La Verite Choque

[EliteGallade]

La Verite Choque​

My first fanfic, I will take any criticism about anything, well here we go…

Prologue
Oghaecko was 6 year old kid in 1991. He was living on the street since he was a baby because his parents abandoned him. He was taken in by a kind loving husband and wife called Elmissale(lady) and Vaerdan(man). They looked after him for the rest of his life and gradually forgot about his terrible past. They kept him fed, they bought him things to do and they treated him like he was their own.
1 year later they started taking him to school, he was a bit late going in to school at 7 years old. Despite this he was still one of the top in the class and loved the class pet Pichu. Everytime he got back home, he went through a routine like we all do everyday.
Although, 1 night, when he was eating his Tea(you might call it dinner) his `parents` broke the horrible truth to him…
Its only short but this is just to see what people think about it and my writing skills, please try and correct my mistakes and give me advice. As I said earlier any criticism will be taken.

Chapter 1​

`The truth is,` began Elmissale.` We found you on the streets living rough in a dark alleyway, all on your own when you were 6 years old.`
`What!`Oghaecko shouted.`What do you mean you found me on the streets!`
`Oghaecko, we`re sorry, we thought that you would be able to cope with the news.`Vaerdan said.
`Who are my real parents?!`Oghaecko yelled.
``How do you expect us to know, we thought it would be better for your life if we did this for you and it is isn't it?`Elmissale told him.
`I know, but why didnt you tell me at some other point?!`
This situation was beginning to make things really quite bad....

Oghaecko ran out of the front door, not stopping not untill he got to Armagan Forest .
He bent down, hands on his knees with tears streaming from his eyes, breathing heavily.
`What did I do to deserve this?`Oghaecko questioned himself.
As he was saying these very words, a pair of glowing eyes appeared in the bushes, yet Oghaecko did not notice them. Although, wherever he seemed to walk the eyes were following him...

He eventually reached a clearing, where there wasnt much around except for some soft moss to sit on. He sat down and starting feeling sorry for himself. As he was deep in thought lying down with his eyes closed, he heard a rustle in the bushes behind him. He jumped up and backed away a couple of paces. A Manectric pounced out with so much static you could actually feel it in the air. Oghaecko went to run away from it but he Manectric blocked his path and stared at him with its deep menacing gold coloured eyes...

La Verite Choque
Chapter 2​

2nd chapter! yay, I personally, think this is quite good...

Oghaecko made a break for it, he ran as fast as he could through the tangled grass, although Manectric was faster. As a last resort he grabbed a stick and a rock and threw them at the Manectric. As they were just halfway through the air, Manectric unleashed a shockwave attack that fried the stick and rock, then tackled Oghaecko to the ground. He gulped, `oh dear god, please no`he cried and shielded his head with his hands and hoped he would live...

Surprisingly, the Manectric got off him. Huh?Oghaecko thought. Why did it get off me? A ultra ball fell in front of him. Wait, where did that come from? He thought. He threw it, knowing that it wouldn't get catch it. The ball sucked in Manectric with a beam of red light, it rolled once, twice, three times! Oh my God, he thought. I might actually catch the Manectric! Maybe the thorny bushes hurt as it was running through? The ultra ball made a `click` sound and the Manectric was caught! `YES!` Oghaecko shouted. `Alright!`
For some reason though, the Manectric broke out! `WHAT!` He complained. `How did that happen?!`
`I REALLY HATE CONFINEMENT`Manectric shouted.
`Wait a sec, you can talk?!` Oghacko exclaimed. `But you`re just a Pokemon!`
`My name is Radychu!`he said.`Usually i`m really friendly but you sat on my home!`
Oghaecko remembered the moss he sat on.
`Whoops, i didn't know that was your home, i just thought it was a pile of mossy rocks and stuff.`Oghaecko apologised.`Sorry`
`Hmmmm, i suppose i`ll make an exception this one time.`Radychu said.` Wait, you just caught me, that means...`
`You`re my very own Pokemon!`Oghaecko exclaimed really happily.`YES!`
`Alright, just don't put me in that damn capsule again.`
`Fine, I won`t.` Oghaecko promised.
`Good, so where do we go to then?`Radychu questioned.
`I guess that i never thought about that.` said Oghaecko.`Do you know any towns?`
`I`m a Pokemon so how do you expect me to know?`Radychu retorted. `But, there was a Pokemon trainer that came along with a town map that they dropped, i think that the nearest to here is A-mer-gun city.`
`Oh, you mean Armagan city!`Oghaecko remembered.` I should have known, if there is a forest then there is usually a city as well!`
`Problem is though, Armagan city is at the bottom of this cliff...`Radychu said.
`Oh, that is a problem.`Oghaecko said sadly as he was looking at the city gates at the bottom of the cliff.
`We`ll have to go round then i guess...`Radychu said.
One thing that still puzzled Oghaecko though, was where did that ultra ball come from?

Here we go with chapter 3 then...

"Go round!"Oghaecko said, slapping his head. "Why me?"
"Do you have any better ideas?!"Radychu exclaimed.
"I suppose not."Oghaecko said."We could slide down the cliff face and..."
"No, just no."Radychu exclaimed.
"Alright then i guess."Oghaecko groaned."I suppose i`ll have to get used to all this walking anyway won`t I?"
"Exactly!"Radychu started." Let`s start walking!"
As he and Radychu were walking Oghaecko started to think about the ultra ball. 'I wonder where it came from?' He thought. 'It can`t have just appeared out of nowhere...'
His feet were treading through the grass as if they had a mind of there own. He noticed a sound coming from up in the trees.
"What was that?!"Oghaecko blurted out.
"What was what?"Radychu questioned.
"That sound, didn't you hear it, it came from the trees."Oghaecko said, slightly scared.
What looked like a Pokemon trainer jumped down from the trees to the ground. It was a girl, with long blonde hair and a necklace with a capsule on the bottom. She was wearing some baggy combat trousers and a T-shirt with a jacket over them without the zip done up.
"I`m the one who threw down the ultra ball for you to catch the Manectric with!" The girl said. "My names Sally and compared to your name mine is as normal as it gets!"
"Hey, shut the hell up! Wait, how do you know my name?"Oghaecko retorted.
"I know a lot about you and i also know the location, of your parents!" She exclaimed.
"What, take me to them now!"Oghaecko shouted angrily.
"Hey chill, i was just joking!"Sally answered back.
"Joking!? Joking about something like that!?"Oghaecko scowled. " You horrible little...!"
"Wait a second, there is no need for bad language!"Sally said. "I said i don`t know the location of your parents but i do know who is holding them captive and has been for all these years."
"Well tell me that then!" Oghaecko wouldn't take no for an answer at the moment.
"I`ll tell you if you can beat me in a Pokemon battle!"Sally shouted.
"Alright then, here i come!"Oghaecko shouted back.
BATTLE START
Radychu started right off the bat with the command of a spark attack.
"Not so fast you!"Sally said. I haven't sent out mine yet! Go Squirtle!"
"Big mistake!" Radychu said. "Squirtle is a water type and i`m an electric type! I`ve got a type advantage!"
The spark attack carried on with a a tackle shrouded in electricity. Squirtle was hit and went flying into the tree.
"Squirtle!"Squirtle cried out as he fainted.
BATTLE END
"What?!"Sally shouted.
"Yahoo!"Oghaecko celebrated."We won!"
"The people who are holding your parents captive are called Team Tecton."Sally said.
"Well thats one thing i know that i`m going to end up doing..."Oghaecko began."I`m going to find Team Tecton and get my parents back!"
As they reached Armagan city, Radychu saw a member of Team Tecton.
"Oghaecko! There is a member right there!"

Well, what does everyone think?