just testing a card

[PalkiaSpace]

i was thinking about make a small 30-60 card set like this, but i wasn't sure if they were even good.

i know i don't have the right fonts, or sizes of some things, (i'm doing this freehand on paint) so don't be rude and be like: "you have all of the fonts wrong" Yeah, i know.

i just want to know if any body was intrested so i would make more.
if a lot of people post and are intrested, i'll keep putting them.

here's the first: (it lost quility because i had to save as a jpeg)

 

[ShinjisLover]

For this one, 'paralyzed' should have a capital 'P'. And upon looking at other Electivire cards, your card's HP seems a bit too high. Perhaps it should be in the 120's or 100's?

One last thing, you got the fonts wrong! *shot* it seems like the top and bottom of the Steel symbol has been cut off. Why is that?​

 

[sanny the hedgehog]

uh no offense but you can tell that thing is fake at a first glance.
the font doesn't really match the type of the actually pokemon cards

 

[ShinjisLover]

the font doesn't really match the type of the actually pokemon cards

Err. . *cough*

i know i don't have the right fonts, or sizes of some things, (i'm doing this freehand on paint) so don't be rude and be like: "you have all of the fonts wrong" Yeah, i know.

Perhaps you should read through before reviewing next time?​

 

[PalkiaSpace]

For this one, 'paralyzed' should have a capital 'P'. And upon looking at other Electivire cards, your card's HP seems a bit too high. Perhaps it should be in the 120's or 100's?​

oh! yeah, i'll change it to 110.​

​

One last thing, you got the fonts wrong! *shot* it seems like the top and bottom of the Steel symbol has been cut off. Why is that?​

hmm. i'm actually not sure about that.

 

[PalkiaSpace]

here's the fixed electivire, and a reprint bulbasaur from Base set:

 

[Sonota]

Am I the only one who can spell? Tehe, "opponent" (your spelling is oponent) is how it's supposed to be spelled..

 

[PalkiaSpace]

here's Dusknoir lv.X!
i think it's better than the others.

 

[ShinjisLover]

Electivire is much better.

Bulbsaur's text has a lot of white dots around it, making it look really low quality. But it's overall very well done.

Dusknoir's picture looks good, but the white dots detract from the appearance. The text at the very bottom is incredibly difficult to read. The text is just low-quality. And you spelled Pokémon with a lower-cased 'p'. And 'Duskoir lv.X' should be 'Dusknoir LV. X'.​

 

[PalkiaSpace]

Electivire is much better.​

Bulbsaur's text has a lot of white dots around it, making it look really low quality. But it's overall very well done.​

Dusknoir's picture looks good, but the white dots detract from the appearance. The text at the very bottom is incredibly difficult to read. The text is just low-quality. And you spelled Pokémon with a lower-cased 'p'. And 'Duskoir lv.X' should be 'Dusknoir LV. X'.​

i'll try to make the quility of the text better, and i'll change the p and lv. X. they should be up later and mabey another 1 or 2.

 

[PalkiaSpace]

wooh! good news! i got better quility text on Bulbasaur and Dusknoir lv. X
and i have a steelix and steelix lv. X in the making.
(probably by tomarrow)

 

[PalkiaSpace]

and i have a steelix and steelix lv. X in the making.
(probably by tomarrow)

i can't find a good picture for steelix, but i made a good one for lv. X, so i'll do the steelix another time.

 

[PalkiaSpace]

got onix instead. Steelix Lv. X is a pain. but so far it's good.

 

[Gabrieldudenas]

Congratulations! That Onix is great!

 

[PalkiaSpace]

Congratulations! That Onix is great!

Thanks! :)



ps. i think you guys will love the steelix lv. x

 

[Empty Pot]

I think they are all really good but I only find 2 things distracting me from thinking it is perfect.

1. Renders are not the best, some have the dreaded white line.
2. The energy symbols look jagged. Looks like some of it was cut off

But other then that, it looks great.

 

[PalkiaSpace]

Here's steelix lv. X! the reason why where the name steelix isn't in the box at the bottom for lv. x's is becuase i couldn't write it right and it looked stupid the way i had it so i just scribbled it out with the colors.



Coming soon is......

Spoiler:

skorupi, sinnoh starters, or johto starters. (i havn't decided.)

 

[PalkiaSpace]

heres a stupid bidoof. i got bored and drew a bidoof like a month ago and i figured, i have my own art already, so why don't i put it on a card?

i finally found sp blanks so i'll start doing them.

 

[Potter65]

Electivire
SCORE:
Bad (11)