King Zeon's Sprite Comics

[Karasuma]

- There is WAY too much profanity. And the curses you use are some of the worse ones. >_< I, myself, have used swearing once or twice in Pok?Chow, but it's usually part of a joke, and it hasn't been so often. All these f-bombs are a real turn-off for me to continue reading...

- Nicely laid out, and it's pretty visually appealing for having text boxes beneath the panels.

Well yeah Pokechow is funny.

But you don't understand, he's just beginning as a sprite comic maker and is doing a good job. He's got potential and I know that with time he's gonna get better and better. Heck, even better than the master :nervous:

 

[King Zeon]

Eh, now that you mention it, I do use profanity too much in the comics. Thanks for opening my eyes, Blue, I'll try to tone it down in the next one.

 

[blueguy]

Eh, now that you mention it, I do use profanity too much in the comics. Thanks for opening my eyes, Blue, I'll try to tone it down in the next one.

My ears thank you. ;) I really like the whole concept of this. It's not as if a Pok?Academy is something new, but I hope you use this and make good on it!

 

[King Zeon]

Comic 4 is up and running. And this time, it's a serious one, hardly any jokes, except at the end. I thought I'd set a serious tone for a battle. Hope you like.

 

[blueguy]

Comic 4 is up and running. And this time, it's a serious one, hardly any jokes, except at the end. I thought I'd set a serious tone for a battle. Hope you like.

That's a pretty good one! My advice is to make backsprites for your main characters. It isn't too hard... but it looks odd to see both trainers facing you. :P I think I like this one the best... but maybe the seriousness was just a little too austere... Keep up the good work!

I give Comic 4 a 7.5/10

 

[King Zeon]

I only do that when they have another Trainer next to them or when they have their Pokemon already out. When it's just the main Trainer, then I use their back Sprite.

 

[blueguy]

I only do that when they have another Trainer next to them or when they have their Pokemon already out. When it's just the main Trainer, then I use their back Sprite.

When the trainer has their pok?mon out, I would have the trainer's backsprite and the pok?mon's backsprite, but it's up to you, of course...

Here's some more comments...

- I love the pok?mon arena! Very well done...
- Why does Vedner have a Ditto if he's a Psychic-type master?

 

[King Zeon]

Ah, I knew someone would ask that question. Zachery answered that in Comic 4. He uses a Ditto so he doesn't have to worry about the annoying type disadvantages of Psychic Pokemon, while also gaining an advantage against the opponent's Type by Transforming into them. That and I thought it would be funny to have a Psychic Master start off with a Pokemon no one would expect.

 

[King Boo]

Ah, I knew someone would ask that question. Zachery answered that in Comic 4. He uses a Ditto so he doesn't have to worry about the annoying type disadvantages of Psychic Pokemon, while also gaining an advantage against the opponent's Type by Transforming into them. That and I thought it would be funny to have a Psychic Master start off with a Pokemon no one would expect.

Ture!,so has the comics comming along?

 

[King Zeon]

Patience, my young Rayquaza. I was busy doing so requests before I started on the comic, because once I finsih the comic and update it, I'm going to bed. It's like 2:11 here. In the morning, I might add, xD.

 

[King Zeon]

Comic 5 is finally up! And now I bid eveyrone a good night, er....morning!

 

[blueguy]

Comic 5 is finally up! And now I bid eveyrone a good night, er....morning!

Nice new episode! Strange that these Psychic dudes have some sort of master plan... One thing... I think that the Academy should have just about everything in it, say like a boarding school? That would see cooler to me. So... say the pok?mon center is inside the school?

 

[Recknin]

wow,great comic*can't wait for more*

 

[Karasuma]

Nice 2 eppys there my pupil. I love how you make those back sprites and those attack sprites.

 

[blueguy]

Nice 2 eppys there my pupil. I love how you make those back sprites and those attack sprites.

Why do you keep calling him your "pupil" and "apprentice"...? I find it sort of creepy. *shudders* ;)

 

[King Zeon]

XD! He's my Sensei in Spriting, he taught me alot of the stuff I use in my Comics, indirect or not. Though at times, I do wish he'd call me by my name, lol. Anyway, Comic 6 is up, the battle between Nero and Zeon. This took alot longer than the other battle, let me tell ya...

 

[King Zeon]

Comic 6 apparently didn't come out right, so I have to edit it abit, so if you want to see it's full glory, don't click on the link just yet.

 

[King Zeon]

Ugh, triple posting, can't believe I'm doing this, but it's required. Comic 6 is fixed, so yeah, you guys can look at it.

 

[Karasuma]

Pupil or King Zeon, its not good to triple post, a good SC knows that. but I must say that eppy 6 is cool with a lot of attacks. keep it up.

 

[blueguy]

Pupil or King Zeon, its not good to triple post, a good SC knows that. but I must say that eppy 6 is cool with a lot of attacks. keep it up.

If you truely have to, it's not that bad.

Anyways... here is my thorough critique of Issue 6:

First off, you should find a more attractive way to display a trainer's name. It clashes with the style of the sprites and background. Secondly, the word is impending not unpending. I don't think '****ation' should be capitalized.

When the Psychic Bro. says "Oh, really? You doubt a psychic's vision? Foolish. You really are a simple-minded bastard." the italicized text comes off as cheesy. If this boy is really intelligent he should come up with something more witty, than something as blunt as that.

Overall a nice episode. It would be good to have some shots of the arena mixed with the inbattle screens though.