KERZAP! Magneton

[shadow_bind]

Phew, this is the third card-faking forum I am joining and the first time I am posting. Take a look at my Magneton:

This is also my first time making a fake card which I think looks decent enough. The drawing is by me...don't say I stole it from somewhere else, OK? Comments are appreciated :P.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

Yes well, it would be nice to include the original illustator.

But for your firist card you did a nice job. Good placement, good creativity. I see the energies are off the circles, which, before anyone says something, is okay. This is because the effect text is at it's smallest on the traditional TCG card. If energies need to lifted, they can be. Good work. I give you 9/10. The illus. thing bugs me.

 

[shadow_bind]

Thanks King Shuckle for your comment. However, I don't think you understood what I said about the illustrator...I drew this Magneton for Serebii's Fan Art forum sometime back, so I just didn't want people saying that I stole this art from somewhere else.

 

[Gokey Shuckle]

Oh my mistake. then your rating shall be 10/10 :D

Nice card for a beginner. Your very good at art.

 

[QFred]

Hey, if you pointed those errors, you shouldn't give him those much points, some times you're too mercifull...

I give it a 9,3/10, anyways...

I like it, it show it's not Sugimori's, because of the lack of white, but it looks like the anime's one, just a little darker a greener (yes, I think is a lil' too green)!!!!!!

Post your drawing here on Pok?Community!!!!

 

[Jeremy???]

But, KS didn't talk about errors (besides the illus., which was later cleared up...).
~Kalkris