're all doomed!"

"We may be, but I'm not giving up. There's always a chance we can survive if we try. But there's no chance if we give up now," Alex said.

Dragonfly nodded. "This won't be easy.." she said.

"Well we have to go," Alex said. "Otherwise, it's a sure chance we'll all perish. We have to stop that crazy guy."

He turned to the others. "If you're coming, then come on," he said. "We don't have much time." He hopped on Dragonfly.
 
"Alright! Lets see what you've got. PIGEOT lets go!" Hawk shouts as Pigeot bursts from its pokeball and swoops up Hawk. He flies at high speed keeping up with Dragonfly and Alex.

"Wooohoooo!" Hawk shouts as the wind whips against his face. In the rush of the moment Hawk forgets about Galactus and Team universe. All he can think about is the fun and excitement he is having right now. Then he remembers the reason he is here and becomes serious. He tightens his grip on Pigeot and gets ready to head out with the others.

The path to the battle zone looms before them.
 
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