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Larvitar's Wondrous Group of Numbskulls!

Cherish_Darkrai

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    Apparently everybody hates me so I am completely removing it. Thank you for flaming me...
     
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    It lacked a plot and seemed to be a little too fast paced, but i suppose that's the humor in it.:laugh:
     
    Please stop reading this. There is no point to it. Everybody hated it so I dont want you to fall victim to it.
     
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    Seemd pretty fast paced and unorganized. Maybe have speech in bubbles under the picture? Or at least not have the lines running over the sprites themselves.

    Makes you wonder where the story is going, though. Keep it up.

    And, correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't this belong in pixel projects? ^^;;
     
    Ye is correct Tangerine Fox. Moving to Pixel Projects (don't really see how this relates to manga anyway).
     
    You pretty much stole Shedinja from Jiggly Puffs Merry Band of Idiots. Same goes for your name. And the plot. So not much of this is actually yours.

    Never use two tone background. Not only does it make you look n00bish and slightly lazy, but it makes our eyes burn. It seems everything you did was just done with paint in two seconds. Try actually putting work into your comics, rather than throwing them together.
    I'm rather ashamed of you. You use someone elses plot, idea, and basis of a character, and then when you remake it you make it look bad. Tsk, tsk.
     
    Is this a comic of a comic???? I just realized!

    Is this a comic of a comic???? I just realized!

    Craaap...I didn't mean to double post!!!!
     
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    Ahhhh..My eyes bleed....

    PLEASE save as PNG. next time.
     
    Well normaly people don't use the Paint colors in the box.

    (Black and white is okay to use)

    Anyway it's a bit hard to see what they are saying and as said can you save it on PNG?

    ---A.R.    ​
     
    ... Thank you for flaming me...
     
    I didn't flame you. The person who said their eyes were bleeding flamed you, although unintentionally. The person who posted above you didn't flame you. The person above the person with the bleeding eyes didn't flame you.

    That means no one really flamed you. 0.0;;

    And before you respond saying i flamed you, I didn't. Flaming you would have to be directly insulting you and your skill, which I didn't do. I posted somewhat harsh C+C, but that's because you put so little effort into this. You have to think hard about your own ideas. Stealing someone else's work, giving it another name and one or two different ideas isn't effort. Sure, you put it all together, but it's still not effort, because effort means that you worked hard the entire way through. The entire way. Entire. Not just the last part.

    So, for removing your comic because you just can't take C+C is probably worse, far worse, and putting up your comic. To post your work, you gotta be able to accept what people say about it. You can't just walk around and when someone gives you crit you say everyone hates you. If the elitist Critics were still here, then you would have the right to say everyone hates you. But they aren't.
     
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