very nice, very, very, nice. my favorite is the second one, but... the bg's a bit too blurred. the first one is pretty good, but... text is a bit hard to read. oh, and, the part where it says Ichigo... the orange behind it should end at the black line... to make it look a little less choppy. 3rd one's my least favorite. (not that it's bad) it's hard to explain, but the bg is sort of... hmm, how should i say this? it's not very consistent... sharpness, then blurry, then sharp again... oh, and red would have fit Edward Elric more *twitch*
EDIT: i forgot the last one xD... really good, all i have to say on how to improve is... the border. put, perhaps, a low opacity white stroke (1 px, of course) to match the diagonal lines.